| "And We Were Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 240 ] |
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-Carla On: March 20, 2004 10:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, well... that was a nasty little trick Radditz played on Vegeta wasn't it? OOOHHHH I just LOVE Radditz in this! Bulma should learn to THINK first and TALK second!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 11:07 EST
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Why, oh, why isn't Bulma charging that b*tch with assault? She could still sell her shares, but Bulma wouldn't be alone on the front page. . . . I think Vegeta needs to have a chat with Goku. He can't control this much longer.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl - I really can't be bothered to go through the signing in rigmarole On: March 19, 2004 08:06 EST
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Ohhhhh, Raddykins is such a naughty boy!!! >:-) I hate Joanna Marley - I hope she dies... :D I'm keeping my fingers crossed for Dr. Breif's surgery - please let him be OK!!! :( Looking forward to the next installment.
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Title: IT LET ME LOG IN!!!! IT LET ME LOG IN!!!!
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 20:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, that is my favorite chapter yet! I loved Vegeta's thoughts (wishing he knew how he liked it!!!). *Sigh* I LOVE it when his mind is in the gutter. Something tells me Radditz is going to get the ass-kicking of his eternal life. You are doing a fabulous job wth this!
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Title: Hullo!
Reviewed By: Kira Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 18:27 EST
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Greetings! This is the 1st DBZ fanfic I've ever read. I watch the show (And Vegeta is my favorite character for... ah-hem... "obvious" reasons.. *drools*... lol.) but I mainly stick to InuYasha fics. Anyways, the point is that even though I dont have any other DBZ fics to compare with this, your story is great. In fact, it wouyld make a terrific story all on its own, w/out the DBZ references. And all of the Angel and God remarks are truely touching. When Goku said that the lil girl in previous chapters had athiest parents, I almost cryed. It's so sad that there are people out there who do not believe in Him or His miracles. I know people like that.... Anyways, I love your story. Please keep up the good work, and get another chapter up SOON. Love yas (dont feel offended i say that to everyone. lol) Byes! ~ Kira ^_~
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl - Feh, signing in is for wimps!! On: March 15, 2004 07:34 EST
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Oooooooh, Raddykins is gonna be in trouble when Vegeta gets hold of him!! Never mind, I shall volunteer to treat his injuries... :D A very good chapter, despite the lack of Bardock... Hurry up - more chapters NOW!!!
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Reviewed By: saiyan_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 00:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t! This fic seems cute in a way. That's kinda odd, but nevermind that...I like it, Tea seemed different in this chapter than she did in the others, not a bad thing, just sayin...update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dissapointed BS On: March 12, 2004 13:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What I was cheated I was supposed to be the 50th!! I hate you LisaB lol
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Reviewed By: BS Yay... I'm the 50th reviewer!! On: March 12, 2004 13:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this one was cute, Bardock is a riot...Bad influenced from a certain British woman we know I assume ;). I got another little bone to pick, when did Vegeta told Bulma his name?...I should go back to the chappys a previously read, but I'm lazy. And evil Vegeta, getting Yamucha a run for his money, I was actually rooting for him to appear as Bulma's date...I guess we think alike^^ I will leave the next chappy to read with your next update. Ya Ne BS^^
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: MelizaMac (I *AM* Logged In!!) On: March 12, 2004 13:18 EST
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Well, that was a bit awkward for Yamcha, ne? I really like his personality in this fic. He's a bit clueless at important times, but he's still that deeply rooted friend of Bulma's that will be there for her no matter what. If Tea is going to be "the one" for him, she'll have to be totally accepting of that. She may end up being the girlfriend for Bulma that she never had before. I love your portrayal of Vegeta as well. He still has his job in mind; he's strong, obviously attractive (sexy), and is trying his best not to give in to his desires. It was so sweet that he checked on Dr. Briefs. I think it's cool that even though they're angels, they obviously have a gamut of emotions (Vegeta's desire to kick Goku's ass was priceless!) Thanks for the quick updates sweetie!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 13:14 EST
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Very good. I'm really enjoying this fic.
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Reviewed By: BS...Almost there... On: March 12, 2004 12:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too Short, but really good. I was surprised Vegeta didn't know Bardock is Raditz' and Goku's father, I assumed they all knew they were family. This little fact got me really curious now, How did they become angels, were they mortal back when Bardie sinned, was he mortal, and how come they're angels and their mother is not, are G nad R the two children Bardock was talking about? tell me tell me! YA Ne BS
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Reviewed By: BS no you may not have my man.. On: March 12, 2004 12:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this chapter was awesome, perfect (too short though) from the hot wet one to my Radi-no Koibito's diabolic,twisted plottoing...I mean this is what I'm talking about woman!! Great Job^^ Can't wait to read the next one. Ya Ne BS
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Reviewed By: BS...Yes Raditz's woman On: March 12, 2004 12:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta, always the romantic poetic being... I guess braking women's arms must be alluring in heaven, I bet it is on Vegeta-sei^^...anyways read this and tell me what's wrong...""Have you have stopped to think why I keep popping in?"" yes is from the fic. I like this fic a lot, but man woman as much as I hate Bulma you need to cut her a brake, or are you doin Carla a favor? Ya Ne! BS
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Title: with the fury of hell itself burning within them... Ooh I like that!
Reviewed By: Blue SIren...just call me Raditz woman ;) On: March 12, 2004 11:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an evil woman you are...good thing I got a couple more chappys to read, but seriously I loved this one. Raditz is so bad...I love it! And Krillin telling that wench off^^ and Vegeta...what's he gonna do!? Ya Ne! BS
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