| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These chapters just keep getting better and better! I've never read a SessKags story like this, it's just plain original, that's what makes it so good. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 18:11 EDT
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I love this story!!! Please please please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 15:40 EDT
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Oh wow. The guys would rather let Sesshoumaru die. Of course, I wouldn't want Kagome to force herself into it either. They are right about that. However, I don't think they give her enough credit. She's not stupid and wouldn't throw her life away. Keeping a secret that big could make her hate them. She won't like it at all. In fact, I'm kinda pissed at the possessive assholes. Grrrr. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the puppy. It's kinda hard to see him attacking Kagome. Oooh, and I keep wondering just how close Sesshoumaru is to actually dying. He did seem to be in a lot of pain. I'm a sucker for death scenes. heheh. Well, thanks for updating so regularly and I'm anxious to see the next chapter. Sorry to hear about your fics being plagiarized. Snow
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 15:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"My son is going to die," he whispered to himself. "My arrogant, stubborn as a mule, too proud for his own good son… is going to die." I think that's got to be the best line in this chapter. Even Inupapa has no faith in Sess's ability to break free from being a total JA. Very telling, indeed. Sess has not redeemed himself yet. I can't wait to see how he does! *giggle* Thanks for the chapter.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 13:56 EDT
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Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 00:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I am amazed. Completely stunned, and hooked. You have a way with words and I have to say I am very impressed. Please do continue with the story, I know I will be waiting for the next chatper to appear.
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 22:45 EDT
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i like this one alot!!! continue!
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Title: ChibiRin (offline)
Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 15:04 EDT
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You update so quickly and with such excellent chapters too. I like seeing how Kagome became friends with all of the guys. Sometimes I don't get it though how she can have so many close guy friends, not because of your story, but because I guess I'm not really the type to get close with guys. It's cool though because now I can live vicariously through Kagome!
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Reviewed By: inuluver4everhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 14:12 EDT
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i just thought id say awsome story and keep up the good work with it. who knows, mabey some un expected good will come out of it
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost cried. I think everyone should have a friend like Kagome. I have one and I'm so greatful to have her every day of my life. Kagome is the type to love you for what's inside. She's also the type to tell you when you're being stupid, but listen to what you have to say, nonetheless. I love this story!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 20:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwww. *hits sessh* that was mean. ~sessh- rubs bump on head* u dont have 2 hit me everytime do u? ~tba- retorinal question? ~sessh- uh... no. ~tba- then my answer is yes! ~sessh-chh. *rubs head* ~tba- ill get u some ice. *walks off* ~sessh- sits in her chair. * bitch. ~kags- i cant beleive u did that. ~sessh- did wat? ~kags- dont play stupid! *hits sessh... HARD.* ~sessh- on ground- thats gonna hurt in the morning. ~kags- JERK! *leaves* ~tba- comes back with ice- uh... *looks at sessh* are u ok? `sessh- raises hand- just give me the damn ice woman! ~tba- humph! *throws ice on sessh* JERK! *kicks sessh& stomps off* ~sessh- ..... update soon.... ouch.. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that's like a replay of the first and second episode of the anime all over again. It was awesome!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 16:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor sesshy. ~inu- he an't poor! ~tba- hits inu- quiet. im feeling srry. ~sessh- yep. the ladies luv a sweet & considerate guy. ~inu- the ladies have no taste. ~tba- hits inu- ~kags-hits inu- ~sango-hits inu- ~girlz- jerk! ~sessh- smirk- works everytime. *walks away.* ~inu- ouch. ~tba- i luv it. maybe she can soothe him. ~sango- ooh! dogs luv it when u sratch behind their ears! ~kags- oh! and behind their head! ~tba- aww. it would look sooo cute! ~kags- update soon! ~sango- bye! ~tba- hey! those are MY LINES ~girlz(san+kag)- ... gotta go! *runs off* ~tba- grrrrrrrrrr! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: dancin_cutie33 On: March 10, 2008 20:59 EDT
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You are an incredible writer! I love SWtPF, and The Syndrome is just as captivating! Please keep the stories coming!
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 23:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my, that's something totally different than what I expected. I can't wait for the rest of the story. Hopefully the next chapter comes out soon.
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