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 Reviewed By: rinzechan [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 13, 2009 15:24 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ahhh! What's gonna happen next!? I gotta know! Meeeh, but I'll have to wait. I'm super a stoked about the wedding
 Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 13, 2009 15:22 EDT
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Ok, you have me convinced; the wedding idea was great. I love how you handled the fluff. It was sweet, with oodles of delicious sexual tension, but you didn't go too far and make it sappy. You don't have this story listed under 'hentai,' but it would be wonderful to see a lemon from you eventually, seeing that you handled the romantic action in this story so well. I can't wait for some combat action next chapter, when Tsubaki and the Band of Seven make their appearance (if I'm guessing the identities of the new villians correctly).
 Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 13, 2009 14:37 EDT
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I'm wondering how the bad guys got close enough to blow up the shrine gates. I hope the House of the West seriously kicks some ass. I don't want to see any of the Higerashi's hurt. :-( Kagome and Inuyasha's alone time was just what they needed. I'm glad they are expressing their attraction to each other. That's nice. Inuyasha is being such a gentleman too. Can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^
 Title: Poor Kagome and Inuyasha
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 13, 2009 01:45 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Ok I get the bit with Kagome near the end (I'm actually re-reading that part of the manga) but you got me on that last bit. Who are the shmoes that just showed up at the shrine.
 Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 12, 2009 22:46 EDT
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Ok, first Genma, and now Ryoga--I can't believe no one else has commented on that! As always, eagerly awaiting the next installment....
 Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 12, 2009 22:43 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Well it looks like Inuyasha is going to be getting plenty of action on his wedding night, just not the normal type of wedding night action. So was Kagome bitten by a shikigami? Maybe one controlled by Tsubaki? Don't tell me, I'll just eagerly await your next update. Thanks for the great update and I hope you are doing well. Sincerely, Zach
 Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 12, 2009 21:47 EDT
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Is Kagome gonna be possessed? (oh god, did i spell that right?) Is Inu Yasha gonna figure it out? Is something going to happen to her family? Is is Kagura who re-applied her lipstick, or was is Jak? (cant spell full name...) I'm so curious! Don't leave me waiting for long please...
 Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 07, 2009 22:29 EDT
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I love this fic! It certainly puts a new spin on things, since I don't think I have ever read an almost canon fic where neither Kag nor Inu travelled through the well. And multiple reincarnations, Great idea! *** Anyway... poor Kagome. I think I'd be broken up pretty badly if one of the people I've known since middle school suddenly tried to kill me. And that is one unexpected engagement! I somehow expected that the grandfather wouldn't permit Kagome to move out til she was married (I'm Asian too, so it kinda applies here the same way. My father would probably rip out my boyfriend's throat if he even suggested it, lol.), but that was one rushed engagement agreement! I'm excited for your next chapter, since I reeeaaally want to see them get officially married. ^_^ Please update soon!
 Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 26, 2009 12:26 EDT
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Another great chapter!! Wow! So much is going on! I love it. :D
 Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 26, 2009 03:38 EDT
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Eh that was so good... i know i haven't written many reviews lately, so i thought i'd drop by and tell you how much i love this. Not just the style, which is so specific to you, but also the way you portray those characters. I think Buyo is by far my favorite :D Write more soon!
 Title: Poor Kagome
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 26, 2009 03:15 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Ha bet the old dude thought he'd get what he wanted when he laid down that condition. I didn't expect that at all, now I'm all hype for the next chapter (not like I'm not hyped for every other chapter ;)
 Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 26, 2009 01:21 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Ah man, I was cackling when I read the latter half of this chapter. The parts with Sesshiro(Oh my God, I just love that dude! He's such a bastard! *cracks up*) the nephews' reaction, it was all bloody hilarious. And I must say, it's a very nice way to force these two together you've got going. Thoroughly enjoyed and savored, this was. Marvelous! XD
 Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 25, 2009 09:12 EDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Great chappuie sweet :) topped of with a really touching moment at the ned can't wait for more :)
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 24, 2009 13:50 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... feel bad for kagome... seems that things just got more complicated... at least inuyasha is helping her... and now looks like they'll be married to each other... then maybe inuyasha & kagome's relationship picks up too... funny how the talks went between sesshoumaru and kagome's grandfather - it was all sesshoumaru deciding ... nice of inuyasha to comfort kagome... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 24, 2009 03:28 EDT
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i got a kick out of his taking charge and spouting orders like a general (don't tell anyone but it made me squeal like a rabid fangirl). one cannot fathom how someone could throw away almost a lifetime of friendship on winning a championship *shakes head*. ♣ i like how the jewel goes off if she's threatened, like it's symbiotically connected to her being-- as long as she's alive they protect each other (hoping even through the ravishes of time). ♦ love an author who does their research and doesn't automatically just write in western customs and practices (that includes diet and decor). BRAVO!! ♠ well since they're already considered married... (it may not go over that great- his sleeping over- at least only jii-chan would protest). ♣ loved the nephews' responses! great chapter! ♥ delighted, ginny
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