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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 04:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT!!!!!!!!111 ***spelling/wording*** Walking over to the bed, she removed the dress from the ***bad*** (bag) and removed the tags. Lucky he *had to time for* (had time for/had time to have) another shower, before getting dressed and heading to the restaurant.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 04:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanna hug him too!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 01:28 EDT
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I loved it! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 20:44 EDT
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Oh! I was hoping that she would get to pet him in his doggie form! It would be too wonderful to have him in his dog form for awhile, following her around like a lost puppy. I hope dear old dad can cage Inuyasha. He would ruin things for sure. Oh! And I was hoping to hear barking dog talk. LOL Thanks for not disappointing me in this chapter! I loved it and am tickled pink. Can't wait to see what you do next! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first i thought i wouldn't like the flashback chapters, but it so so much less annoying than random flashbacks, and you do such a great job. And i just wish there were more people who can wright as well as you that wright fanfiction. And i love the story. Please update
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 23:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story. I'm not really big on the Kagome/Sess pairing, only if they're AU and only if they're well written, which yours is. And I AM SO THANKFUL!! I like the between chapters explaining why things are the way they are. But a quick question, where's Sango and Rin? Not that they're presence will make no nevermind. Just curious and awaiting the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: ceira aka n8tivegurl On: March 24, 2008 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What?! Inuyasha was going to...I'm glad he didn't. I'm also glad that Kagome finally got to Inuyasha before he did something dumb. Oh so Manten was the demon who pissed himself in the very beginning! Oh thats great! Anyways thanks for the update^^
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 14:59 EDT
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This chapter is great! Actually the whole story is great! Early on I always kinda preferred the present day chapters, but as it goes on I find that I look forward to the past chapters just as much. I can't wait to see how Shippo joins the group.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 14:22 EDT
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this is so good. i've been wondering will sess dying affect kagome in any way (other than being sad). i mean if sess has the syndrome and is linked to kags emotions then couldnt he affect her as well?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! This is so good!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 06:01 EDT
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I absolutely love this story, I really like how you have the relationship between Kagome and "her boys", I also like Inu-Yasha's fathers' character. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 21:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hm.... this should be intresting. well. i gtg now. so i cant write a long review.UPDATE SOON! CAIO! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These chapters just keep getting better and better! I've never read a SessKags story like this, it's just plain original, that's what makes it so good. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 18:11 EDT
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I love this story!!! Please please please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 15:40 EDT
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Oh wow. The guys would rather let Sesshoumaru die. Of course, I wouldn't want Kagome to force herself into it either. They are right about that. However, I don't think they give her enough credit. She's not stupid and wouldn't throw her life away. Keeping a secret that big could make her hate them. She won't like it at all. In fact, I'm kinda pissed at the possessive assholes. Grrrr. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the puppy. It's kinda hard to see him attacking Kagome. Oooh, and I keep wondering just how close Sesshoumaru is to actually dying. He did seem to be in a lot of pain. I'm a sucker for death scenes. heheh. Well, thanks for updating so regularly and I'm anxious to see the next chapter. Sorry to hear about your fics being plagiarized. Snow
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