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| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] | | Pages (36): [ « ‹ 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 › » ] | Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 17:55 PST
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great chapter. kouga is soooooo dense! i hope he gets told off royaly.
| Title: Latest chap
Reviewed By: InuBaby369246, not signed on On: January 04, 2006 16:09 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an evil cliffie! You know that, right? I was wondering when we'd hear about Miroku and Sango again. when are they goig to find out that Sango's pregnant? That'll be a socker. Well, I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you had a nice holiday. Happy New Year! (even if I am a bit late!)
| Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: January 04, 2006 14:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...that was sweet. But ummm there were no limes or lemons. *shrug* oh well. I liked it but it was a little too short, so update soon ok ja.
| Reviewed By: jessbit On: January 02, 2006 01:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I lied again. New last thing. I'm probably goiing to sound really ignorant but I just have to know: what the heck is this pocky stuff I am hearing about?
| Reviewed By: jessbit On: January 02, 2006 01:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I thought you might be getting heaps of "I love your fic" sorta things and therefore didn't want to be another screaming fan but I can't help it. You write very well (in my opinion) and I do love your fic. In fact I was scolded a lot by my mum for hogging the computer so much. I read your fic in 7-12 hours over two days, it was so good I couldn't stop! Yeah, just some stuff;often are you planning on updating, so I don't have to check everyday; when is Kagome getting her period ordoes the moon symbol on Inuyasha's head symbolize his period of fertility, being the zenith moon and therefore making Kagome pregnant because she hasn't used the patch, correctly or not [silly Sango:)]; and if you aren't getting many reviews from anime spiral, its because you can't comment unless you have an account, which I find really annoying. In fact the whole site annoys me because I can only access it once a day before it stuffs up on me. Yeah, that's it. You write really good fictions. I hope you write others after this. Oh, I lied about before. New last thing: Is Naraku going to attack sometime soon, because you've kinda left him hanging in the past few chapters?
| Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: December 31, 2005 18:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea that mind meld thing would be really handy, especially during tests. ^.^ and thank you so much for changing it to Kirara and I'll gladly take all the pokey anyone throws my way!!!! This is a very interesting development and can anyone say Kouga's an idiot. You can't fight a portal of time and death with the spirit of the dead, it just makes things worse. God!!! Even Inuyasha would have figured that one out. But this is Kouga we're dealing with and he isn't exactly the brightest crayon in the box. *sigh* oh well, anyway update soon ok ja!!!
| Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 21:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I'm glad that you didn't delete it.
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 18:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh hey, Im not bugged by all the revisions, not at all, heh, I just didnt understand why they were being done is all. Hey, Im no expert on writing but I do know what I like and I think your story is fantastic. So whenever you update or revise a chapter, I read. Thanx much for a great story.
| Reviewed By: spienta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 12:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am totally addicted to this! You have great writing talents. I am a huge Inu fan and I don't think there is much OOC at all, they are all older in this fic, and I can see them all behaving the way you portray them. I can't wait for more!
| Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: December 29, 2005 00:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this!!!! ^.^ And that mating call thing is damn sexy!!! I loved the first time he did it when he was behind her and was nibbling her shoulder. Reminds me of my exboyfriend, *sigh* too bad reall guys can't growl. Anyway I'm so pleased to find another author who knows about Dragon Scale Tetsusaiga and everything. I'm so sick of having to explain everything to my friends because America is fucking slow. While I read the manga online so I'm all informed so they all look to me for answers. Anyway you are doing an amazing job, the only thing that bothers me is that you use the terrible viz translation and say Kilala instead of the correct Kirara. Anyway update soon ok ja!!!! ^.~
| Title: Hope u had a great Holiday
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 00:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I see you revised, Im still not understanding why this is always done, but,oh well. Still love the story, and has re-read it a few times now. Great story BTW. Cant wait till the next update. Hope your Christmas was good. Have a Happy New Year, too!
| Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 21:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic, update soon
| Reviewed By: Inaqui On: December 25, 2005 05:42 PST
Comment/Review:
Yo. Haha, fair warning? email is aenia_inaqui@yahoo.com.au *hands over another box of pocky* Haha, damn you have discovered my evil scheme, to make you fat! :p Or at least your virtual pocky eating self... Actually, the call that was confusing me was the Pack Call... was confusing it with the Pack Cry, because when InuYasha "thrummed" it (Sorry, I have odd visuals accompanying that word... don't ask...) I was confuzzled, after Sesshoumaru threatened dire consqequences should the half-breed dare challenge his leadership by using the Pack Cry. I dunno, I think it was the similar names that got me... Cos I was having a "whatchoo talkin'bout, Willis" moment there. :p As for the tono, I know you haven't described it yet, but just the fact that you CALLED it a tono and not a fortress, or palace, or luxury villa etc. You're...you're not going to give him *chokes* indoor plumbing are you? *sweat drops* The sword fight...I dunno... I understand your aversion to extra wordiness. Perhaps if in the beginning of the fight you shoved in a clarifier regarding the kata forms? Then it might be less confusing, and readers will have a reference point not the A/N. I dunno... you asked! Tensaiga vs Tenseiga...don't we all use Chris Rijk's stuff though? haha. I was gonna bring up Tetsusaiga's spelling but hey, you did it for me, haha. As to the latest chapter, I can't concrit lemons. But whoa, double feedback, eh? haha... Merry Whatever Holiday you follow!
| Reviewed By: Shobs On: December 23, 2005 09:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this version could have been placed on FF.net without fear of it being removed, but I suppose you might be pushing the 'R'/'M' rating a bit far... Anyway, wow! It's nice to be able to type a review without the keyboard sticking. I was using a monitered library computer so I couldn't exactly say what I wanted to, nor go look at this version. I'll get to the reviewing now. I liked your play of words for the lemon. ^_^ Oh, don't I sound rather perverse saying that? *shrugs* Anyway, I suppose my rating really covered what I thought of it. All I can say is the I really enjoyed reading the chapter (it was even better the second time around!), and I love the story. Thanks for sharing!
| Reviewed By: Ardent-Amber [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 05:44 PST
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Blah! Make me come all the way over here *grumble* Oh well I didn't expect it to be trashy, not based on your other chapters, and it was, well, really classy. I especially thought it cool how you used the mind meld in this scene, very effective! Can't wait for an update! Happy Holidays, and have a happy new year! ~Sami
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