| "The Arrangement" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] |
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Reviewed By: Droom On: August 03, 2004 08:26 CDT
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*KICKS the computer* Gah! Mediaminer won't work for me on this computer, so I only found out by checking the Gwaddiction site that chapter 32, 33 and 34 are up too, according to Mediaminer (well, according to my computer, I suppose) they're not there yet. *growls* *coughs* As for the actual comment. Well. I can't say much, apart from that these three chapters, especially the last one, where bloody brilliant. Really. Brilliant. Wooo. Am filled with awe. (And I _loved_ the unexpected twist with Susan. Didn't see that one coming. ^^)
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 07:15 CDT
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Reviewed By: ThisisMeandering On: August 03, 2004 06:20 CDT
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Damn you. DAMN you. And there was I was going on about Susan being so nice... Great chapters, the lines of reality and dreams was great stuff.
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Reviewed By: Nekogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 03:05 CDT
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Once again a very well written pair of chapters. I tell you I constantly look to see if you've updated your stories. You write so well it's insane. This last part with the "mindfucks" (pardon my french) was really trippy. I had a hard time telling if Wufei was awake or sleeping most of the time. Good Job. I wait with bated breath for your next installment. --Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: August 03, 2004 02:50 CDT
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>.< sniff....sniffsniffsniffsniff........my computer died and its REALLY embarrassing to be sitting here in the computer lab sniffling. >.< I`ll write a better review later....
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Ch 34/35 On: August 03, 2004 02:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow wow wow . . . . Totally amazing. Please find some way for W. to get what he needs!!!!
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Reviewed By: DirtyD On: August 03, 2004 00:31 CDT
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Really? Has it been two months since I left a review? ...I think I'm spacing out like Wufei. Wow, this was Hitchcock at his finest. The mind -and excuse the word- fucks Wufei went through were just, insane. Thinking it over, this is the best story I ever read. Wow, in over five years this is the most well written. I read may a good story with great plotlines and writer quality styles but... this. is. the. best. Have I made myself clear? I'm amazed that I'm realizing it just now, a little slow aren't I?
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: August 03, 2004 00:15 CDT
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Excellents (is a poor word) for your wonderful chapters.
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 12:06 CDT
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I see what you meant about reality and dreams and lines blurring. I'm starting to wonder if Wufei is a wake at all, or if this is all a dream he's having at the hospital. No matter what the case, I hope once Wufei wakes up fully and figures out that he loves and is loved by Heero, he doesn't do the stupid macho thing and run. Wonderful imagery with the dreams, and how you write Wufei slowly falling apart. You will fix him at the end, right?
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Denial ain't just a river in Egypt. Damn Wufei is seriously losing it and if this keeps up... Now the thing I'm wondering is, will Quatre step in now? (talk about Wufei's subconsious trying to save him, by calling Quatre)
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith (nsi) On: August 01, 2004 07:46 CDT
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Hmm... It's all getting pretty confusing. I have a feeling Wufei's denial is going to get him into some serious trouble pretty soon and it's awful that at this time when Wufei needs him most, Heero has taken off. Maybe Quatre will catch on and help poor Wufei out, even if it's just offering him some company or a friendly listening ear. Then again, maybe not, Quatre seems pretty busy with his own life and I don't think Wufei would appreciate Quatre's offer to listen to his troubles. (Troubles - What troubles?!?!) I have a feeling Heero's worried about Wufei but the poor guy just isn't managing to express himself properly and Wufei's too insecure to realise! That's the enthralling thing about this story; the reader spends most of her time trying to guess the reason behind Heero's every word and action, and usually never guesses correctly anyway. Like me for example, I'm a hopeless romantic and I prefer to think that Heero offered to help out with the WCC case because he wanted to take some of the workload off Wufei's shoulders - after all, Heero still thinks Wufei's fatigue is brought on by his physical injures; even though it's probably wrong I refuse to be disabused of my romantic notions!!! *Chuckles.* Anyway, another great part, I can't wait for the next instalment!
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: July 31, 2004 23:45 CDT
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Poor Wuffers, you are so cruel. But the chapter was excellent. Congratulations.
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 19:56 CDT
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I'm-going-to-die. Or snap and kill Wufei. Fantastic chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sintari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things are not what they seem? What does that mean? Now I'm freaking out! Wufei is scaring the hell out of me. Great chapter by the way. You sure know how to put the fear of god (or at least the fear of nightmares) into your readers. I'm going to go fill my prozac prescription now so I'll be able to make it through the next 2 parts of this chapter. Sheesh.
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 02:07 CDT
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SUPERB! ( I just realized that I have not used that word to describe your fic. I think it'snormally for food though). I really like Susan. You have a real gift for those OCs. They're quite believable, and very likable. However, I feel like bashing Wufei's head through a rock. He's got so much pride. And I want to bash Heero's head in too. He's also got too much pride. And both of them have ISSUES.
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