| "The Arrangement" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aussie Chic On: January 15, 2004 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. this is so good. you are an unbeleivable writer to be able to do such an unusual pairing and to not only do it well But to make it a Fantastic must read. you are stunning my dear. please continue to write more. I cant wait to see what you do next!
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Reviewed By: Dani_B On: January 14, 2004 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can't believe more people haven't reviewed this yet (I don't count). Anyway, enjoying this story. I'm a big fan of Wufei and think there are too few stories out there with him and even less ones with him and Heero. I love the characterization of both. I especially love your Wufei. There are few Wufei characterizations that I enjoy this much. I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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^_____^ Heero seemed impatient. I liked that scene VERY much. I see what you mean about slow develoment, but getting there is half the fun eh? You're not going to do anything like a 1x2 later in this story are you? That would be disapointing. YES disapointing, I want something other then the thousands of 1x2.
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: January 14, 2004 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, like the others chapters. Congratulations. I enjoyed this fic a lot.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 22:58 CST
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Very good fic so far! I think you've done a great job of keeping the major characters close to IC. The way you've sanitized the sex between 01 and 05 so far is very believable, IMHO. Of course, being the emotional nutcase that I am, I always love it when the characters start to feel something for each other. I like how you're letting us see that progress slowly however, while you give us the descriptive accounts of everything else - battles, rescues, missions, Gundams... I look forward to your next installment; thanks for sharing your writing talent!
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat blee blah blo On: December 20, 2003 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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In terms of originality I have read one fic that I think is anything like this. While Heero isn't as dark as you have portrayed him, I like this deep psychological approach. Wufei however doesn't seem anything less then in character. I love this in a whole and hope you continue accordingly. I know... I am trying so hard to speak intelligently. Did I have you fooled?
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: December 16, 2003 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed all the fic. Congratulations.
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: December 14, 2003 03:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooh man. that was goooood. Please hurry and update. I have following this since you started it and i am in love. Please update soon. Chow Babe
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Title: Once again, WOW
Reviewed By: Nomi (not signed in) On: December 10, 2003 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, I'm blown away. I don't have much time right now, but you definitely deserve a review for chapter three. It was simply superb. ^^
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Nomi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I've already reviewed for the first chapter at fanfiction.net, but since it screwed up on me, I panicked and found your account on mm.org. ::is very relieved to have found it:: I can't tell you how much I am really, really loving this fic. It's not very often (at ALL) that you find a 1x5 this remarkably well-written. I am praising Asuka Kureru repeatedly for having "discovered" you--if it weren't for her, I wouldn't have found such a beautiful fic! Very, VERY nice job! I think what I like the most is the canon-ness of the characters. That, and the random wit sprinkled throughout. I am a sucker for a witty WuFei and I think I found him. ^^ God, I don't even know what else to say...except good work, and keep it up!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic is so intriguing. I can totally picture both of them acting like that. Will Duo find out what's happens after they spar? It's really nice to read a Wufei POV that's so insightful, rather than the usual 'justice' spiel so many fics have.
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Reviewed By: tremorviolet On: December 09, 2003 16:10 CST
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Wow! I love this fic. Unusual but very interesting pairing. And a very adult approach to a relationship. (no unicorns and kittens) This is how I can see a relationship developing between the pilots instead of the usual head over heels swoonage. Truthfully, this is exactlyt he type of fic I wish I could write...
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Reviewed By: chrystal kittie On: December 05, 2003 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a good story. You are a very talented writer. The perspective of wufei is spot on and the story is origanal and creative. I cant wait for the next chapter. I hope you write more soon. This is one of the best storys I've read so far! please please please write more soon *cute sparkly puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: Sano Lover 03 On: December 02, 2003 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! i really like the story. it's intense; i can so see this happening. i like how the characters are "in character", but not really. in other terms, i like your interpretation of how the characters act and think. keep up the really REALLY good work. great job!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@aol.com On: December 01, 2003 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all your writings and I especially admire the difficult task you've set yourself - writing WuFei and Heero. I like the clear crisp style which is so in character for them both. I liked the hints of WuFei's loneliness and denial and I loved the hurricane and storm metaphors. But I have to admit, "Maxwell is in heat again" really conjured a mental picture...
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