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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 12:51 EDT
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Poor Miroku, trying to taper down his casual sex habit...LOL...and then trying to justify why he doesn't need to behave quite yet! I have been reading this through and there's a certain level of innocence that Kagome has that is refreshing, contrasted to the soul-weariness that IY projects. Is this an important jump in their relationship, that she is now a member of InuYasha's new moon companions? Her lamb and Miroku's satyr...what a combo for friends for those nights!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 12:36 EDT
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This story is so sweet! I love the way that you are writing the characters with their strengths and weaknesses. I eagerly wait for more chapters. Thanks for sharing your story!
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 23:23 EDT
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Hmm...for some reason I thought I'd reviewed this before, but I guess I didn't. I've really enjoyed all of the chapters so far and love how you modernized all the characters. I found it very amusing that Kouga was a rival dojo sensei...and that he got slapped. And I just about despise any form of Kikyo and I must say that this one is no different. Kudos for writing such and entertaining fic and I look forward to reading more soon. Thanx for sharin'! ^_^
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Reviewed By: alexus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 16:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story, I am really enjoying it. Keep up the good work.
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Title: thank you
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 15:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fan-bloody-tastic!!!! wow how do you do it? not even a break from completing a wonderful series. and you just keep reeling us in to your web of fic's. This is a great chapter the way his students and parents acted to Inuyasha wow,we all love to see him get love back for all he does. Oh I can't wait to read your next chapter. as well to your other chapters, fantastic. Oh and Kikyou going down, someone gotta put her in the gutter. and Oh thanks for the mentioning of Sesshomaru is he going to make an appearing after what happen? see things I need to know. UPDATE REALLY SOON! (^_^)
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 13:54 EDT
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This is a really neat story. I don't know why I didn't start it before, because I always love your work. And any chapter that has Kikyou coming off looking like a bitch to Inuyasha makes me smile. I'm so glad he isn't mooning over her in this. I liked the tidbit about her trying to land Sess first. And, naturally, I am really relieved that they weren't intimate when they were together. Your stories, no matter what the setting, are one of the few things that make me love anew the canon couple of Inuyasha and Kagome. I get very frustrated with the direction the manga has taken, and find it so much more satisfying to have you take me on a journey where things turn out the way they should. Thank you for that!
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 12:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I love it when someone plans something nasty and it blows up in their face. Poetic justice is sweet. Now, if you can just get Inuyasha over his no dating students policy that part of the story will be pretty much over and you can get into Sango and Miroku fully. I'm not complaining. I love the story the way it is. Later.
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Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 04:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Somehow you're always gifted at making me hate kouga and kikyou more then ever, and while still enthralling me with your stories, looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this particular piece. while it does deal with inuyasha, it seems to be more focused on miroku and sango. i had hoped to see something of sesshoumaru (not with rin, maybe with an oc) but as it hangs, it hangs together nicely. i see that miroku has retained his original character although the setting has changed. i like the idea of inu handling a dojo (although i get flashbacks to ranma 1/2), you have made the dojo something of his character. and kikyo is evil. hmmmm. interesting. she is, or should i say, she was. and kouga is a rival (once again). you echo the feudal era quite nicely so YES, i am liking this AU a lot. i dont think i've had the time to comment but i found a quiet moment at work to read the update and comment.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 22:41 EDT
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Kikyo in this story is such an ugly person...But something deep in me was pleased by Kouga getting slapped, and the loyalty of people to InuYasha.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 22:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Kikyo's a real .....WITCH, isn't she?! I can't stand bigots, and what she and Kouga tried to do to Inuyasha was unforgivable. She'd already broken his heart, and nearly ruined him once. What more does she want from the guy. Vindictive tramp! But, like Mirkou said, her vicious little attmept backfired on her big time. Instead of ruining Inuyasha, she instead inspired a show of loyalty to him that proves how wonderful he is. He may not have ever understood how much his friends and students cared about him if she hadn't attacked him like that. Maybe now, he'll start to heal, especially since he already knows that Kagome accepts him just the way he is. As for Miroku, this chapter proves that there is more to him than just being a human sex toy for women. He is a great friend, a very redeeming quality. Very nice chapter. And I look forward to reading more soon.
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter. You explained the loyalty well and it was good to see the reasoning behind Kikyou's animosity. My favorite part of this chapter was that you have made Miroku out to be a great and caring friend. Nice job!
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Title: AWESOME AS ALWAYS
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. But I love ALL of your stories. You are my favorite story writer and I will read most anything you write. You do write very well and are very talented. Keep up the terrific work. So how many more chapters til Inuyasha asks Kagome on a date? I can't wait for that. You write them so romantically. I can't wait to read that!!! Please update soon! I'm waiting patiently....
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 20:57 EDT
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Love this. The shock and outrage at Kikyo's cruelty, the sense of 'up yours' when the parents and students stood by IY, I felt it all. You have a wonderful way of storytelling, that always draws me in. More, more!
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [nsi] On: July 18, 2007 13:35 EDT
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wow. i loved that chappie. like the others, i'm glad u found a way to incorparate Kikyou and Kouga, but I'm more interested in seeing how Kikyou's going to play a role. I know it'll be something major. I can't wait to see how things will progress with Miroku and Sango. Please update soon. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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