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| "The Arrangement" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] | | Pages (17): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Title: Amazing!!!
Reviewed By: Lily Zen On: September 22, 2010 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an amazing story! It just sucks you in and doesn't let go. I actually read this story a number of years ago, and it has remained one of my favorite stories, fanfiction or not, throughout that time. Every time I read it, it is as engrossing as the very first time. Thank you for writing such a wonderful piece of fiction. Now I just have to ask...where's the sequel?! LOL! You stated in your last AN that you had a short follow-up planned. Is that ever going to happen? Because that would be wonderful. It would satisfy my curiosity immensely to discover what happened to our lovely pilots a year or two down the road. Here's hoping...
| Title: :)
Reviewed By: Yami Jacki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2010 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best portrayal of Heero that I've ever read. Ever. :) Even though I prefer 1x2 fics this was one fic that had me rereading it. Multiple times. xD
| Reviewed By: ljhgjkg cty On: December 06, 2008 17:35 CST
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In chapter 12, The Long Quiet Road part II this sentence Wai's eyebrows shot up. "Force? Against who?" should be "Against whom?" With the words who/whom, a rule of thumb is that whenever a preposition (for, to, with, ect) is in front of the word it's "whom" and if it comes afterward it's "who" For instance, "*For* whom are you fighting?" versus "Who are you fighting *for*" As a character perspective, you might decide that Wai, even as a clan elder, is an engineer and doesn't care that much about proper sentence structure, so you don't need to change it. Either way. I really like your fic. In fact, I think this fic is the only way WuFei is redeemed in my eyes from his otherwise grating personality. I would be interested to read any perspective of his that you wrote/would write during Endless Waltz. I think that only you could really explain his apparent lunacy. Or maybe what Zechs was thinking when he tried to drop Libre on the earth, where Sanc was. Anyway, great story, great writing as usual.
| Reviewed By: a;klsfsad On: October 14, 2008 02:36 CDT
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Dear Maldoror, i'm really annoyed with you. by writing the most breathtaking, moving, in-character 1X5 in existence, you have utterly ruined me for any other pairing. or, indeed, any other attempts to write 1x5 without your in-depth character style. in short, i can no longer read GW fiction. except for your story over and over again. perhaps i'll get over. perhaps i will be able to settle for "heero and duo fall in a closet, then fuck, then heero glares and duo teases". but i doubt it. dammit. may i also note that i'm submitting this review at 3:32 in the morning because i just finished your entire story, then tried to find a sequel, then tried to find another story, then just decided to give up and write this review. to tell you that i'm annoyed with you because you write too beautifully. god fucking damn it. i'm going to bed. well, i might re-read a few chapters first. fuck.
| Reviewed By: Thekki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 02:33 CDT
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An excellent, engaging story. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of your work.
| Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most well written stories I have ever read. You have official joined my favorite authors list (which is hard to do). The planning was brilliant, the action fantastic, the interaction amazing and the set up unique. A round of applauses. I love the 'Nash' character. I'm very happy that you included other peoples point of view. When you wanted humor, you succeeded. I look forward to reading more of your work. Very nice twists by the way. And I agree with your choice of leaks. It's far more likely to happen that way than to come from a single source. Good luck in future endeavors.
| Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Coffee Slinger On: August 16, 2007 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY ISHT YOU ARE GOD. *bows down to worship Mal* I am seriously going to bind this fic into a book with hardcover and all that. This fic is too amazing to not keep it for myself permanently. once again... YOU ARE GOD. :D:D:D:D:D::D:D:D:D
| Title: gargagrargrrrar...FREAK OUT!
Reviewed By: tres_quatorze [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just...whhhooooa!!! I cannot believe I read something so fantasticaly good and I'm not seizuring...ok, maybe I am. I thought I loved Wufei before...but now this fic is the sole reason I worship the very ground he walks upon...and Heero! I didn't really think much about him, but again, this fic totally blew me away. 1x5 FOREVER!!!!
| Reviewed By: Neechi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're brilliant! *applause* Do you write any original things? If I had money, I'd pay for them. (Well, I'd *coughpatheticallycough* pay to read any of your fanfictions, but that's not really legal.) You should have a cookie brand named after you, or something.
| Reviewed By: therandompersonhere On: August 18, 2005 04:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are absolutely amazing! Thank you so much for writing it! When I finished I wanted to cry, it was so good! I spent about 4 days trying to read this on and off since it was so long and well-written and you totally kick my ass. This story actually GOT me into 1x5. I never really cared for it before I read this story, and now I am a 1x5 whore! The story was fantastic, and it deserved so much more reviews than what it has. You could have actually passed this as a book and I wouldn't be able to tell the difference! It's certainly an awesome change from the crappy fanfiction of today. MUCH LOVE FOR YOU!
| Title: Take this as a joke, please take thia as a joke....
