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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 19:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another GREAT chapter. I really like how you worked Kirara into the story. That was a very good way to do it. And I can't tell you how much I enjoyed the progress with Inuyasha and Kagome. That was too adorable, especially when Kagome kissed him and rubbed his ear. It's so sweet seeing Inuyasha learn to trust again. I can't wait to see what else you do with the Inu/Kag part of the plot. I am spoiled rotten on that part; it's GREAT. As for Miro, his timing leaves MUCH to be desired. I like him too, but his stragulation doesn't sound too bad right now, LOL. Maybe his timing will improve when he finally makes some pregress with Sango. I definitely look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 07:15 EDT
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Nice chappy. I love the way you tossed in the part about the Shinto religion versus Buddhism, -- I don't see many fics where people even mention the fact that Kagome was raised on a Shinto shrine, while Miroku is a Buddhist monk. I've always thought that was rather amusing myself. (That's why I placed the taijiya village in the Kumano Mountains in "Black Widow Miko.") And you explained the differences in them so succinctly -- I really applaud you for that! So, now Kagome knows Inu's secret about his "night of weakness." And Miroku's thoughts about "cutting down" on his frequent sex life were interesting. Of the two of them, HE is the one who's really a dog. LOL!! It's really interesting that he's SUCH a "player," while Inu's so virginal. (I like my Inu that way! He should always be perfectly chaste until he gets together with Kagome. It's only fair. Of course, that's why it takes the two of them so long to hook up. LOL!) Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4kagome[not logged in =p] On: August 03, 2007 02:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving it. It was so funny when Mirou was gettin his freak on couple chapters back. My song el noche de sexo cameon. lol it was perfect i swear. ;] [p.s u know who this is .. its lazy r4k. Butheyy not my fault .. just worked out and myarms are lik..blah! hehehe ne who update soon . 'k?]
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Reviewed By: smich16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 06:45 EDT
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this a very well written story i like it very much, please continue. :)
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 01:59 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2007art.html http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2007.html And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open August 1, 2007 - August 15, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Winners will be notified by me after August 15th. ~ The Daimyo
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Reviewed By: charies On: July 31, 2007 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The storyline is captivating read and you leave us wanting more. four stars!
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Reviewed By: Inu Nagi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 22:19 EDT
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ahh poor Kagome always stumbling over the 'right' words to say at the right moment lol. good job as always :) -April
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 07:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I hate to sound like a broken record, but I love this story. I really like your portrayal of Inuyasha. He seems a lot like his anime self without the attitude, more like the times he gets introspective on the show. I look forward to more chapters.
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Reviewed By: saygoodnight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 03:07 EDT
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Awh, I hope you continue soon! I really like where this is going, it's different.
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 02:06 EDT
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:( Thats a mean place to leave off at. Seems a little bit like this is a filler chapter, not much happens other then Kagome accidentally saying I love you to Inuyasha (witch I didn't even notice until I red it through a second time, then I thought it was hilarious) I get the feeling that her slip up may play a larger part in the future of the story. *hint hint* Happy writing from the one and only strangeness Emily.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 20:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. And great progress on the Inu/Kag front. Inuyasha finally let Kagome in on his biggest secret. And it doesn't seem like either of them have realized the full siginificance of that. Unless Inuyasha trusted her immensely, she would never have found out his secret. And he also even made a slight move (interrupted by Miroku, dang it, lol). They are both so sweet, and they will make such a sweet couple....when one of them finally gets the nerve to make a real move, lol. As for Miroku, there really is more to him than meets the eye. He has been a true friend to Inuyasha, that's for sure. It was so sad to hear how Inuyasha's condition was after Kikyo did her damage (the evil....witch). But Miroku knew just how to bring his friend back. Miro has some great redeeming qualities....but he's very much a diamond in the rough. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 20:57 EDT
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I loved the intimate setting you created for Inu&Kags...at least until Miroku interupted that is. I really enjoyed it and can't wait to see how Miroku and Sango handle being teacher/student. Excellent chapter and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Kudos! ^_^
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Title: ch 5
Reviewed By: gen50-in-lj On: July 29, 2007 20:45 EDT
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i forgot to log in. i liked this part, very smooth transitions. i just thought it would be better if you removed the "to" in kagome could not help but to worry just leave it to say could not help but worry. at least it feels smoother. i dunno. havent slept yet, so maybe you shouldnt. i like your miroku here. he's still a pervert, BUT he is a good friend. as for sango, i can feel her very well - inu really trust miroku and kagome here, since they know his night of weakness. that's a very good telling sign.
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 16:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I love this this story!!!
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 13:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. Just one thing, it's minor I know but I just had to ask. If Inuyasha never misses Sunday Dinner at Kagome's then when he's human he would have had to miss it then. I'm just going to assume that all the other times he turned human he told her he wouldn't be able to make it. Other than that. I loved this chapter. I loved how Inuyasha touched her hand. Of course Miroku interupted. I like how she is now a part of his human night. Keep up the terrific work.
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