| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 18:37 PST
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ooooh make him loose it! Please oh please! A cave, a nightwalker, a young human girl. It's perfect!
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Reviewed By: I'm Inulover1253 On: February 12, 2008 18:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome KEEP GOING
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 16:03 PST
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Poor InuYasha maybe waiting for Kagome waking and being alone with her was a bad idea. The hungier is to much for him, he needs to bit that soft, sweet, neck of her and taste that sweet blood. I do belive that Kagome is his soul mate or is it blood mate but inu is afraid for it to be ture so he made him think that the legend is that a legend and nothing els, get over it InuYashas you know its ture she is your blood or soul mate! Even everyone els think so to.
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 12:56 PST
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lol poor inuyasha. y dun her just bite her and get it over with? Kag would've understand. anyways, great chapter and update soon! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 01:17 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo so Inuyasha is trying not to bite her.... thats sweet ^^ but Inuyasha will give in lol
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 23:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you didn't say what InuYasha was thinking it would have sounded rather 'naughty.' Another GREAT chapter!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 22:37 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kagome seems to be the only one that still hasn't come to terms with her situation... surprised that sango & miroku are taking it better than her... so inuyasha hasn't bit kagome for some time now... what's he doing trying to kill himself or trying not to depend on kagome's blood... what will happen before they reach the villages... what will happen when they do arrive at the villages... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 21:25 PST
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Inuyasha should just bite her and get it over with. Then he can carry her the rest of the way, lord knows hes strong enough =P Wot's ur favorite word btw?
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 20:09 PST
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lol silly boy he should just bite her before he faints
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Reviewed By: I'm Inulover1253 On: February 11, 2008 13:32 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEEEEEEP GOING PLEASE I kno i havent reveiwed lately Im sorry but i sware to you im loyal anyway please keeep going
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Reviewed By: future author On: February 09, 2008 23:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I was glad to see that you had updated. I wonder if Inu will decide to drink some of Kags blood since he hasn't fed yet. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Until the next udpate, good luck.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: February 08, 2008 20:42 PST
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I think some nice Inu/Kag heat would have been a better uplifter from all the drama of last chapter. Anyway when is their relationship gonna come together finally? I mean we're already on ch.15 and nothing has really happened to solidify their relationship into more than a fling. Anyway it was still a good chapter and all, please update soon!!! Especially if your gonna have some nice Inu/Kag moments in it.
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 13:17 PST
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HAHAA! whoot, go claire! anyways, great chapter, though I hate it when Kagome got kinda ignored and scolded at. But she kinda deserved it, carrying out a stupid action like that. anyways, update soon! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 04:28 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. It was sad to see Kagome leave her family behind. But I am glad that she got to tell Inuyasha how she feels about all the upheaval he's put her through. Sometimes, it seemed like he only saw things from his side of it. But, clearly, I should have given him more credit. On the other hand, though, it's good that Kagome now knows what she's really facing. She won't foolishly put herself into dangerous situations out of ignorance anymore, thank goodness. The fight with between Claire, Albier, and Bill was hilarious. We did need a little pick me up after all the sad stuff. But I am extremely curious about 100% blood compatibility now. I mean, obviously you can tell what it means by the name. But, are there other effects that go with it, other than the blood being perfect for the nightwalker. The was Lilliana spoke of it, it almost seemed like a miracle of some sort. I look forward to finding out.
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 23:36 PST
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Hey whats up? Poor Miroku getting to friendly with the ladies he better watch it. I'm so happy that Claire is back to her old self, Sounds like Inu is stays away from Kags, He being upset with her for trying to get him and her self kill by being subburn and she did put him on a gult trip saying it is his fault she is in danger, feeling like a prisonor that she has to change her life forever, that was nice of him to let her see her family before she gose hidding for how long we don't know. But I have a feeling he might be paying Kags some time if he not hunting with his family and he hadn't been fead for 6 days. I can't wait to see more of your story, Good work and good luck!
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