| "And We Were Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 240 ] |
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Reviewed By: BerzerkFury8731 On: August 03, 2004 23:06 EDT
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This is amazing. I am in love with this story, and the way you write it. I hope to see more and more of this amazing plot in the near future.
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Reviewed By: joelie On: August 03, 2004 22:58 EDT
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so now veggie's thinking... good for him, it was about damn time. lol. update soon. VEGETA RULZ!!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 19:58 EDT
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wow. speechles. poor angel. stupid sexy raditz
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Title: "And We Were Angels
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 03, 2004 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh to damn short....now look i know that you are dragging this out but please please please don't let him leae her!!!!!!!!!!!...update soon ok ...i love this story...maria
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 04:13 EDT
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You updated!!! You updated!!! *Big, happy smile* So glad that Bulma got the Marico device to work - clever girl! But... where was the delightfully foxy Angel of War during all of this?? Worrying about his youngest son, no doubt. Darned kids, the older they get, the more worry they are... :( Lovely chapter, keep up the good work!! :D
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Reviewed By: Padraigin On: July 21, 2004 14:39 EDT
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Wow, I've been totally sucked into this fic for a while. I'm glad to see you FINALLY updated!!! I hope you're already working on the next chapter. I thoroughly enjoy your approach to Vegeta. Some may say he's out of character but...truthfully, he's still Vegeta just...toned down a bit and more gentle. Anyways, props to you because you're an incredible writer. Not at all lazy with descriptions yet not over-working them. Everything flows and I really admire that. Plus, you're creativeness really keeps the story going because it's so interesting. And it makes fans like me crazy for updates. lol So keep writing!!! -Padraigin
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Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: July 17, 2004 20:32 EDT
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EEEEEEE!!!!!! plz update!!!! this is such a cool story!!!!! this isn't helping my health, getting me all worked up!!!! damn!!! (doesn't help im atheist too and reading the story... ironic, ain't it???) update soon!!!! ill be looking everyday!!!!
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Reviewed By: iron kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 12:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was beginning to think you were going to leave me hanging! Thanks for updating, and what a good update it is! I can't wait to see Vegeta's reaction to the dress (and Bulma!). I hope you update soon (er)!
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Reviewed By: Kay's Craft On: July 14, 2004 08:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! Like where have you been lol? I mean I checked all your sites and you never call :*( You're back now so nevermind lol. Seems like Bulma is going to have her hands full with this Vegeta Project huh? I hope nothing bad happens to Goku lol, he's just too sweet for that to happen, but if anything does happen make him happy, please? See you next chapter hun, and hopefuly some Vegeta action will happen, (I have such a nasty mind lol) Thanks for the new chapter ^^, this was a great birthday present. Laters Kay
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Reviewed By: joelie On: July 13, 2004 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where's vegeta? did he get himself lost? find my veggie-chan. nij. lol. good for bulma to finally finish the damn project. update soon. VEGETA RULZ!!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-Carla On: July 13, 2004 21:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... there's something missing here... *goes back to re-read chapter*... what could it be... something important... I know!!! WHERE'S MY VEGETA??? I love Dr. Briefs and his Belona! They are so good together! I also feel sorry for Bulma. She's right you know; it's going to be damned hard to compete with God. Poor thing, I have a feeling things are not going to be easy for her or Vegeta.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 19:08 EDT
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Damn - when can I have a day like that? And on top of all the good things that happened to Bulma, AM updated!!! : )
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Title: YOU UPDATED!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 15:59 EDT
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I am so fond of Dr. Briefs in this story. His characterization is absolutely marvelous. Eager to see more of Vegeta but this was a nice chapter.
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Title: I can't believe u updated!
Reviewed By: ~MeL~ On: July 13, 2004 12:22 EDT
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I can't believe you updated!! YAY!! loved this chapter.. even though it was a little shorter than usual.. but thats ok :) I can't believe she got it to work! Thats awesome! Wonder whats happening with Vegeta.. can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
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Title: Reader Enthusiast
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 21:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pelase update ohh pleaze pleaze you have got me seriously hooked. waahh i have been reading this story for 5 hours on and off it has such a thick plot what are you planing to do with this story???
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