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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 13:04 EST
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Wow. Excellent plot. I love original BV fiction and I've completely fallen in love with this fic. Radditz is such an evil lil tempter, isn't he? I hope Vegeta is able to withstand whatever he has in store. I like how you portray Goku; I hope he is able to help Vegeta somewhat. That whole scene with the truck and saving the children in the park was very nicely done. Keep up the excellent work. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Blue Siren (or BS for short^^) On: February 17, 2004 12:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chappy... I got the same complaint as always...too short, but I guess that only adds up to my eagerness for more to come. Like I said on the other review I left (@AAF) I love that you kept their rivalry and the human feelings they convey. I am really enjoying this wonderfull original fic... don't make us wait too long.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 05:49 EST
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Bar... dock... Bar... dock... My precious, wonderful, bolt casting Honey Lamb is here... *Heart Eyes* Ohhh I'm in heaven... First a deliciously dark, mischeivous Radditz, a cock-sure Goku and now Bardock... That's one hell of a bloodline. Eh - I suppose I feel a little sorry for Bulma, she's having a rough time (Famous English knack for understatement there) but hey, I'm still bristling with jealousy over her all too brief encounter with Raddykins... :( Hurry up and update... :D
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Title: AWWA2
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: February 16, 2004 04:47 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super chap AM. I loved the talk between Goku and Bardock, specially when he tells Goku how to "take care of a problem" ^_^. Of course you already know how I feel about that caustic Mizz Prunella bitch. She should be hit with a couple of thousand lightning bolts. Poor Bulma, between her dad's illness and her probs with Yamcha... well I feel so sorry for her. Veggie has his hands full. I don't think he realizes what's really in store for him. Another awesome effort. Keep up the great work!!
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Title: TOO SHORT!!!
Reviewed By: Blue Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 17:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...you still have the Middle East." LMAO I love the way this tale is going... what do you mean Vegeta is supposed to fail? Evil onna... patiently awaits for next chappy^^
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Reviewed By: iron kitty 1 On: February 13, 2004 11:08 EST
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Poor Bulma... Well, I certainly hope you have something better in store for her ^_^. I loved the conversation between Bardock and Goku, that explained a good number of details (not to mention squeezed a few smiles from me ^_^). Keep up the good work! iron kitty
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Reviewed By: Blue Siren (I tried...but they won't let me) On: February 10, 2004 17:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They got you to cross to the dark side of the force Goku-chan lover (now bonafied B/V fic writter^o^) I'm adding this story to my favorites baby!!! I loved it, I mean is like no fic I've read before. I hope you update as often as Carla... And that Radi-kun... will get an ear full about this!! Please update soon, I cannot wait to see Vegeta fall behind Raditz steps... and that Goku... he should get some too. Ok serious review now: I simply loved this fic, your grammar is exellent, the story very original, It kind of reminds me of a comic I read long ago. The characters are engaging... I only found one problem... THE CHAPTERS ARE SO SHORT! Keep it up...Blue Siren^^
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Title: AWWA2
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: February 10, 2004 13:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez, Raddy-kins is such a dirty bastard, and in front of G/V too. And poor Vegeta, tries to help Bulma and he gets floored by her ^_^. It's his fault, I guess, for trying to help her when she was in one of her moods. Very good chap AM!!
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl - signed in ot not signed in? That is the question... [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 09:36 EST
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I HATE BULMA!!! I HATE HER!!! She got pawed by sexy Raddykins.. it's NOT FAIR!!!!! *Flounces off in a jealous rage* *Sneaks back sheepishly* Um, great chapter... APART FROM THE RADDY GROPING!! *Angry face* Bardock had better not be getting it on with anyone... Unless of course it's the Angel of Petty Feuds... :D
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 21:01 EST
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Oh wow, AM, this looks like it's going to be another typically fabulous fic! Isn't Radditz just the cutest thing when he's stirring the pot? : D Poor Vegeta... he's in for a load of trouble. I don't think he's going to get much help out of Goku, either. You've given the Angel of Death quite a bit of spunk! Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 19:05 EST
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This is promising... Update soon! ^_^
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Title: Urk
Reviewed By: LK On: February 07, 2004 11:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why can't I go over ten. You bum. Once Again I am bleah, this is not fair, I can't even finish one tiny little blurb of a ficlet and BAM you just go Poof and they appear to fall from your fingers.... Barb's right, you talented little ratbag. Oh well Still luv ya. Post soon.
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 - Carla On: February 07, 2004 07:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant... simply brilliant. Original and awesome. One of the best ideas for a B/V I have ever run across.
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Title: I hate you...
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 16:55 EST
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I wanted to give really high ratings... 10's just don't seem enough... :( You've managed to pull off yet another blinder of a fic... I hate you, you over talented little rat bag... :(( WHY do you NEVER give poor, unimaginative me ideas like this??? :((:(( I absolutely cannot wait until you update, and I get to go on the wonderful journey through their adventures and mishaps that you have planned for our Angels... :D
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Title: And We Were Angels
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: February 06, 2004 16:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally I would give you a 100 for originality but this rating system only goes to 10. Definitely unlike any other dbz fic that I've ever read. Poor Yamcha, I think Bulma was too hard on him but I don't think he realizes how messed up she is right now :(. Of course I love the way you've protrayed G/V. Hardly a resemblance to the Z Warriors here and that's a plus ~_^. Excellent prologue AM!! You've set it up nicely for what's about to come. Keep up the great work :). Susan/Sue
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