| "The Arrangement" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] |
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Title: Jyothi
Reviewed By: Nayak [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 11:51 CDT
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boo hoo hoo! it is ending. but it has been a nice journey. have to admit though wufei is mean. he knows heero is not good with worrds and such so cant he make things a little easier for him? great fic and was delighted that u'll work on source!
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: September 03, 2004 07:35 CDT
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That's very illustrative. Very, very good. Please, don´t transform this wonderful fic in a 2X5; they (1X5) are perfect. Well, congratulations. I'll be waiting more of you.
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith (nsi) On: September 03, 2004 07:15 CDT
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Ohh, there's going to be a short extension/sequel to this, how exciting, at least I won't feel so sad because it's ending then. I really enjoyed reading this intermission from Heero's viewpoint and I can't wait until the Epilogue, but a few weeks?!?! I'm going to die! Anyway, great chapter!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 14:54 CDT
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I'll miss this fic so much, but the ending was worth it. The part whhere heero tells Wufei to wake him up and they'll move the beds together... You are a genius.
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Reviewed By: lise On: August 30, 2004 07:19 CDT
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this is a wonderful fic... i'm so sad it's ending... *sob* will never find something like this again.... *sob*
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Title: mid chap 35
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 16:17 CDT
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Damn those boys should just say it instead waltzing around it and especially Wuffers! *glomps Maldoror* You Do Wuffy so well!! I love it *beams, then goes back to reading*
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 18:29 CDT
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I am in heaven. That was a brilliant chapter, an absolute super fabulous chapter. I really liked the analysis Duo gave Wufei of why the pilots need each other, it makes a lot of sense. I think Wufei is lucky to have such good friends. And Duo's line //Ain't no fucking Romeo and- Romeo and Romeo!// That had me in stitches, true, this is definitely not a typical Romeo and Juliet scenario. ***I was really happy when Wufei decided that he needed to have a proper discussion with his partner, but when he reached his bedroom and saw that his bedroom was bare, my heart was in my throat. Then we found out that Heero had moved all of Wufei's furniture to his room. Sweet!*** My favourite part of this chapter was when Heero told Wufei that he liked holding Wufei while he slept. ***I don't find your Heero out of character at all, he was perfect actually.*** Please put out the intermission before the epilogue! I really want to know what Heero was thinking those three days!
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Reviewed By: Yira On: August 26, 2004 18:16 CDT
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*gushes* That's perfect, I swear. I love the way that ended. One thing though: even if things get bad with those two, I'm sure that they can count on the other three to give them a slap over the head and help to straighten it out. And if not, they should =p *looks over the line about dragging Heero out of bed kicking and screaming* I now have this image of Wufei being mad or frustrated over something, walking over to Heero, hooking his finger in Heero's belt loop and dragging him off to have some words -or actions, whatever the case maybe- with him. Cliche, maybe but the image is there now. Wonderful job. You need gifts for writing this. You really do. *hands you a gift* There. Now you have one ^.^
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 13:20 CDT
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Thank you so much for such a fantastic story! I loved it. You are an extremely talented person and I so look forward to your next fic. And yes, if ya could squeese a lemon (pun indended) in the Heero's PoV chaper that would be oh so appreciated.
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Reviewed By: stardance On: August 25, 2004 19:28 CDT
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If we beg really nice...can we have a post-angst lemon...pretty, pretty, please...with sugar and honey on it...or them... I'm so happy the chapters are out, but sad because its all coming to an end. Whatever you, please keep writing. You're really great.
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Title: ch.29
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 15:41 CDT
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wow and your at 200 now! I've been gone so long but man I'm so enthusied to get to rest. ***glomps maldoror*** i'll be back with a proper review
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 14:48 CDT
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Dangit, you had me in tears again. I loved Duo's interactions with his fellow pilots and his easy advice and understanding. I wonder if Wufei knows how lucky he is to have the friends he does? At least he finally worked out that Heero was a prize worth fighting for. The last chapter... moving the beds together was so sweet. Actually, I don't know how you manage to write Heero so perfectly in character and still make me want to cuddle him like a lost kitten. They deserve every second of their happy ending. ...oh, what *did* happen on the mission with Armand? Did he show his ass?
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: August 25, 2004 10:26 CDT
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Wonderful. These are excellents chapters. Congratulations.
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces(not signed in) On: August 25, 2004 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i love this fanfics so much it's not even funny!!!! My favourite pairing is 1x5 because I think that it works pretty well together if people can find a way for them to start without it being incredibly ooc and you definitely did that! and you found a way for them to stay consistantly in character. This is one of the best fanfics I have read!!!!!!!! This fanfic definitely deserves all of the almost 200 reviews it's gotten on this site !! And I completely love the way you protrayed Heero considering himself to be just a weapon, even though by this fanfic we can tell that's not entirely true. Anyways...you're great. This fanfic is great and I can't wait for the epilogue ^^
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Title: Oops, that last one was from me
Reviewed By: Pyrzm not signed in On: August 25, 2004 08:21 CDT
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In case you couldn't tell by now.
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