| "The Arrangement" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] |
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 06:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Heero. He's walking around on eggshells cause he doesn't know what to do. And everything he does is getting micro analyzed by Wufie who thinks he's a bug under Heero's microscope! Isn't new love so quaint? I liked your line about Wufie having narcolepsy with insomnia. I can relate to that, hee he. This chapter felt a little bit on the lighter side after all the intense drug induced tension of the last part. Great job, and can't wait to read the next.
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 05:39 CDT
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This is so exciting I'm practically hopping up and down with glee. All my Wu-baby wants is for things to go back to the way they were and yet it's not as simple as that; now that Heero knows, it'll never be as simple as that. I was gasping when your author's notes confirmed that Heero heard Wufei's confession! Oh yeah baby, the fun has just tripled!!! I think Heero had some misguided notion that since Wufei loves him, he could pick him up - but no, that's not the way it works and I think my sweetie pie worked that out. It's funny how Heero spends most of his time observing Wufei or following him around. That little line where Wufei uses Heero to determine when his tea will be ready had me in stitches. My fav scene was when Heero sat down on Wufei's bed and asked Wu if he had something to tell him. Wufei's total confusion throughout this part is too cute! At the end when Heero hesitated, was it because he was worried about Wufei and didn't want to hurt him or because he didn't want to have sex with him? I need to find out!
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Reviewed By: Yira On: August 16, 2004 23:59 CDT
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Hm.. something that I thought about around, uh, well it was before the last two posts: I had wondered if a proper funeral would have helped Wufei get over the destruction of his colony. I had just been to one and it had gotten me wondering. I just hadn't said anything because I had already reviewed, then missed the post for the double chapters. Now that's resolved and it's irrelevant, but a thought nonetheless. =p So I've shared. Yay. Nice job on the chapters, Susan caught me by surprise. Hmm.. now I'm wondering if maybe she couldn't have used the funeral..Oh, and for good measure: *waps both boys upside the head* Spit it out already you two!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If this weren't so fustrating, I'd be laughing. But those two have absolutely no idea what the hell to do, or what is going on.
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Reviewed By: noctifer On: August 16, 2004 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Top marks for the writer of the most believable and original Heero/Wufei pairing I have ever had the joy to read. Keep up the awesome work!
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Title: Can't wait for more! But i will
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm as baffled as Wu, and can't wait to see what's going to happen
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Reviewed By: Talyssa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 12:04 CDT
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*_* one to two days? Promise???? EEEE. Okay so......this chapter could have been better. Not because it wasn't GREAT and perfectly written (insomuch as writing can be perfect) but the authors notes at the begining kinda spoiled it for me. I usually try to skip it to avoid spoilers but I can't help but read up some of it. So like, as of last time we were left suspecting that heero had overheard, and then this chapter would have confirmed it just fine -- without the author's notes. But I know you want to answer people's questions....its just that like, could you do it at the end of the chapter instead of the begining? Ireally felt like being flat out told "yes he was listening" took a lot of the oomph out of the chapter. If people still don't get things after reading it then they can read the notes at the end still but even when you work things in subtly like that I feel like its MORE than clear enough to most readers. ::nodnod:: Soooo....yes. Thats just my suggestion/request. Actually a few of the other chapters had kinda spoilish ANs but i could bear it. This one I really felt like the impact of the chapter you wrote so well was really lessened by the AN.
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Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 14:31 CDT
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o.O; Just thought of something... Quatre mentioned that Wufei didn't remember an argument he and Heero had the night before... is that important? Was it more 'I can take care of myself' stubbornness, or did they hit upon a really touchy subject?
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Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. ^_^ I just spent a day reading this. Simply incredible. I've never considered myself a 1x5x1 fan, but I think I am now. I so totally didn't see Susan coming. That must've been really difficult to write and you pulled it off brilliantly. I like that you don't let the characters go OOC for dramatic effect. I also appreciate the subtlety with which you render their relationship's growth. *worships* I'm looking forward to reading more soon!
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr (not logged in) On: August 12, 2004 13:17 CDT
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Seems like summer has taken its vacation toll on reviews right now. Just wanted to let you know, we are holding our collective breath in anticipation (pardon bad spelling please) for the aftermath. I'm sure it's going to be just as much of a wild ride as the rest of the story. Can't wait!!!
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Reviewed By: Jyothi On: August 12, 2004 10:23 CDT
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This is one of your best works. i like how you have defined each character keeping in view their upbringing and their experiences during the war. every time u upload the ending of each chapter is so not what i expect. my favorite character is heero and i always enjoy reading wufei's point of view to justify his partner's actions. this fanfic has taken us through soo many different situations. i hope it has a sappy ending although i dont know how it is possible when dealing with heero and wufei. ps- please please please upload source of all things. that is my absolute favorite.
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Title: Sminty
Reviewed By: Sminty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its been a while since I'ver reviewed. Not because I didn't like the chapters but because I wasnt' sure how I felt at the end. I wasn't satisfied and most importantly I can't tell where this fic is going. Is it going gto be happy or sad? I'm never sure if I want to read the next chapter because I am afraid that it will be the one when the relationship ends. And this is a firs for me. I don't like it. And yet I do. I don't even mind if they break up for a bit. I just hope they will find each other and that one of Wufei's dreams was a really a vision. I honestly think Heero wants more. Just like Wufei. I think his probably jealous of Quatre because Wufei trusted him with the lugar. I think he wanted to help on a emotional level But with all of these issue he didn't know how to express this desire. I think they are both scared now. Their arrangement was fragile and grounded on the fact that they were not allowed to ~want~ more. But now they both ~wanted~ and ~needed~ something. So now everything has changed and they won't know how to deal. I wish you would give us a side story in Heero's point of view. Especailly with the next chapter. You, know I hope they do break up, and I hope they both suffer. I hope Wufei can see who much Heero needs him. Because I don't they they can function without each other. And I hope that 2,3,4 but in and help them get back together. I know you said that this wasn't a "romance" but that doesn't mean that there can't be love or a happy ending.
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Reviewed By: Sakura_Harusame(won't let me log in... > On: August 05, 2004 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be, by far, the best Gundam WIng fic I've read. I'm absolutely in love with it. It's intense and passionate, yet still so true to the characters. It's hard to find fics like this. Can't wait until you update, I'll be sure to review for the next chapter as well. ~*Sakura
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr (not logged in) On: August 04, 2004 13:38 CDT
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You had me in tears by the time Wufei finally dropped off to sleep. What a totally satisfying way to wrap that whole thing up and I never, ever would have suspected Susan! I can't get enough of this story and although I want to see the two of them together in some sort of mutually satisfying way, I just don't want it to end! Whoooeee!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! what a fic. that was totally unexpected. so quatre did turn up afterall but wufei kinda solved the problem on his own. the drug thing does explain how his breakdown was so all encompassing. i had wondered how even guilt of that kind could have taken down someone as stubborn as wufei. what unexpected twit will you put in next time? i can hardly wait.
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