| "The Price" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: erinnight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 12:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has GOT to be one of my favorites. This is a very new, original, NEAT I idea, and you make it flow perfectly. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter every time I get done reading. PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 00:15 EDT
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Wow--what an action-packed chapter! I've been to the Metropolitan Towers, and picturing the fight going on so far above the ground was giving me vertigo! More random thoughts...poor Souta! And...Karin Mifune? Should I be flattered? ::smiles broadly::
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 23:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great updates... seems that things aren't going well for the good guys... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Title: Old lady swan dive good
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 21:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that "Jak" wasn't up to his canon gross-ness, and if he was I know you'll be sure to satisfy my need to read the bloody vengeance...Right??
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 20:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I honestly felt like I was going to cry at the end. Normally, I find angst overdone but you do it subtly and it is so powerful. So overall, a great chapter that nonetheless has me praying for a happy ending.
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Whooooa...That whole chapter was so intense! Ooh, I love your battle scenes. XD Amazing! Stunning! And evil, seeing as you left us with a rather awful cliffhanger or...3 actually. Hmm. Rin and Sota are both missing, Buyo is in mortal peril (if you kill her off though, I will sob my eyes out. Totally my favorite character.), and Kagome just went flying over the edge of a roof! Oh, what fun! I await an update with some serious internal jitters. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2009 15:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH! What a cliffhanger!! :D
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2009 06:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter. You alweys put i so much detail! :)
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Title: Catch the miko, thats my favorite game
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2009 03:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was uber exciting from word one...and like always you left me scrambling for more like a heroin addict chasing the dragon... I hope you don't make me wait to long though, cause I'm a wimp, I don't think I can handle the withdrawl!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2009 01:32 EDT
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sounds like the west is going to be short a whole bunch of warriors-- unless sesshoumaru uses tensaiga. and tsubaki, can't wait til kagome blows her off the roof with her own snake. ♣ now mama knows too! for some reason i'm really excited about that. she can be such an encouraging and embracing force. ♥
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 08:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great updates... seems that the wedding went well... and inuyasha & kagome are slowly warming up to each other... but then things just started to get out of hand... everyone is being attacked or taken... hope the good guys win... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 00:49 EDT
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Oooh…blood! Violence! Horrible deaths! Yee-hah! Buyo's butchering of Suikotsu was especially cool, and then she chucked him at Bankotsu. Talk about creative… Plus we got to see Sesshy transform, and more of Naraku's dirty tricks. I also liked how you made riding on Sha's back a difficult experience for Kagome. I've never seen her have that type of reaction before; it's refreshing and realistic. So Kagome killed that guard, huh? She's going to have some guilt issues with that, I'm sure. It's great how you incorporate events from the series but change them and adapt them to the modern era. And another thing I like: the fight isn't over yet! The wait sure is going to suck, though.
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That sure was one memorable wedding day! The wedding went off without a hitch but after the reception, wow, things sure got bad pretty quickly! Towards the end of the chapter, that was the Shichinintai, right? Were they trying to get to Souta and Buyo? What would they want from them? Can't wait to find out. Great chapter, am looking forward to mooooooore!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: theknightcallsmyname [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 09:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am thoroughly enjoying this story! Even more, I think, than Phoenix. Your writing is extremely good and completely sucks me into the world you've created/borrowed. Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 22:16 EDT
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since someone else mentioned tsubaki i won't. one wonders why they would think that taking a walk outside would not add to her stress-- being an exposed target can't be that stressful! *dripping sarcasm* ♠ lovely romantic fluff! *purrs* ♣ i know this has nothing to do with this or with 'iy' but i know you like this fandom too. i figured i would share because he's just too pretty not to. http://kokoronagomu.deviantart.com/art/kenshin-in-kilt-2-124935689 and listen to youtube.com/watch?v=kAsraTQxmMg while you check it out. --and SMILE!! ♥ cheers! ginny
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