| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 23:02 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yippieee!!!! More Sessoumaru torture! The roomies throwing themselves at the guys... man that was just spot on, sistah. You couldn't have gotten that more realistic if you tried (except for the 'I smell four guys on you' part, of course). Yep, Sessoumaru's being an ass.. again. :)
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 15:26 EST
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Maybe Sesshoumaru and Kagome and come (cum) together... wa wa wa..... I about did a spit-take on my monitor when I got to the end of the chapter. You know you just set up a sex talk between Inupapa and Sess, right? Oh dear god. For the first time ever, the main character in the story needs a lemon worse than the readers do... LOL! Hopefully Inuyasha will reign Jak in when Jak does his decorating, because something tells me Jak is more girl-y than Kagome. LOL... I love it! The phone call between Sess and his dad and the phone call between Jak and Miroku were the best moments ever.
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 04:07 EST
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Oh lord. what a great chapter! i love this story...
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 00:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, you are never one to disappoint! LOVE how this story is going! Poor Sesshoumaru, he is having such a rough time with 'the syndrome' and im super curious about what his father has to say about it. I hope he and Kags get a little closer when they go to dinner together. Keep up the GREAT work!! See ya. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 23:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the last bit! Sessy needs help!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, poor Sesshoumaru. :( Hopefully he wakes up before someone needs to use the phone. I wonder how Katsuro will react when he finds out who Sesshoumaru is reacting to... Inuyasha could always just go to the store and buy a new bandana to protect his pretty little ears. I wouldn't want Jakotsu fondling me either! lol I really don't think it's possible for Kagome to not find out what they are doing.... no one has even told her that she's being evicted yet! I look forward to the next chapter. I wanna know more about Bankotsu's demonic marking... and does Jakotsu have his stripes (I always thought they looked like tear tracks) too or is it just Bank? I'm sure whatever stuff is in the next chapter will be good though even if I do have to stay patient for may answers *pouts a little* Well I hope you post it soon!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 23:32 EST
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Sesshoumaru passed out? Oh, that was so hilarious. I love it when authors do something to him like that. Poor guy. I really do feel sorry for him. You are torturing him with having Kagome move in. You're so horrible to him! LOL I just love how close you have all of the other characters. It is sweet. You make them all so real, too. I'm finding this story much too fun to read and can't wait to see the next chapter. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 22:42 EST
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That's gotta be embarrassing for Sesshoumaru. Passing out from something like that. LOL I'm looking forward to seeing who gets the next flashback chapter. Mayhaps Katsuro? *grins* that would just tickle me pink knowing that Kags had to worm her way into the elders of that family somehow. DD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 01:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He likes his tests doesn't he....
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 11:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeay! Another installment of Sesshoumaru torture! (Happy Dances!) This piece is growing on me... nice and light. :) Ima
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 18:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a awesome writer i love both of your stories Sesshoumaru will have no problem with her moving as he can see her naked again =P
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Title: ChibiRin (offline)
Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 15:40 EST
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Oooo I wonder where she's going to stay? I think it's cute that she likes to where Bankotsu's clothes. I love to wear my brother's clothes all the time and I know they're just so comfy! Good luck with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: February 04, 2008 08:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awwww... Sess is always getting the short end of the deal... I love it!!!!! *cue evil grin* You make him seem cold and distant (as per usual) but with a huge hormonal imbalanace. I love it. You are great. Sess has the fluxuating hormones and attitude changes while he is still trying to be the calm and cold type. It is almost like he is going through puberty...lol HOw old is sess in this fic? with all of the chapters in the past, the ages of the main characters ellude me.. ^^' With lots-a-love...happy writing Chao Chickie... InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 00:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! I'm so happy you updated! I just love this story. Why do I get the feeling that things will not be getting easier for Sesshoumaru for quite some time now?... For a second I thought that maybe Inuyasha had gotten a kiss from Kikyo and was trying to get rid of the taste and hopefully not catch something... lol maybe he takes those "dog breath" comments from Kouga to heart. I can't wait to see how things go from here, but I know we get to see more about their past first and that's fine, I can be patient. ...Well if you suddenly had the urge to post a chapter early I wouldn't be complaining or anything... =D but, um... yeah, I can be patient...
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 01:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor Sesshoumaru he is so close yet so far to Kagome. add more soon D=
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