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| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] | Title: Woah
Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 12:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOHHOOO Finally ^^ The next Chapter will tell her Story Yeah can´t wait to read it ^^ heheh MUhhh you are grilling me here, now I have to wait to read it MUHH. I have an Idea now what happend to her mates : I think she killed them but didn´t want to do it. I mean in this Chapter Kagome explains to Kikyo that her Soul is many many Years old and that it was reincarnated three times. Every times from a Powerfull Miko right ? ^^ So Mikos are Fighters against Demons and evil right ? So I think that Kagomes Soul trys to destroy the "evil Demon " that mated her to protect her. I mean I think that her Soul doesn´t want more Demons to come in the World and so they kill the Mates of Kagome to stop her from getting more Offspring from her Mate. Its just an Idea but I hope I will get the answers in the next Chapter ^^ And one more thing : I love your writing ^^ The Story is Great and the Places you describe are awesome too. And the way you let us in the Dark about the Murders is awesome too, because I read many Fics about Murders and in every one of them I always have known how was the Murder in the First 5 Chapters so Gratulation for your Great Mind ^^ I hope you will be writing more Fics after this one and I will bet they are Hiei/Kagome too ( I love this Pairing so much no other will do ) So I send my Thanks to you for this awesome Fic and hope You update soon ( UFF this was a Mouthfull now ^^ The longest Rewiew I ever wrote ^^ )
| Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 10:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD! I mean...GOOOOODDDDD!!! How do you manage to do it every chapter? I, in a million ways, admire your talent. I'm so freakin' jealous!!! I can't wait for the next chapter...this is so insane!!!! YAY!!!!
| Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 06:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad you're back! You're right, you ARE evil. Sneaky too. *grin* Beautifully written, I still want to "fix" kurama though. Fight scene, wonderful, fitting really. Kag certainly told her. Rofl, ye old "red string" crap, I love it... wonder what Kuwabara'd think of Hiei's intended use if he manages to grab the thing... Zhang is probably deciding where to lie low for a day or so til those two stop blowing eachother up... Hell of a cliffie, :/ and I forgot my tea rule.. Red string bondage and tea don't mix with keyboard!!!!!!!!! Looking forward to the next one..
| Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 03:13 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007art.html http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007.html Check these out to find out what you were nominated for! And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open October 17, 2007 - November 1, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Winners will be notified by me after November 1st. ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association Note: If you get this notification more than once, it means you have been nominated for more than 1 award.
| Reviewed By: The Daimyo On: October 24, 2007 02:56 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007art.html http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007.html Check these out to find out what you were nominated for! And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open October 17, 2007 - November 1, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Winners will be notified by me after November 1st. ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association Note: If you get this notification more than once, it means you have been nominated for more than 1 award.
| Reviewed By: Anonymous2468 On: October 23, 2007 10:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!!
| Title: Where r u?
Reviewed By: Ebi-chan On: October 10, 2007 21:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You haven't updated in forever!! Please, please be ok!! I don't want to rush you and bug you for the next chapter (even if my withdrawls have gotten to the point where I may need to be hospitalized) I just want to make sure everything's ok. I hope you and your family are well and that only something really great is keeping you away!! Hopefully you aren't suffering from writers block - and you'll be updating soon with a kick-ass chapter that's like 100 pages long!! LOL. Anyway, hope you'll be updating soon - I miss you *cries*. Well Wishes, Ebi-chan
| Title: Waiting...
Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 13:54 EDT
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Sigh. I don't like rushing people, so please don't think that I am, but I hadn't checked back in awhile due to some real-life happenings, and I thought for sure that you'd have updated by now. I'll admit it was a let-down...but genius takes time, eh? ^.^ I hope you're enjoying writing this chapter as much as you thought you would. Hopefully you'll have a brand new fantastic, miles-long chapter for us soon! In the meantime, thanks for writing and take care!
| Title: Great Day in the Miko-ville , ch 12
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 11:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not only did I grab a snack, I had breakfast lunch and dinner enjoying this chapter. It was well worth the wait and all your talents. I think with the way you write about Hiei and Kagome pairing, it is going to create quite a stir! But this chapter is so phenomenal! I was waiting for this to happen where the two of them would miss the mark with each other. I mean he know what he want, and so does she. It's always the little things misunderstandings give birth to. I always wonder if there are others that knows of their relationship and just not saying. Ummmmm... And Ayame got dusted off! Whoa! That wolf guy give me the willy-nillies!!! I knew he was crap. Now that he gave Kags this ultimatum, well I won't worry about him he's got enough going against him. Whoa wait, Kurama's room!!!!!Oh Hail-Naw!!! Really? Well I guess I have to wait to see what's in store. I know what you mean about music being a influence when writing. You've picked some great ones. I wish I had the drawing talent to do your story justice. I would love to. You've written wonderful scenes that just scream DRAW ME, DRAW ME! But the artist Sardave has done a terrific job on your stories. Truly talented. Again I want to thank you for reading my story. I'm honored that you also gave my story a shout-out to others. You are truly wonderful. The mysteries surrounding this story is tingling my spine as it is suppose to do. With great anticipation for your next installment, Peace!
| Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 23:30 EDT
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ahhh so intense!!! omg so much is happeneing rite now. the real fight is about to start, kagome is avoiding hiei, kurama is seducing kagome.... omg i can't wait til the next chapter!!
| Title: WHY???? -sob-
Reviewed By: Youkai Goddess On: August 27, 2007 17:57 EDT
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I can't believe you did that. I think I might cry if you actually make her go through with it. She wouldn't-she can't- NO!!! Seriously. I loved it up till that moment... you can't do that to Hiei! Bye, Bye, Ayame. What she said has somemerit. If Yemon got curious and asked a Healer... well, would he kill himself? He seems to kill everyone else he blames for not beingable to concieve... Maybe in a more humourous fic, huh? No, really, please make Kagome stop. It would completely ruin the foundation of Hiei and Kagome's relaionship. Kagome may have orgiven Hiei, but she would always doubt herself... and Hiei isn't that forgiving; it isn't in his nature. Just, please, I'm BEGGING you, oh Mighty One, DON'T DO IT! Why is Kagome so worried about going to Reikai for her mate's deaths, even though we all know that it would make her wildly unbelievably out of character... Unless she blames herself and believes she indirectly caused their deaths? Well, a bit obvious thatshe does, but... Man, yopu sure know how to leave someone in suspence. Thanks for being awesome! BTW, I loved the drawings in your art gallery, but mostlythe one where Hiei has his arms wrapped around Kagome, and they have their eyes closed... contement? it's called something like that... I'mnot sure wether you drew itornot, but awesome, anyway. The long chapters may take forever to get through... but I luv 'em anyway! You get so much cleared up, but continue to shroud things in mystery... though my father is always shouting at me for takng up the phoneline... (dial up)Than again, Rod is always yelling,so it's just something to add to the list! ^_^ can't wait to move out... but that's irelevant. Talk to ya next chapter! Luv ya lots, ~Youkai Goddess~
| Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 12:36 EDT
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DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT!!! THIS IS NOT HOW THINGS WERE SUPPOSED TO WORK AT ALL!!!!!! KEEP WRITING MORE!!!!
| Reviewed By: Sammy36 On: August 27, 2007 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome and Hiel just had all the great moments and then a small bump in the road and now she's in Kuruma room. Maybe something happening is all right but not all sex with them because that's harsh considering she's being drugged anyways and it doesn't fit Kagome character at all. Love and letss read more please.
| Reviewed By: Sammy36 On: August 27, 2007 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome and Hiel just had all the great moments and then a small bump in the road and now she's in Kuruma room. Maybe something happening is all right but not all sex with them because that's harsh considering she's being drugged anyways and it doesn't fit Kagome character at all. Love and letss read more please.
| Reviewed By: kitsune_youkai_jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 11:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update now i have to know who went to kurama's room ^_^ can't wait for the next update!
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