| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 10:48 PDT
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re-reading purity 4-Justification (my favorite thus far!), and I think I understand why Evan hates Cain so much. I mean it stands to reason right? Evan is a Mama's boy and I'm sure after hearing the hell Gin had to go through before she and Cain were finally able to be happy, he was pretty pissed? So maybe that's why he can't stand Cain, and maybe since Bas is pretty much another version of Cain, that's why he can't stand his older "bubby" (that's what I've always called my little brother who's name is Evan lol!) Am I warm?
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 09:37 PDT
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I'm curious...why did Evan just forgive and forget so fast? Is it BECAUSE they're mates and mates can't be mad at each other for too long? Or is it just because Evan is like that? Good chapter and looking forward to the next one! Oh and have a good weekend! --'-@ Sweetheart @-'--
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Title: WHY!?!?!?!
Reviewed By: jack2jokester [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 12:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! you don't understand I'm sitting on the edge of my seat checking my e-mail every 5 seconds in hopes that you've posted a new chapter! why must you be so cruel...to leave your poor loving readers hanging?! lol j/k. but seriously you do have me on the edge of my seat begging for a new chapter....I love your stories and have been a dedicated reader since the 1st Purity Waiting anxiously, Jackie
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Title: Love this story!!
Reviewed By: alchemie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 01:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got to say, I've been waiting and hoping for a story about Evan, and I love this so far. Thank you so much and especially thank you for your quick updates :) Cheers!
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Reviewed By: My-Only-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 17:52 PDT
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I like the playful banter between V and Evan. It's sweet. And I'm curious about why Evan doesn't really like Bas and Cain. Is that something that might be revealed later? Oh and a few chappies earlier, how Madison slept with Gunnar, is that a set up for a later story maybe? ^__~ I just thought he'd fall for the exact opposite of his ideal woman so everyone can give him a big fat "I told you so." Keep up the good work ^__~
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 17:38 PDT
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That was so funny, Cain telling Evan not to make Valerie cry again! Lol, he's only got his "girlfriend" for one day and already he's already being reprimanded!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 16:09 PDT
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^_^ it starts with pretending... Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 15:38 PDT
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great story so far. im really diggin it. im glad zel and v are getting along again and i cant wait to see whats in store. Im hoping we will get to see what has caused Evan and Bas to be at odds with each other. I think its a little to do with the story of them at the park, but there must be something else too. Oh and just a parting thought. Ive been listening to the song Crazy Bi--h by Buckcherry, and i can so see zel roka singing this song. Anyone else or just me haha. See you next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 15:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
reads their reviews... or not... the best stories are when you become emotionally involved with the story... like with Harry potter, wanting to throw the book threw his head while reading it.. *then realising that is impossible due too the fact that he is fictional!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 15:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I didn't realise that people didn't like the characters.... both of them a very real people (atleast personality wise...) I loved this Chapter, Evan is so cute with his MOMMY!!!!!! Evan just cant fool Cain can he...
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 13:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...Cain is such a sweetie. Lol. "Don't make her cry again." Nice update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 12:19 PDT
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Love how Cain was in desbelief about Marvins last name. Now that was hilarious. I wonder how Evan is going to lead their so called 'relationship'? Well relationship to Evan but Valerie doesnt even know whats going on. This is just a favor. Wonder what Valerie's reaction is going to when she realizes that Evan has been whats the word, oh yes wooing! HAHAHA! Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one to come out!
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 11:47 PDT
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I guess I can't really say it's a discussion as it was more people said stuff, I got upset and said stuff, no one but you read it, and you were insulted. I'd just like you to know this was definitely not my intention. I don't want to be one of the people who makes you not want to publish what you write.
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Title: I'm sorry
Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 11:10 PDT
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I'm sorry Sue. I was only telling you that I felt her complete acceptance was odd, not wrong. The rest of what I said was directed at other reviewers because I read the reviews of others to see other people's reactions. I found some of those reactions disturbing, so please forgive me that I forgot you read those reviews just as I do and that mine would probably offend you. I was careless. It's a testament to the material you write about that you would elicit such discussion on social/cultural issues like sexism.
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Title: He can cook AND read?
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 10:55 PDT
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Wow, not only is Cain observant, but Gin is really guillble! Of course we knew that.. it's just so funny that are so awesome with each other (I still can't believe he decided to "get" her at the charity event!) Man, I'd love a man that could cook! At least Val gets to learn more about Evan as he really is now. Can't wait to see what happens when they discover they were at the same college party... Thanks for the updates Sue!
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