| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: starfury3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well you already know how much I love your fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and I love the fact that you can think of each chapter in just a day!!!! no easy task in my eyes!!!!!!!!!!! and yet you come out with amazing chapter after amazing chapter...wow!
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Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 14, 2007 00:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting so good. Sorry about the late updates, exams.:( I just read the chapter you posted and I have to say that Inuyasha is to jealous. He of figured it out by now but unlike his friends he is kind of slow to get it.LOL. Sesshomaru being sad that was such a cute part. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Its just keeps getting better and better. Ohhh, I wonder what will happen next. I think Kagome's mom knows more then she is letting on about everything. Since she already told Kagome some things. I think she is still keeping Kagome in the dark about other things. That's good you did that cause it makes for good suspence. I like this story very much and hope that you continue to write it and maybe another. Though I do wonder what Kouga is going to do since he doesn't get the message and there still is Naraku left out there. Ohhh so much suspence in just one story. Getting to good.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 13, 2007 23:14 EDT
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that is true. Mommies make everything alright and better. It's just that mommy way..lol And holy moly Kagome bought A LOT!! geez i can see fluffy now loaded to the ground like an SUV and kagome saying MUSH like hes a sled dog...hahaha!! fluffy and his pups are sled doggies!! wee..whoops..i better run fluffy may want to kill me for that statement oO
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor inuyasha he is soooo clueless it seems ....... I'm about 6 and half months along actualy and this is baby three and last my oldest is four too she loves inuyasha she like to run around the house playing songo and my youngest who is two like to run around saying she is shippo (or ippo as she calls him) the funny thing is she has the shocking red hair for it too lol
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Reviewed By: Inu-babs_sexy_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 21:55 EDT
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AWWWWWWWW!!!! She got something for everyone, how cute, sesshy should give her a big huge when she gives it to him, and she needs to sit inu for what he said to the boys, ooo do i feel sorry for him if she hears him say that in front of her, anywho love the story and i cant wait till tomarrow YAY
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 13:27 EDT
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Definitely. You are my numero uno drug dealer. lol. What a weird conversation. Anywho. Loving the story, can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Inu-babs_sexy_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE!!!! Please let kagome and sesshy hook up really really soon, oh please they all need her sooo bad, Anyway LOOOOOVE the story, its awsome, i cant wait to see what happens when she comes back, maybe she will run to sesshy oh i cant wait until tomarrow, i love how you update everyday, thats fuckin awsome that way you never really forget the story its just like and episode, BUT WITH CLIFFYS, which i hate but love at the same time, ANYWHO this is awsome to say the least. Well i cant wait till tomarrow so YA!
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Reviewed By: starfury3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 23:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well hey I love your fic it's one of the best I've read in a long time! keep up the wonderful work!!!!!!!!!! I always am joyful to see more :)
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: October 12, 2007 19:37 EDT
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First, this story just keeps getting better with each new chapter. Second, I almost hate to see another chapter posted because that means it's one chapter closer to being over. This is one of the few stories I will hate to see end. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 19:25 EDT
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oh yes it is most definatly soon enough...I'm sorry if it offends you, but just in case you haven't noticed all of my reviews are pretty genaric( did I spell that right???) because while I do my best to make sure that I review for the fanfics that I read and so many people take so long to update, I just say the same things over, and over, and over, and over, and over, and over, and over, and over...anyways update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 17:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the seen with Kagome's mom. It's just like what happened with Sessh and his beast except warmer and a little more… or less fuzzy, depending on how you look at it. Anyway, I am really becoming curious about the gazing ball thing… he could feel her though it? Wow… Poor Fluffy thinks he is going crazy. I hope she find him soon so they can both feel better and simultaneously apologize shocking the hell out of both of them… eh…maybe, maybe not. "Yes, (huge sigh) Jaken. Everything is just perfect." I liked this line, even though it means that Sessh was sad, it just seems exactly what Sesshoumaru would say to Jaken when depressed… I also like the effect it has on Jaken. Who doesn't like terrorizing the toad? I think every white dog should have a Jaken squeaky toy… Where did that come from??? Hmm…***Oh, Inuyasha… how sad it is that his brain doesn't seem to function properly. I like him much better as a smart guy, but no universe should be perfect. **resists the urge to quote a line from another favorite anime** At least he is still able to figure some things out in his dreams. I hope that the pups don't have to worry about their depressed dad for too much longer. The poor things have gone through too much already. It looks like Shippo and Kazue may form some special bond. That's a really good thing I think. At least he will have someone with him when Kagome is gone and Sesshoumaru's pups aren't around. I look forward to tomorrow!
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 17:23 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no actually my arnt really tired for a change lol I'm expecting so I dont have a whole lot to do till jan but I do love this story , and am grateful you dont take weeks or months to update , how frustrating is that?!?! poor sesshy he's acting like a teen who just figured out he cares more about the girl then he thought possible quote: love is not what makes the world go round , its what makes the ride more fun
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 12, 2007 16:16 EDT
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haha oh yeah shes stuck in a habit rut! But boy in the begininning she sounded just like a spoiled child! thank goodness for her mother. And fluffy is in the dumbs...its like someone bit his tail or step on his hair..oO
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story!!! I just found it today and have read all of what you have till now I cant wait to see what else will be happening ! keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED his chapter. I am so glad that Sesshoumaru go a taste of Kagome Wrath. I think he will spend a lot of time throughout her life plotting ways to piss her off without her being pissed off at him. He will be in so much trouble when she figures out that she makes him hot when she is pissed! I think it is so hilarious that he looked around to make sure no one was watching before he shook! I forgot… did we establish the nature of the fluffy thing on the right shoulder? I was just need to know what it is for my visual of the shake… I expected more on the prophecy anyhow. The others (at least some I'm sure) are going to be hearing about it. Hearing the reaction to the prophesy is the entertainment in going over it again, so it will not be redundant. I am interested to see Sesshoumaru's reaction to what lies beyond the well and to Kagome's tests. Sesshoumaru's beast is smart… If he didn't have that other side of himself he would never be able to figure things out. It makes since that his trained side would be blind to the damage it's actions causes. I seems that you have written it so that the beast can see the world through eyes unclouded by learned prejudice. Normally I would say that all prejudice is learned, but in this case, the beast has a prejudice against anyone threatening it's mate, prospective mate, pack member, pup, or self. This is the fist time I have actually seen it written so that the difference is plain and not just some vague difference between a protective wild and sexual creature and a civilized creature. I love where Kagome and Sesshoumaru are cuddling and Kagome is in a daze. I can understand why. I noticed that you have some people talking about bringing the left arm back. I'll cast my vote for the left arm, but only if it is perfect as the original and only if the gift of the arm is somehow unique (maybe special additional markings or powers too). It has been done so many times that to do it again it must be done with something… unique… hmmm… I think I actually have an idea… if you want me to tell you I will e-mail it too you. If Kagome can heal the RIGHT arm that well, than it's just too good to pass up trying to recover the left, not that he needs it. I'll say that this time I really have no predictions on what is coming next chapter. I'll just sit back an enjoy the show.
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