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| "The Arrangement" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I continue to adore this pairing and I'm really, really, really enjoying the little hints of Heero's confusion. I think there's more going on in that hard head of his than Wufei imagines. Sure hope so! You do a wonderful job of keeping these two distinct and consistent. Can't wait to read more.
| Reviewed By: Pixie (Not signed in) On: July 18, 2004 12:12 CDT
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This chapter so did not disappoint - not that any of your chapters have ever disappointed me. I liked it how Heero caught Wufei before he could hit the floor. I know the two are supposed to be strong and independent, but occasionally seeing Wufei weak or helped by Heero tugs on my heartstrings. I especially loved how Wufei was befuddled by the sedatives LOL. Having Heero as a live in nurse is cute - at least that's what I'd like to think, but I think poor Wufei's going to have a hard time of it. I sympathise, oh boy do it sympathise and so does Une. *Snicker*, that reminds me, Une finally knows all about the partnership. It was so funny how she thought it was her fault they'd become *partners*. The L3 mission indeed! Heero is just so clueless and adorably cute. I have a feeling Heero doesn't want to leave the place they're currently staying in because Wufei called it home. If that's the case then it's definitely Heero at his sweetest. I am so anticipating the next few chapters, I can't wait to see how things come to a head - bring it on!
| Reviewed By: Droom On: July 18, 2004 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Aaaah I lurrrved this chapter. And can't wait for the next one. ^^ You're such a great author, while re-reading the Arrangement I noticed how much Wufei and Heero have evolved, grown, as characters, over the course of the story. You're fantastic. ^___^ Whoo, I'm actually feeling the urge to go all fangirl on you, if I haven't done so yet. ^^; Really really really really really can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Really. ^_^ ...Also, excuse my giddyness, please. ^^
| Reviewed By: ThisisMeandering On: July 17, 2004 19:39 CDT
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FANTASTIC! You deserve every review you get! More please. OOC: Sorry, I forgot to log in
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 23:47 CDT
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Oh God! I really, really, really can't wait until the second chapter. Too bad Hunter underestimated Wufei. Man, never ever, ever, underestimate our G-boys! Loved it! Heero to the rescue hm? Interesting...
| Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 23:33 CDT
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Excuse me? "Light relief before the real onslaught of drama?" *Rushes out to get refills of Xanax* Seriously, I thought I was going to vomit while I read this chapter, but not from the graphic injuries. It was just so intense, and although I know Wufei is one of the major characters in this fic, that didn't stop me from wondering and worrying. I'll admit I was crying as I read the last paragraph. This is an outstanding fic. I'll do my best to stick with it even if your "threat" was serious... : (
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Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: July 15, 2004 15:23 CDT
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NOT 2-3 days!!!! NOW NOW NOW NOW!!!!! ::Sob:: actually when i've been thinking about this story the last few weeks (;_;) I was thinking "so wufei needs to be badly injured or....something" and I had a whole scenario in my head.....so lets see if it goes any of the ways I thought about. ^_^ I REALLY WANTED TO BE REVIEW 100!!!! Sigh But really, I dunno why you get so few reviews, you deserve many more than a LOT of the stories here get. stupid people with their pairing prejudices
| Reviewed By: RedHedLvr (not logged in) On: July 15, 2004 14:44 CDT
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Ooo goody!! I'm printing it out as we "speak"! Can't wait to read it. I thought the spy would have either been Sam or possibly Duo. Sounds like Duo might have had an axe to grind after Trowa has apparently abandended him. And while waiting, (impatiently too, I might add) for this next update, I have re-read the story. You mentioned maybe doing a sequel from Heero's PoV. That would be fantastic! This story is so refreshing for so many reasons. First is the paring which isn't as popular as the classic Heero/Duo variations. Then there is the whole tone of the story. It's not a "nice, sweet little fluffy piece". It's got balls and I luv'em! Woo hoo, can I ramble on or what!
| Reviewed By: NeNa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this fic! About the mole in the Preventers, I think that it's Sam. Now, though, I'm not so certain... Anyway, I love the fact that you gave us, the readers, an insight on how Trowa thought and felt during his mission as Nash and viewing his friends during an intimate moment. It had it's funny moments, well to me, and that's what made the chapters even better! Keep up the great work! ~*+NeNa+*~
| Reviewed By: RedHedLvr (not logged in) On: July 07, 2004 06:34 CDT
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I printed this out at work yesterday and waited ALL day to read it. It just sat there, calling to me. Tempting me. Distracting me. But I knew it was gonna be a killer chapter and I wanted absolute peace and quite to fully enjoy and baby! you delivered. I'm glad Heero realy does have feeling for Wufei and I'm hope the two of them find some intense, let me nail ya to the wall when I screw ya, way for them to express it. Bah! Who needs candel light and violins anyway? AND for the record, I still think Sam is a mole.
| Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: July 07, 2004 03:00 CDT
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HI! I wnted to be the 100th review but you get reviews so slowly (why??? I can review twice if it'll get that next part out faster....I can review more than that......just let me know) and I'm pretty sure that if I try and wait until 100 I'll just plain forget to review at all (I'm flaky like that) so 96 will have to suffice. It IS 69 backwards......except that means they're fighting or something because they have their backs to each other? ::sigh:: anyway This trowa chapter was great, and probably really neccessary. When everything is wufei pov (not that I don't lurve it) its hard to know what heero is doing at all, so a tiny outside glimpse was perfect. my one suggestion for you is to slap up a slightly different chapter title: as in "Sidestory: Masks" or "SubChapter: Masks" or something like that that more clearly sets it out. Not that the author note isn't clear, but my aesthetic sense just wants a title like that..... then again maybe me aesthetic sense is screwy. anyway the way you mentioned the next chapter it sounded like it might be AAAGGGES before it comes out, and I just wanted to let you know that if it takes that long I'll die. No seriously, I really will. Its July in Tokyo, everytime I step outside its like a sauna. So you need to give me reasons to stay inside. Like....chapters. >.<
seriously though this story is still great, keep it up. (I'm serious about the dying though. Really. Do you want those melted human remains on your hands??? And your travel ti | Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 06:24 CDT
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I've been absolutely chomping my nails down to stumps waiting for an update and boy did you deliver. It was lovely to see Wufei and Heero's relationship from Trowa's p.o.v. With Trowa's p.o.v we are given so much more information about Heero's feelings than Wufei's obtuse observations could ever give. Just one glance, but it sure speaks volumes! It was definitely lovely to see that Heero really does feel something for Wufei but how on earth is he ever going to break the silence? From what I can see so far it might take a few more decades before they finally both confront their feelings. Although with Heero's blunt manner, I'd have just expected him to sit Wufei down and tell him how he feels. Then again, I suppose not even Heero can conquer the whole emotional minefield thing. The lemon was so hot! You never fail to write unique lemons, plus it's always funny to see Wufei and Heero's bedroom relationship. They are definitely not normal, and that whole thing with Wufei moving on Heero using just his legs and abs - I'm envious. Whoa!
| Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 06:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmm, very yummy lemon. While I do love reading Wufei's POV, the occasional glimpse of other people's view is really very interesting.
| Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 04:46 CDT
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Brilliant! It had better, better be up in a week or less. But seriously, Wufei and Heero make me want to bang my head against a wall...
| Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 08:13 CDT
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DAMN YOU!! I spend DAYS reading your fic, every detailed page of it, and it's so bloody good that the fact that there's no more is KILLING me. WRITE MORE SOON. I'm getting chewed out by my mother for reading this when I should be studying, but your fic is that good so -- more, soon, ok?
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