Reviewed By: Glass Imbedded Eyes On: January 20, 2005 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are phychotic! My eyes feel like somebodys been rubbing them with sanpaper, imbedding them with small pieces of glass, and the adding some lemon juice for good measure! (Pauses, looks at lemon, and then lemon juice, and giggles pervertedly). You made me sit herer, for over 4 damn hours, reading one of the best damn fanfictions I have ever, EVER seen! Your nasty! Cruel! PHYCHOTIC!!!! I really hate you for this you know...though I must admit, its one of the closest to the actual thing I have ever seen, I mean c'mon! Heero was...perfect? (Bad choice of words...) And Wufei...I think I have a new fav pairing and character, dont you?Bloody amazing stuff, bloody amazing story, even though my eyes are sore, my butt is numb, and Im feeling decidedly horny due to the amount of good lemons in this fic...I want to thank you. Thanks for giving me the best damn friday...(Or is it saturday? O.o) Of my short, pathetic life. Lovies lots and lots, Shini.
| Reviewed By: Talia Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 06:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First things first, I must insert the requisite 'Wow' of awe. This is an absolutely amazing piece of work! Very close to what I expect when I pick up a book, to tell the truth. The plot was extremely involving. (For once, I actually was reluctant to sleep because of a fic!) The way you worked the POV was encouraging, because it's exactly the kind of writing I strive to do well in myself. (I actually stumbled on this while looking for a good Wufei POV fic to help me get into his head a little better. This sure did the trick!) As far as the mistakes in the chapters, they were far and few between, and nowhere near enough to hinder enjoyment of the story. (You'd have to throw grammar completely out the window to take away from this story!) In short, I am humbled and awed! Thank you so much for posting this! Now, I must go write, and update my MM.org account. It's suspiciously dusty, and I have the feeling I need to rewrite everything I've posted here. *Boots up a txt editor, puts on protective gear, holds breath, and tentatively ventures into the vault of fiction that she's not laid eyes on in years; her MM.org account.*
| Title: Arashi Lioncourt
Reviewed By: Arashi Lioncourt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 21:40 CDT
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Thank you! This story brought me so much enjoyment. The plot was strong, the emotional relationship was complex and believable, and the physical relationship was everything I could want in a story. You brought the characters so far emotionally, which was a large part of what made this story such a satisfying read. And you made me fall in love with Heero all over again. Or perhaps it would be more accurate to say I have fallen more deeply in love with his character because of this story. Now that it is over I am going through withdrawal. It's difficult to find writing and plot of this par. Again, thank you for sharing your gift.
| Reviewed By: Arashi Lioncourt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 21:40 CDT
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Thank you! This story brought me so much enjoyment. The plot was strong, the emotional relationship was complex and believable, and the physical relationship was everything I could want in a story. You brought the characters so far emotionally, which was a large part of what made this story such a satisfying read. And you made me fall in love with Heero all over again. Or perhaps it would be more accurate to say I have fallen more deeply in love with his character because of this story. Now that it is over I am going through withdrawal. It's difficult to find writing and plot of this par. Again, thank you for sharing your gift.
| Title: Congratulations
Reviewed By: vox dei On: September 20, 2004 21:29 CDT
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And thank-you as well. This was truly enjoyable. Thanks for planning it out ahead, it really showed. Also, the whole non-romantic, no-sap constraint that you placed on yourself really added to the accuracy/believability of the fic. The contrast is dramatic when I read some other, more typical, stories. It must have been tricky to write, there were so many points when I could just see the perfect opening for the characters to lapse into the usual sappiness- but you were strong and resisted. Only allowing emotional thoughts, not words. A confession- I started reading this way back when you started it, and then put it off until I saw it was complete. I'm glad I did, I can only imagine the torture your more regular readers went through... Many twists and turns (the whole Susan thing caught me entirely off guard), and I'm glad you stayed true to the original premise of the story throughout. Also that you included a lengthy epilogue showing us what the relationship was evolving into. Really gave the right closure. Keep up the excellent work. Looking forward to the sequel, as well as to any updates to Source (that one is also a great fic, very original). You asked what the reader didn't like- this is tougher, it was such a well-crafted story. Your effort deserves some effort on my part, so I'll say this: I thought the rest of the boys came across a little off. Trowa was great as Nash, but Duo and Quatre just seemed a bit flat. Just being nitpicky. In my book: A+
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