| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 18:44 EST
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Your writing is really great. It flows well and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: February 25, 2008 20:58 EST
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I love your story!!! I am a bit bummed at how Kouga is getting the shit beat out of him. I am a wolfie fan, but I see how it relates to the story. This story made me stop and think about all of the relationships that I have had over the years and it was nice to recognize that I have had some great ones. I am very curious about what is going on with Sess. I am glad that Kags did not send him away, but the suspense is killing me!!!
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Reviewed By: MilyGirl87 On: February 24, 2008 23:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I didn't really like this story at first, especially when you started to stray from the main point (sometimes I forget that this story is about Sesshomaru at all). However, I've really gotten hooked. You're writing style is quite good, and I can't wait to find out how Kagome meets and becomes such close friends with Inuyasha. Keep up the good work. Itââ'¬â"¢s so refreshing to be able to read a story that's updated so often. :)
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 18:30 EST
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some way to start a fight. ~miroku- yep. i got to do wat i was ment to do ~kags- and that is.. ~tba- to grab a girl's butt 7 not get hit. ~miroku- thats why im still here! ~girlz- shudder- oh no.. ill ... oh damn.. ~tba- run! he cant catch both of us! update soon! bye!!!!!!!!!!! -runs off- ~kags- tratior! -runs after her- ~TBA~
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Title: OMG OMG OMG OMG
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 01:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-she screams-..OMFG..I LOVE THIS FREAKIN STORY..YOU CAN EVEN ASK MY PARENTS THAT WHEN YOU RIGHT A NEW CHAPTER AND I LOOK AND SEE IT..I RUN AROUND THE HOUSE SQUEALING LITTERLY..I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MEAN IT I REALLY DO >iLOVEi/< THIS STORY..PLEASE UPDATE SOON..CAUSE IF YOU DON'T..I SWEAR TO GOD I WILL LITERLY DIE!!!!!..SO HELP A POOR ALMOST CLOSE TO DEATH GIRL AND...UPDATE THE FREAKIN STORY ALREADY..XD..PWEASE..AND BYE!!!!!!!! P.S:You better update soon..Remember..Elmo knows where you live..XD..Now update very soon..^^
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~tba- well.. i see they had a moment. ~sessh- checks watch- 4 like wat? 10 seconds? ~jakotsu-sesshy kins! ~tba-giggle- puts hand over mouth to stop laughing- he..-giggle- u-giggle- this is HALARIOUS! ~sessh- i hate u tba. and u 2 j. ~jakotsu- i know u want me! -tries to hug sessh- ~sessh- gah! -runs- get away from me! ur not a girl or a boy! ur a IT!!!!!!!!! ~jakotsu- he's sweet. and soo cute. i think he really likes me. ~tba- id say he's agnorant and freaked. ~jaoktsu- yes. but he's MY agnorant, and freaky inu. ~tba- watever. u have to get a hobby j. ~j- oh, i do. ~tba- molestin gays, and trying to raid inu's closet is NOT a hobby. ~j- no u see. i molest gays. raid SESSHOMARU'S closet. and stalk INUYASHA. im not an OBBSESSED FAN u know. ~tba- rrrigght. update soon. bye! ~j- im comming my sweet! -runs - ~tba-.. ...no... i dont wanna know wat happened to make him like this.. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 22:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is actually a very nice story. It is rather sweet how all these males are so fond of her and how she is so fond of them. I am looking forward to the next chapters. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 18:45 EST
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*giggles* what a way to meet Miroku. LOL. But its cute. I'm looking forward to seeing more tales of this bunch as you go along. Keep writing! DD
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Title: Outstanding
Reviewed By: LadyOfFire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 17:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your storie it is verywell writin please keep it up I look forword to seeing more and I loved the newest chapter. you have a fine talent for this. Thank you for writing it Ladyoffire
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Reviewed By: trujinx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 15:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutly Fabulous! I can't wait for the car ride with Sess and Kags! oh and please add me to the update list! greenjacketlover@live.com thanks!
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 03:38 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO! Loved it! Jak cracks me up!! Can't wait to see what they do to her room...the chapter before this one was great too! Keep it up, you rock! ^_^
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 22:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is something I can relate to entirely. I grew up with two brothers and a male cousin that never left my side. I was the 'little sister' to all of their friends. I can totally relate to the jealously part. It was like, any girl that they ever got close to them tried to make them hate me so I would go away. I can totally relate to Kagome. Especially the protective part. I love this story. I hope Sesshoumaru gets some good news from daddy soon. He's so miserable. Poor guy...
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 21:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tba- harsh. ~sessh-i know. thats my life- drinks cup of coffee-ah. ~tba- should u b doing that? ~sessh- dont care- sip- ~tba- but theres alot of- ~sessh- dont care. ~tba- but.. ~sessh- sip- leave me be. ~tba- uh.. im trying to say.. ~sessh- wats with her? ~tba- -_-* stop ignoring me! ~sessh- sigh-sip- chicks. ~tba- -_-* update ... soon! im going 2 heve to teach him to b civil. ~sessh- did u say something? ~tba- growl- thats it! -THUD.- ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 08:58 EST
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I just really love the interaction with the guys. It's so perfect! Do you have brothers or just a lot of guy friends? Either way, good job!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: February 13, 2008 08:12 EST
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I love it... I love it... I love it... I love it... You are absolutely cruel! *snicker* Sess is almost human in his characteristics and attitude. And most definately shows human flaws of foot-in-mouth disease...lol I love it all. It is becoming addictive... just like my morning tea and paper... I am loving how well rounded and thought-out your character's backgrounds and behaviours are. I don't think that I have seen a more perfect representation of Bank, especially as a main character. I am really enjoying this story...
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