| "The Arrangement" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] |
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Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: June 10, 2004 10:29 CDT
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::sobsobsobsobsob:: you're a bad person! hurry and write more. I NEED this fic. NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED. I seriously have to train myself not to come back to the gw page and refreshrefreshrefresh on the off chance that for some reason you may have written a new part and posted it in the last, you know, 45 seconds. I'm just desperate now, i neeeed it. poor wufei, i feel bad for wufei. Is he going to have a nervous breakdown? *I*'m practically having a nervous breakdown. ::runs in circles:: Seriously though, I actually dreamed "The Arrangement" last night, which was wierd. I crashed at abotu 3:30 after having gotten fairly drunk witha friend of mine, and right before I went to bed I read maybe, oh, three lines of the Arrangement (wanted to read the whole thing but too sleepy) and i had a wierd "arrangment" based dream. It was your characters and your general setting but with things that wouldnt happen and things that were generally irrational(dreams are weird you know) and i woke up and just generally felt like "ooookay I need more friends....." but you don't want me to make friends! you want me to read your story.Right? right? right. Get writing.
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 10:07 CDT
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Oh my gosh, their cover was blown so quickly, but they got the job done though. Too bad, I felt kinda sorry for Wufei, he really wanted a chance at a normal life with Heero; that's just never going to happen is it? I'm anticipating the next chapter all the way down to my toes but I feel kinda sad. Only four chapters to go, pouts, I've been following this story for so long I'll be majorly sad to let it go. On the plus side though, we'll soon get to see Heero's thoughts. HeeroxWufei forever!
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Reviewed By: NellieToast On: June 08, 2004 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh!!! I don't think many of us expected a nice romantic ending, but they could have at least screwed! *sigh* Oh well. Please post as soon as possible; there's a distinct lack of good 1x5 fics and yours is one of the best I've ever read.
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Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: June 08, 2004 02:55 CDT
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(wrote this last night right after reading but no access so didn't post) ::pantpantpant:: OH MY F$#%ING GOD ::fans self and goes to get some cold water:: I normally like to leave long coherent reviews but.....well its your own fault that its not happening this time, so deal. ::passes out:: (by the way its now June 8th my time, which means its probably june 7th your time -- and mm.org time -- and that means its been three days since you posted part two. ::chews on your head:: gimme part three! gimme! Hows the next chapter coming along? good? Good. )
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Reviewed By: crystal kitten On: June 07, 2004 04:52 CDT
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I love this story sooooo much. I just cant get enough! Ive been reading it from the very beggining and I'm always checking back just in case theres a new chapter. I'm just so adicted to this story and oooh Heero and Wufei trying to be normal oh this is gonna be fun. You are just the best writer. Please please have the next chapter up soon *cute sparkly puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: AtomicBlu On: June 06, 2004 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brothers In Arms... Haha... I love this Fic!
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Reviewed By: Yira On: June 04, 2004 00:32 CDT
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I laughed my ass off through most of this. The image of Heero being dragged by Sally and.. was it Une or Lucrezia? You used both of them at different times. Anyway, being dragged by the girls to go shopping, then his teasing in the bedroom. And I don't know how many people have seen the doujinshi.. but Wufei mentioning the maid outfit reminded me of the cover of "Heero's Erotica 3." (Go to the "I Love Bishounen" site for that one.) Then Heero initiating the french kiss in the club. Yeah, I think Heero has the hots for Fei ^_~ Arrangement aside, he just plain has the hots for him. As for the song, I would say if it's anything like a lot of the American hard rock songs I listen to, it's about sex.. very odd sex *grins* Speaking of, I would laugh my ass off if you ever put "Prison Sex" in here by Tool. *grins* I had fun with this chapter.. so very much. Thank you for this. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kizoku_Mika On: June 03, 2004 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I just had to review. Rammstein is one of my favorite bands and the song you used for the club scene is okay. Tee-hee. "Brother come, touch me." *giggles* Heero and Wufei dancing to a song with incenteous undertones...how...appropiate? Translations for the song can be found at herzeleid.com ^_~ It's a shame, I've been following this story for a while but I only reviewed when this song caught my fancy.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 20:41 CDT
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It was so easy to envision Heero and Wufei trying to figure out how to act like a couple! At least Wufei had a little bit of a clue. The club scene was so... HOT! Jeez, what I wouldn't give to see those two dance. Fan. I need a fan. Squicky is right! Eeewwww! Could it be because they consider themselves brothers in arm? I shouldn't ask, but where the hell did you find that song? Nevermind. I really don't want to know. ; )
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 18:31 CDT
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Ah ha, I can just imagine poor Heero being dragged shopping. It's a good thing Wufei was smart enough to disam him first! *** Heero sitting around and looking sexy? That should be EASY! *** Heero was just so subtle, 'get used to doing other things like normal people', yeah right, he just wanted sex! Loved it how he told Wufei to scream his name. That'll certainly be exciting to read.*** Good God, I'm fanning myself trying to stop blushing. That scene on the dance floor was really, really something! HOT! I can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. Not only a chance to read Heero & Wufei acting like boyfriends to each other. But also, an ordinary life: school kind of thing.
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Reviewed By: sherri On: June 02, 2004 17:39 CDT
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hurrah!! naw chapter! ^____^ THANK YOU!! And what a turn in plot... It's hard to wait for them pretending to ba a normal couple... This'll be VERY interesting ^__^
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Reviewed By: Jyothi On: June 02, 2004 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all your fanfics. You are soooo versatile which makes you stand out from the rest. i really loved trial and error and really really love source of all things. i like your fanfics because your potrayl of the characters does not deviate from their characters in the original manga nad anime. i really appriciate your work and your attention to the smaller details. post soon!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jyothi On: June 02, 2004 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all your fanfics. You are soooo versatile which makes you stand out from the rest. i really loved trial and error and really really love source of all things. i like your fanfics because your potrayl of the characters does not deviate from their characters in the original manga nad anime. i really appriciate your work and your attention to the smaller details. post soon!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jyothi On: June 02, 2004 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all your fanfics. You are soooo versatile which makes you stand out from the rest. i really loved trial and error and really really love source of all things. i like your fanfics because your potrayl of the characters does not deveiate from their characters in the original manga nad anime. i really appriciate your work and your attention to the smaller details. post soon!!! ^_^
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