| "And We Were Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 240 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl - not signed in this time!! On: March 12, 2004 08:10 EST
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STOP UPDATING BEFORE I GET A CHANCE TO REVIEW!!! :( Well, you know that I love this fic completely, and that I LOVE Bardock *Sighs* and Raditz in it. Poor Dr. Briefs - I hope his treatment goes well, and that Goku comes for that Martley woman soon... :D And Go Yamucha!! The little sweet gets himself a new girlie after Bulma chucked him!! :D ... And now, to completely contradict my opening line... Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: March 12, 2004 06:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love the way you are writing all of these characters. Bardock cracked me up... and Goku is so frustrated, I almost feel sorry for him.
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Reviewed By: saiyan_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 00:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This really good! I wonder what movie they're going to watch...more importantly, what will happen??? please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Fatalia On: March 11, 2004 16:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this fanfic! Normally I'm one of those lazy readers who never reviews, but I just had to for this one. I'm really enjoying it. I hope you keep it up and update again soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac (Too Lazy to Sign In) On: March 10, 2004 23:46 EST
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I just love how you've written Bardock, Goku, Radditz, and Vegeta. The little scene in the diner was just too cute. I feel sorry for Bulma when she encounters Yamcha and Tea; loved how Bardock sent Vegeta to her rescue though! Even though Radditz is Fallen, he's just too sexy, ne? (Runs away from BS...) Goku reminds me of Niles from Frazier - can you say anal? : )
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Reviewed By: Bulma16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 20:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really great. I really admire your creativity! I can't wait until the next update. (On a sidenote...sort of, I found myself feeling sorry for Bulma when she saw that Yamcha with that girl and he *actually* had the gall to thank her for dumping him. The bastard). Vegeta is great here. Keep up the great work! =)
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Title: I LOVE THIS FIC!!!
Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 14:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love everything about this fic! you are a great writer, like top five (like it matters). but anywho please keep writing please. you have my full support!YAY! btw, this is just some information that might make you a lil happy. - i added you to my fav. list as soon as i started reading it ^_^.
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Title: AWWA8
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: March 09, 2004 04:07 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this chap ^_^, specially the talk Bardy and Veg had. Makes me wonder whatever happened to Bard's mate. The whole conversation was super. I loved it when Veg compared the fruit to Bulma :). Mizz Prunella, on the other hand, should get mega laid. It might improve her attitude. I can't believe how the bitch just walked into Bulma's lab like that and leveling threats too! And of course there's Raddy...I'm surprised Goku hasn't kicked his ass yet. I mean talk about an exasperating, deliciously fallen one *drool*. He just keeps pushing that envelope! ^_^. Anyhoo, great job AM!!
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Reviewed By: Padraigin On: March 06, 2004 18:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in love with your fic! I'm amazed at how talented you are and how original the story is. I can't wait to see how this continues because I'm TOTALLY addicted! I'll be waiting for the next update. Hope to see it soon! -Padraigin
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Reviewed By: mona On: March 06, 2004 14:40 EST
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i wasn't finish writing...for some reason my computer submit it!!!!(no clue at all) anywaz... I TOTALLY LOVE IT AND PLEASE UPDATE ASAP:}
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Reviewed By: mona On: March 06, 2004 14:37 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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im not really into you angels and demons fafic and making vegeta an angel... i never imagine him as one of the angel... but you...you put him to this good guy character but still bad.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - I swear to everythingholy I AM LOGGED IN!!!!!! On: March 06, 2004 10:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, what a fantastic chapter. I hurt for Vegeta, the torture is is having to endure... But God, I LOVE Radditz in this! So wonderfully evil!
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Title: AWWA7
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: March 05, 2004 13:28 EST
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Oh what a sexy chapter and it wasn't even a lemon! O_O. Radditz is such a bad bad bad bad boy in this. I wonder what will happen when Vegeta finds out what Raddy did. Super update!!
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Title: AWWA6
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: March 05, 2004 13:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like its finally over between Y/B and Yamcha has moved on. What will Bulma do now? I love the way you ended the chappie too. Bulma will finally realize that Veg really is an angel ^_^. Good Job AM!!
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Title: AWWA5
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: March 05, 2004 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez, Raddy is such a sexy pain in the ass. I wonder how much crap Veg will take before he finally breaks and beats the shit out of him. I feel badly for Bulma, and I just hope things get better for her soon. Great chap AM! ^_^
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