| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 16:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor sesshy. ~inu- he an't poor! ~tba- hits inu- quiet. im feeling srry. ~sessh- yep. the ladies luv a sweet & considerate guy. ~inu- the ladies have no taste. ~tba- hits inu- ~kags-hits inu- ~sango-hits inu- ~girlz- jerk! ~sessh- smirk- works everytime. *walks away.* ~inu- ouch. ~tba- i luv it. maybe she can soothe him. ~sango- ooh! dogs luv it when u sratch behind their ears! ~kags- oh! and behind their head! ~tba- aww. it would look sooo cute! ~kags- update soon! ~sango- bye! ~tba- hey! those are MY LINES ~girlz(san+kag)- ... gotta go! *runs off* ~tba- grrrrrrrrrr! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: dancin_cutie33 On: March 10, 2008 20:59 EDT
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You are an incredible writer! I love SWtPF, and The Syndrome is just as captivating! Please keep the stories coming!
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 23:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my, that's something totally different than what I expected. I can't wait for the rest of the story. Hopefully the next chapter comes out soon.
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Title: THANK YOU!!
Reviewed By: Dead Ångel On: March 07, 2008 01:33 EST
Comment/Review:
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!!..I REALLY DO LIKE THE STORY AND IT IS STARTING TO GET REALLY GOODZ..SO..PWEASE KEEP UPDATING AND PWEASE KEEP DOING A GOOD JOB AT IT..AND, WHEN ARE YA GONNA GIVE ME ANOTHER CHAPTER OF She Who The Prophecy Fortold, I AM DIEING FOR SOME CHIPS HERE..xD Thank you again, Dead Ångel
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 23:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I bet if She went up to his door and started to talk to him he would transform back. (because he cant talk in his current form.) Fantastic!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 21:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg I LOVE this story, i check up of updates every two hours. PLZ PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 10:39 EST
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aaargh!! i can't take it! you leave cliffies, -bad bad you!!*red puffy eyes from bawling my eyes out* XD keep posting!!!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 21:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sessh- im not a jerk! ~tba- thats right! ur a cute jerk! ~sessh- yeah im a... wait.. wat?! ~inu- ur a idiot! *laugh* ~tba- *giggle* this explains the whole dream thing. i cant beleive she thought that. though im sure alot of girls would... ~sessh- half breed ! how dare u - ~inu- ass! ~sessh- loser! ~tba- uh... guyz.. ~sessh+inu- SHUT UP! ~tba- pouts* ~sessh-where were we? oh right. its ur turn. ~inu- jerk! ~sessh- little brother! ~inu- jack @$$ ~sessh- why u little basta- ~tba- oh thats it!*takes out doom remote*(has a skull on it! guess wat it does!)*presses button fiffty times- ~both guyz- get painfully zapped* damn... u... *falls* ~tba- *smirk* throws remote over shoulder* well now thats done. i wonder wat would happen if kags said "why dont u just ' drop dead'." cuase that could kill him. ~sessh- *still on floor* they say rejection kills ~inu- on floor* in sessh's case litterly. ~tba- intresting. ~both- jumps up and lunges at tba* ive got u now! ~tba- phst. idiotz. *side step (left)* ~both- huh? *bang into eachother* ouch... ~tba- as i was saying i- ~inu- draws tetsugia* prepare to fight! ~sessh- draws tensiga & uses mediu abillity* ~tba- jumps away* thats how u like to play! come' on! *takes out daggers from behind back* u guyz are gonna get it! *throws daggers * ~kags- uh... while they fight... update soon! ~all except kags- still fighting* ~tba- dont u guyz have any manners! *turns around & throws daggers* ~sessh- blocks with tensiga* why should we be nice to u! *lunges at tba* ~tba- takes sword from desk & throws daggers at inu* ~inu- dodges and lunges at tba* ~kags- daggers hit 1 foot away from kags- ahhh! stop fighting! ~tba- throws daggers (again..)* oh no! thats bad. ~kags- wait! ur gonna hit the- ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 15:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The top part was awww cute and so sad. and the last little bit was really funny... i really like Sessys demon.
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Reviewed By: trujinx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 22:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
comment number 69!!! lol immature sorry, but I must say I LOVE this story!!!!!!! it's my fav pairing so happy!
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline) On: March 02, 2008 19:09 EST
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You're actually cranking out these chapters fairly quickly. Thank you. I love the part about Sesshoumaru being a magnet and Kag's eyes being unsuspecting paperclips.
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Title: *clicks the refresh button*
Reviewed By: luna_spellsprite [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 16:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
honestly... im sitting here hitting refresh or checking my recieved email about every 5 min... This is one of the stories that I just can't wait to read! Please continue QUICKLY. I am enjoying the ever lovin bits outta it!
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 16:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, this is one of the best stories i have ever read, PLZ! PLZ! PLZ! Update soon, i seriously can't live with out it. I love it so, so, so, so, so, so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: O_o
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 23:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Squeal* *Does happy dance* This is such a wonderful fic!!!!! I can't wait till Sesshoumaru goes to Miroku for the containment Sutras!!!!!!! Please hurry and update! I don't think I can take the susepense! Oh and for the record I think that you deserve WAY more reviews than you do now! You're a great writer!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 00:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Squeal* Oh this is getting even better!!!!
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