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| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: CALLING ALL FANS OF BWM
Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 18:36 PDT
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"I am MADMIKO and I approve this message" ** JUST KIDDING :-) but she did agree to my doing this. This isn't a review of BWM, but an announcement of Madmiko and Ryukotsusei's forum for a Hiei/Kagome discussion board called 'The Deadliest Sin.' It is at www.thedeadliestsin.proboards55.com ; They started it about 3 months ago. we could use lots of members to discuss different aspects of Hiei and Kagome's relationship. I have 2 BMW threads started. One is about Kagura and what she might know and the other is a hypothesis on who really fathered Ginjiro. That one is actually getting fewer hits and I think the title leads people to think it is a definite answer. It really isn't, but it is my analysis of the situation. I want to talk to people about their hypotheses not only on Ginjiro's father, but also on who killed Kagome's husbands. Ryukotsusei can't discuss it because Madmiko has talked to her. SO PLEASE COME join and throw your two cents into it. AND, if that isn't enough, they are running a contest for members of the board with real prizes (deadline October 31) to create new Hiei/Kagome stories. First prize is a pair of Hiei and Kagome action figures. Now I shouldn't have told you about that ;-) that just means more competition for me. But seriously, check it out.
| Reviewed By: GuanTokai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 01:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I like to say that I've enjoyed this story since I found it. I must say that the mystery is a really great one and if you don't mind can I make a guess of the killer. that is if you don't mind though other wise I won't do so. Well I've also read a bit of your other works and I like them so good luck with the writing and have fun.
| Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 00:19 PDT
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this is a great story so far, i'm glad i found it. i hope i'm wrong about who the killer is, but i'll find out soon
| Title: *sigh*
Reviewed By: Vert On: September 02, 2008 19:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I didn't like your story so much, I'd hate you right now. Next time don't take so long. >.
| Reviewed By: DYquem (NSI) On: August 19, 2008 21:39 PDT
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I have figured out part of the difference between this story and a ton of others on the web, some of which are also well written. Reviews are basically a quid pro quo. "I enjoyed the story and will leave a review as payment." Most writers (even ones who say they are open to constructive criticism) want reviews which only fall into the Thumper category, from the movie Bambi. "if you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all." This story instills in me an entirely different attitude. I want to talk about it. I want to discuss it with others. "What did you think about the time Kurama did this, or Zhang said that." I want to hear what others think and what theories they have on whodunit. I want to talk with others about the evidence I see for one position or another, and have them help support it, or reject it with evidence from the story that I've missed. It is a truly rare story to create that kind of interest. If it is doable, you might consider creating some sort of a forum for your next story, so people can do just that. IMO, an entire panel at a SF or anime convention could be taken up with a panel discussion/debate on this story.
| Title: Marital Bliss!
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 19:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me first say that I'm sorry for your loss. So much in a few months. I did miss you. I hope and trust everyone is fairing well. As for your story...Wow! your description of the wedding was beautiful. Although it was a small ceremony, you gave it all the majestic feel of a large one. Really Beautiful! I think if circumstances were different, and her sons could be in attendance, you would have given it the beauty deserving of a full ceremony. I can only imagine what you would have had her handsome sons decked out in. Poor Hiei, gotta maintain his instincts.(He can't freely get his groove on girl!) And Hey what the heck is wrong with Kurama/Youko? Do he and Shippo really want to duel it out? What I can't wait to know is who is trying to frame Kagome of course, and do Sesshomaru really have a son by Kagura? This is really bugging me out!:p I guess I'll have to wait. I love this story as you know. I must apologize for not getting to read this sooner. RLI is crowing my head as well. My days are not my own. But I congratulate you on the nominations that is deserving. This is a wonderful cross-over. Peace to you and your family always.
| Reviewed By: inuyashagirl5 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 21:01 PDT
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My review is late because mediaminer decided I wasn't cool enough to get an e-mail saying you updated. *poutpout* Anyways, it took me about an hour to read the chapter because my boyfriend doesn't know the meaning of "Quiet I'm reading something important!!" The chapter was wonderful, funny, beautiful and suspenseful all rolled up in a very creative, entertaining manner. You are definitely the Empress of the Hiei/Kagome pairing. >w<
Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to more~!
| Reviewed By: river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 22:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WooHoo!!! (dances like a monkey) Thank-you!! and thanks Ryukotsusei for encouraging her ;) But there are still mysteries to be solved, so I am waiting for more... Thanks for sharing your vision!!
| Reviewed By: songbird_1025 On: August 11, 2008 21:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY! I LOVE THIS STORY! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I was waiting so lokng to finally see how all of this would play out and I must say I and thoughly impressed. Keep up the great work and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon.
| Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 08:47 PDT
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my condolences, i hope your kids are ok and theyhad fun in disney world. i never got to go. the storyis as amazing as usual. take as long as you need to write just don't stop!!!
| Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 19:22 PDT
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Anyway, as I was saying, the attempted Kurama-kebab was way too clumsy to be the real thing, but somebody is obviously trying to set her up, and why try it by killing someone who doesn't fit the formula? Do you see what I'm saying? They had to think she was sleeping with Kurama to think that killing him would continue the pattern. On the other hand, they might have done it knowing that he would live, and that it would just solidify his suspicions of her--in that case, only not knowing she had an airtight Hiei-shaped alibi kept it from succeeding. On the OTHER other hand, wouldn't Kurama normally be a little more clear-headed about this? I mean, I see him as the type of guy to recognize that it DIDN'T fit the previous pattern and stop to consider other possibilities...like a shape-shifter or a hallucinogen or something. Maybe he's only NOT considering these things because he's personally ticked at her for NOT sleeping with him... Ugh, this is a long and convoluted road and my feet hurt already. Back to what I was thinking about before. I laughed myself off my chair about Hojo dumping Kagome! That was so...so Hojo. And then Hiei drinking him off his chair...priceless! Ah, well. It was good of him to sit through the lunch at all, and Hojo IS annoying. And clueless. Hm...I want to know who else it was that noticed Hiei's concern when Byakuya dropped her besides Sassouta. Dammit, there are just too many variables in this monstrosity of a story! It isn't just finding the real killer, it could very well be finding the real killerS, and nothing says there aren't other people out to get Kagome as well. It could have been anybody, friend or foe, and yet the way it was just slipped in there so subtly makes me think it HAS to be important! But that could just be you trying to drive me crazy! In which case...good job. >.< You've been doing a bang-up job of THAT task all along. One last thing-with the cat out of the bag, will Hiei and Kagome come clean to everybody? Just the Spirit Detectives? And how much will anyone know? At bare minimum, the three other SDs know that they're sleeping together, but no more-god, and you couldn't have given me five more minutes of story time so I wouldn't have to wonder, could you, Cliffhanger Claire? ...If you don't like your new nickname, blame my lack of sleep and your own frustrating-but awesome-story. ^_^ Cheers regardless of inner turmoil!
| Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 19:19 PDT
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Hoooboy. Here we go--I'm just going to skim through the chapter to comment (commentate?) and try not to miss anything. ^_^ I'm SO glad she agreed to marry him, but I definitely didn't expect it to happen so fast. I don't know why I didn't--I mean, it's Hiei; once he makes a decision, why wait to act on it? But circumstances being what they are, I guess I expected it to be more difficult to pull off. It was absolutely beautiful though. I think it was my favorite fic-wedding to date, and considering the sheer numbers of those out there, that's saying something. And add in the honeymoon--it was just beautiful. I'm not going to muddy it up by picking it apart, it was just beautiful. I know I said before (er, I think I said before?) that maybe, maaayybe Sesshoumaru WAS being drugged and THAT was how Ginjiro happened, but I read DY's review (I kind of had to, I was mesmerized by the length of the thing) and I think that theory of Sesshoumaru's mother having another child might just hold water. It seems to fit with the aura business. Usual disclaimer applies though--it's your fic, your world, your rules, so maybe you've got something else up your sleeve that will make perfect sense once you finally let us in on the gag. >.< That's what usually happens to ME anyway, I don't know about the rest of your readers! However--fast-forward to the end for this one--I don't think I agree with the one about Kagura trying to off Kurama because she was jealous. I don't have a solid idea who it was yet--heck, it COULD be Kagura--but I do think that whoever it was thought that Kagome was sleeping with him (too?). It almost seems like a copycat of the murders of her mates...way too clumsy (he lived...which I'm a little sorry about, in this fic >..< That's been pretty much a constant since I started reading...ugh, out of space, hang on.
| Title: Damn!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lady_MidNight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 00:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN it has taken me four days on and off to finish the 15 chapters of the massive fic and i am by no means a slow reader. i have only ever come across one other such fic containg this pairing. that was as epic and attictive to read that fic being "on the night of the blood red moon" i could brealy put my lap top down these last few days ive started when i woke in the moring and contiuned to read till around 3 in the morring. it is rare i find such a well writen story.and such an ending to chap 15 you have me bcning in my skin tyring to think of how it will unfold. if i had not been on the receving end of you epic chapters for the last four day. i would not belive it could all be concluded in the two chapters you hope to. but really i dont care how many it takes i just hope they come in a relativly fast sucsecion of each other.
| Reviewed By: silver_hollows [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 19:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter as always (it was worth the wait). I loved Kagome's possesive moment, it fit her perfectly. I can't wait to find out what happens when Hiei confesses. Please post the next chapter as soon as you can.
| Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 19:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHH! It gets better an dbetter.Kick kurama's ass Hiei! Woah, ilove this story way too much. It's been forever since your last update. Please, try to write more soon.
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