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| "The Arrangement" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 01:24 CDT
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I apologize for not reviewing in awhile, but I've been reading these past few chapters with my chin on the ground. I don't even want to know how you were able to do such a wonderful job with poor Wufei's dementia. The time when he "woke up" and thought everything was a dream had me floored (and also very reminiscent of a certain Dallas season!) My heart's been breaking for the poor young man. Actually, both Wufei and Heero have continuously been put through the wringer, it seems. It's unfortunate that Heero isn't one to act on his intuitions, but bless Quatre's heart for sticking up for him! It doesn't sound like Wufei's convinced 100% yet though... Would it be bad of me to get my hopes up that Heero may have overheard Wufei's confession? And aren't you the trickly little thing - setting us up all along with that amazing plot twist??? I wonder if anyone figured it out beforehand? Brilliant work kiddo!
| Title: Pixie Smith
Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 00:35 CDT
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Whoops! I was just rereading the last two parts of your fic today and I realised that my review didn't post. I hate rewriting reviews because I always think my first effort is the best. Oh well, we'll try this again and hopefully Mediaminer doesn't stuff up. ***//And god! He thinks you noticed and that you're accepting his help!// Tee, hee, hee - poor Heero thinks that Wufei is beginning to unthaw and that he's progressing in his relationship with Wufei and yet in reality, Wufei doesn't even notice since he's too drugged! Tee, hee, hee. ***I absolutely loved it how you made Meiran come back as a protective spirit. She's feisty and completely adorable. I love her character in your fic, she's definitely an underrated person in the anime. ***Ho, ho, ho, what this? Was poor, little Heero feeling betrayed that Wufei aimed his gun at Heero's head and yet handed his gun over to Quatre without any fuss. If Heero knew what jealously meant then I'm sure he'd get jealous, as it is the reader just has to settle for the fact that Heero looking like he'd been shot is Heero-way of being jealous/feeling betrayed. Snicker. ***That twist with Susan was amazing! Totally unexpected! ***At the end, was Heero eavesdropping and did his face show disgust - okay, maybe not disgust - maybe shock. Is that why Quatre closed the door and was angry? I wanna know!!! ***Final word, I think Wufei's worked out that Duo, Trowa and Quatre are in a relationship!
| Reviewed By: Anna Wong On: August 04, 2004 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is absolutely amazing. I really envy your complex and beautiful style. Your characterizations of Heero and Wufei are wonderful. They are very accurate. And I can really imagine a relationship, like the one you're describing, springing up between Heero and Wufei in real life, or rather, in the anime. The storyline and plot your create are unique and quite riveting. Everyday I check to see if you've updated. I love the rest of your fanfiction, but I think this one is your best work, but then Wufei is my fav. character. I think your fanfiction is the best one I've ever read. Your stories are detailed and intriguing. Not to mention, you update chapters on a really quick and regular basis. You don't seem to have any writers' block either. At least, you don't show any. I can't wait until your fix up poor Wufei. He seems really mixed up and exhuasted.
| Reviewed By: Cath On: August 03, 2004 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow. Mind if I rave?? Wheels within wheels, twists and turns, red herrings and foreshadowing... just fabulous, really. And as if it's not challenging enough for your readers to try to pick the "truth" out of what Wufei perceives from his Wufei POV through his Wufei-filters, you had to add hallucinations... carefully mixed with just enough reality not to be dismissed out of hand. Not surprised it took you weeks to write, the meaning is so densely packed, you really got maximum usage out of every word! A rare and excellent read. I'll be waiting here with my face pressed to the glass for the next installment in this cliff-hanger.
| Reviewed By: NeNa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Color I have to say that I just couldn't believe that Susan was doing that to Wufei! I just had no idea! Anyway! I really really cannot wait until the next chapter! Keep up the great work! ~*+NeNa+*~
| Reviewed By: Cephalanthus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 15:33 CDT
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aaaAAAACK. Holy SHIT. Ok, the little dinner party scene gave me shivers. And the twist with Susan was both unexpected and eminently fitting. And I REALLY want to hug Wufei, and hope Heero gets off his arse and does it for me... ngh. Cannot WAIT until you continue this fic. Bloody fantastic. Just fricken amazing.
