| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost cried. I think everyone should have a friend like Kagome. I have one and I'm so greatful to have her every day of my life. Kagome is the type to love you for what's inside. She's also the type to tell you when you're being stupid, but listen to what you have to say, nonetheless. I love this story!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 20:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwww. *hits sessh* that was mean. ~sessh- rubs bump on head* u dont have 2 hit me everytime do u? ~tba- retorinal question? ~sessh- uh... no. ~tba- then my answer is yes! ~sessh-chh. *rubs head* ~tba- ill get u some ice. *walks off* ~sessh- sits in her chair. * bitch. ~kags- i cant beleive u did that. ~sessh- did wat? ~kags- dont play stupid! *hits sessh... HARD.* ~sessh- on ground- thats gonna hurt in the morning. ~kags- JERK! *leaves* ~tba- comes back with ice- uh... *looks at sessh* are u ok? `sessh- raises hand- just give me the damn ice woman! ~tba- humph! *throws ice on sessh* JERK! *kicks sessh& stomps off* ~sessh- ..... update soon.... ouch.. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that's like a replay of the first and second episode of the anime all over again. It was awesome!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 16:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor sesshy. ~inu- he an't poor! ~tba- hits inu- quiet. im feeling srry. ~sessh- yep. the ladies luv a sweet & considerate guy. ~inu- the ladies have no taste. ~tba- hits inu- ~kags-hits inu- ~sango-hits inu- ~girlz- jerk! ~sessh- smirk- works everytime. *walks away.* ~inu- ouch. ~tba- i luv it. maybe she can soothe him. ~sango- ooh! dogs luv it when u sratch behind their ears! ~kags- oh! and behind their head! ~tba- aww. it would look sooo cute! ~kags- update soon! ~sango- bye! ~tba- hey! those are MY LINES ~girlz(san+kag)- ... gotta go! *runs off* ~tba- grrrrrrrrrr! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: dancin_cutie33 On: March 10, 2008 20:59 EDT
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You are an incredible writer! I love SWtPF, and The Syndrome is just as captivating! Please keep the stories coming!
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 23:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my, that's something totally different than what I expected. I can't wait for the rest of the story. Hopefully the next chapter comes out soon.
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Title: THANK YOU!!
Reviewed By: Dead Ångel On: March 07, 2008 01:33 EST
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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!!..I REALLY DO LIKE THE STORY AND IT IS STARTING TO GET REALLY GOODZ..SO..PWEASE KEEP UPDATING AND PWEASE KEEP DOING A GOOD JOB AT IT..AND, WHEN ARE YA GONNA GIVE ME ANOTHER CHAPTER OF She Who The Prophecy Fortold, I AM DIEING FOR SOME CHIPS HERE..xD Thank you again, Dead Ångel
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 23:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I bet if She went up to his door and started to talk to him he would transform back. (because he cant talk in his current form.) Fantastic!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 21:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg I LOVE this story, i check up of updates every two hours. PLZ PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 10:39 EST
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aaargh!! i can't take it! you leave cliffies, -bad bad you!!*red puffy eyes from bawling my eyes out* XD keep posting!!!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 21:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sessh- im not a jerk! ~tba- thats right! ur a cute jerk! ~sessh- yeah im a... wait.. wat?! ~inu- ur a idiot! *laugh* ~tba- *giggle* this explains the whole dream thing. i cant beleive she thought that. though im sure alot of girls would... ~sessh- half breed ! how dare u - ~inu- ass! ~sessh- loser! ~tba- uh... guyz.. ~sessh+inu- SHUT UP! ~tba- pouts* ~sessh-where were we? oh right. its ur turn. ~inu- jerk! ~sessh- little brother! ~inu- jack @$$ ~sessh- why u little basta- ~tba- oh thats it!*takes out doom remote*(has a skull on it! guess wat it does!)*presses button fiffty times- ~both guyz- get painfully zapped* damn... u... *falls* ~tba- *smirk* throws remote over shoulder* well now thats done. i wonder wat would happen if kags said "why dont u just ' drop dead'." cuase that could kill him. ~sessh- *still on floor* they say rejection kills ~inu- on floor* in sessh's case litterly. ~tba- intresting. ~both- jumps up and lunges at tba* ive got u now! ~tba- phst. idiotz. *side step (left)* ~both- huh? *bang into eachother* ouch... ~tba- as i was saying i- ~inu- draws tetsugia* prepare to fight! ~sessh- draws tensiga & uses mediu abillity* ~tba- jumps away* thats how u like to play! come' on! *takes out daggers from behind back* u guyz are gonna get it! *throws daggers * ~kags- uh... while they fight... update soon! ~all except kags- still fighting* ~tba- dont u guyz have any manners! *turns around & throws daggers* ~sessh- blocks with tensiga* why should we be nice to u! *lunges at tba* ~tba- takes sword from desk & throws daggers at inu* ~inu- dodges and lunges at tba* ~kags- daggers hit 1 foot away from kags- ahhh! stop fighting! ~tba- throws daggers (again..)* oh no! thats bad. ~kags- wait! ur gonna hit the- ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 15:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The top part was awww cute and so sad. and the last little bit was really funny... i really like Sessys demon.
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Reviewed By: trujinx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 22:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
comment number 69!!! lol immature sorry, but I must say I LOVE this story!!!!!!! it's my fav pairing so happy!
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline) On: March 02, 2008 19:09 EST
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You're actually cranking out these chapters fairly quickly. Thank you. I love the part about Sesshoumaru being a magnet and Kag's eyes being unsuspecting paperclips.
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Title: *clicks the refresh button*
Reviewed By: luna_spellsprite [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 16:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
honestly... im sitting here hitting refresh or checking my recieved email about every 5 min... This is one of the stories that I just can't wait to read! Please continue QUICKLY. I am enjoying the ever lovin bits outta it!
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