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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 20:25 PST
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lol, caves. xD good luck wif that! anyways, nice lemon, even though it was rushed but still as heated as ever! inu's starting to wonder bout the attraction between him and kags...FINALLY! please update soon! Kimiko =D
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Title: Nightwalker
Reviewed By: stream0ftears On: February 14, 2008 17:59 PST
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You're making me love Valentine's Day! haha.
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 17:26 PST
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Nice very nice, very HOT! I know that Inuyasha felt gulty about bitting her and having sexual pleasure but he couldn't help it her sent was driving him "Wild", and he dose feel much better after its dune. I knew this was going to happend . Now that was a Valentine's treat thank you and Have a Happy Valentine's Day!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 15:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
drool.... InuYasha is one confused and kool looking hottie!
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 13:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now that was a nice valentines gift. He sure did loose it. Please don't make Kagome too mad in the next chapter, I mean come on! Who would be mad after a round like that?! I think I'd just be content for the next month! Take your time with the next chapter, don't kill yourself for the sake of your readers. What you have done in this chapter should sate everyone's needs for your story.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 12:31 PST
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I have no clue why you wouldnt have any confidence in your lemons. They are very good. And thats coming from a pervert that has read a lot. haha. ANd that cold shower.. yeah most definitly need it. Its just that February fever. =D
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 06:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for hustling because this chapter was awesomely hot! Sorry I haven't been reviewing much, work and school have been eating up my time like the Inuyasha in your story is drinking Kagome's blood. Basically, I am totally swamped. So sorry. Talk to you later and I hope you have a Happy Valentine's Day.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 04:55 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... interesting and quite intense chapter... so was correct that he didn't bite her because he was trying not to depend on kagome... but it seemed that he reached a certain point that he couldn't hold back any longer... wonder what happens when kagome wakes up... what will the others say when they all meet up... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 04:18 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That lemon was HOT! Great job. I'm STILL fanning myself, lol. You made us wait a long time for more Inu/Kag fluff....but what we got was DEFINITELY worth the wait. There is nothing sexier than a deprived male who only craves one woman. Kagome is weak as kitten and as sore as all get out....but Inuyasha can save the guilt. Kagome obviously didn't mind slaking his needs after she got over her shock. But will she tell HIM that? Will it even occur to her that he needs that reassurance? This is why I really enjoy these characters and their relationship. So COMPLEX. Terrific job. It's been a while since I enjoyed reading any chapter this much, lol.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 01:34 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i made a weird noise when i saw you updated ^^ i was sooo happy :P but.... *starts fanning* god you could have warned me! lol.... but your 2nd second... god... i think i need a very LONG shower aswell lol
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Reviewed By: Kanna Mizuo Megami On: February 13, 2008 14:21 PST
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I LOVE this story! I read that you like it better when the reviewer wrights comments to point out what they like so I thought I would take the time to tell you what I like or don't like about your story. I love the fact that everyone is a "nightwalker" instead of vampire. You took an over used idea and made it completely your own. I want to see what other abilities or weaknesses you have created for these Nightwalkers. I like that you have the theme of Reality vs. Appearance so obviously present in this story (Bill) and the fact that Narek is such a dangerous yet handsome character. I find both Claire and Albier amusing and a great way of creating comic relief when the story is getting too tense. Lilliana's introverted personality seems to make sense in the story but there is something about her that bothers me... no thats not the right word. It's more that I don't trust her. Opposite that there is something about Rikiya that makes me want to like her (I think it could be the fact that she gives off a maternal vibe.) and the same can be said for Christiano (I'm really not sure what it is about him that I like though.) As for Sesshomaru and Kagura, they don't really play big roles in the story as far as I can tell. I'd like to see if they become more dominant characters in the story or if the story even calls for their immediate presence. I can't wait to find out who the 'Bastard King' is and I await your next update. Kanna
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 19:05 PST
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AND AGAIN AWESOME STORY.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 19:05 PST
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GREAT STORY
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 19:04 PST
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JUST BECAUSE I DIDN'T LEAVE A REVIEW FOR THE OTHER CPATERS.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 19:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome.One of the most Unique stories I've read soo far. Please keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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