| Reviewed By: rhea On: August 03, 2004 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so involving i cant get away from it. so true to how they might really be rather than everything perfect. nothings perfect, and that makes it so much more real. keep writing, im addicted to the story(in a good way)
| Reviewed By: Droom On: August 03, 2004 13:57 CDT
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Ok. Another comment. ^^ I forgot to mention that I LOVED the fact that Susan turned out to be the way she did, cause she really really really annoyed me and yah. ^^ So that made me happy. And the description of Meiran's grandmother in the nightmare made me laugh like mad and cackle how I shall be evil when old as well. ^^
| Reviewed By: Fire of Phoenix On: August 03, 2004 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You may worship the reviews but I worship you and your awesome writing skills. I really think you could publish your own book with your superior writing skills. I especially like the last 4 chapters you've done. I thought it was kinda weird that the case was affecting Wufei so much that he was sleep walking and trying to open a gun case! But I really didn't see that twist at the end where it was really Susan poisoning him slowly so it didn't look to suspicious. I can't wait for Wufei to sell his stock in denial and face the truth!
| Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 11:09 CDT
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Wufei's nightmare reminds me of that Tom Petty song where Alice from Alice in Wonderland is really a big cake and everybody is eating a piece of her. UGH! Good thing I wasn't trying to eat while reading that chapter. As usual, your writing is vivid and sparks my imagination as I'm reading along. However, I am disturbed by the current story line. Not meant to be a criticism, but I'll be very happy when Wufei recovers from this fugue. Guess this is really touching something deep inside to make me write something like this. Ok Joan Wilder, write us out of this one!
| Reviewed By: Sintari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 09:24 CDT
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Oops, that last review was me. I wasn't logged in. Sorry!
| Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: August 03, 2004 09:23 CDT
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*_* i GUESS it was worth the weeks of waiting. grumble. maybe. found a mistake by the way: "A distant relative of ketamine, developed for interrogations, normally at the doses she gave you at the end. The suspect does his own interrogation." it looks like MS words stupid grammar checker cut that sentence up for you when it shouldnt have. it does that a lot. this chapter was....pretty much everything i`ve been waiting for but i didn`t KNOW that until these last two parts. I know you have reasons for posting over a few days like that, but really, the chapter would have been better read all at once i think, even though its quite long. More of an impact or something. and it IS long.....whew. Whens the next one coming?????
| Reviewed By: Chapers 33 & 34 On: August 03, 2004 09:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooo! Heero heard didn't he? He heard Wufei's drugged ramblings! And he did something stupid to make Quatre angry. *seethes at Heero* I really can't wait for the next chapters. Seriously. My sanity depends on it. Ok, aside from the infuriating ending (or at least that was my interpretation), these two chapters were excellent as usual. I love how you've brought Meiran into the story as Wufei's ancestor/protector. Even though she is a hallucination, their interactions are adorable. And I couldn't believe it was Susan! I really liked that witch. Grrrr! I loved how Heero was unconsciously gripping her wrist so tightly. Angry, much? Ok, here's hoping that they can get all this straightened out in the fallout chapter. Write, write, write!
| Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 09:19 CDT
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I don't want to put in spoilers so I'll just say I never would have guessed. And looking back, I should have, as you brilliantly snuck in all the clues. The ending made me cry. Poor badly socialized babies. I felt so bad for Heero, too. Wufei would give *Quatre* the gun but not *him*. I hope they can make each other understand.
| Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 08:57 CDT
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Wow, wow, and wow. This works so well from Wufei's disjointed points of view: you get across that he's totally lost it and it utterly confused and yet still manage to show the realities of his friends and coworkers trying to help. The burning house was a great image, and I loved the counterpoint with Quatre's phone call. Bless you for posting the next chapter right away!
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