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Title: And We Were Angels
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 21:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
glad to knw that you didn't kill bulma and sad to know that the story is over. loved the ending and wish there was more. great job and can't wait to read more of your great work. so until then take care...maria
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Title: Whoohoo!
Reviewed By: Evanscent-Keely On: February 12, 2005 21:50 EST
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Excellently done! I love this story! The idea, the plot twists, the characters, all very well done! There's a few editorial errors here and there, but nothing substantial enough to draw attention away from the fiction. Wonderful piece, really. Great job, AM.
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72-Carla On: February 12, 2005 19:52 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just couldn't ;et her die, could you? I mean, all that begging and pleading I did and you still let the witch live. >.<
Great chapter. I would say I can't wait to find out what happens next, but I already know.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 21:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH. MY. GOD. This story is absolutely incredible. I started reading it the other day, and I simply could not stop. I had to go to work at some time during the middle of the story, and I seriously could not stop thinking about what was going to happen. I just could not get the addicting plot out of my head! I love this story so much, I wish that I had not reached the last chapter you have written! I just love the idea of Vegeta being an angel and everything, with the whole religion thing. I have not come across a DBZ story that had mixed the two topics and came together so perfectly. You are an excellent, unbelievable author, and I bow down before you in shame! I am unworthy. This story ranks higher than a simple 10, it is a 1000000! You are SOOOOO added to my favorties RIGHT NOW. I think actually, that I had you added to my favorties on fanfiction.net, but lets not go there! You are an excellent writer, and please, do not ever stop getting inspiration to write this story! It is so excellent that I just want to cry! it just amazes me and totally holds me spellbound just thinking about it. I wish I could be in your person and bow before you because DAMN this story is just SO DAMN GOOD! You have a fellow official, addicted, OBSESSED author on yours hands now, and you are going to have to deal with me until you have sated my cravings for this story, which means FINISH NOW! Lol, seems like I have run out of characters, so pelase update soon! LOVE YOUR STORY AND GOOD JOB!!!! |
Reviewed By: VegetasLindaLou On: February 10, 2005 19:15 EST
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you made me cry at the end of this chapter... it is so great. please update soon.
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Title: ooohhh
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: February 10, 2005 11:16 EST
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now im scared, please let this next update be quick
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 23:14 EST
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Whoa - with Goku... indisposed, is there anyone to take his place, or will that phase of life be a non-issue now? My heart's really gone out to Vegeta in this fic. It seems that his innocence beyond his angelic livelihood has been the cause of one problem after another. Poor thing didn't even know how to recognize a lie... Of course, if Bulma had been a bit less selfish and said something earlier, you'd probably have this one all wrapped up, huh? Jeez, then you'd have to write something else. Or draw. Or both...
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Title: And We Were Angels
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 22:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GLAD you updated. sorry to read that goku is no more. hoping that bulma's baby is alright. and can't wait for you to update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 21:09 EST
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hehe... I'm reviewing for no reason I've already read the end... but I decided to drop a line bc I hadn't seen you on mm... I just haven't been on enough... but I still love this story
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 20:13 EST
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oooh, I like a baaad Vegeta. Fun chapter. This has got be the worst thing Vegeta's ever let happen... geez, the apocalypse! Those pregnancy hormones ought to help Bulma shape up and help save the universe.....
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 09:47 EST
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Yay! you updated!! excellent chapter! i'm totally shocked and anxious to see what happens next. i really love what you are doing with this story. it's really great.
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Title: aiyana
Reviewed By: aiyana [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 08:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfiction is very beautiful, I love the personality of your characters, very well written!
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Reviewed By: Yousha On: January 29, 2005 12:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINISH ITT!!! I DEMAND YOU TO FINISH THE FIC!! AND THEN! I DEMAND YOU TO MAKE A SEQUEL!!!!! *Eyes bugging out of her head* Don't make me beg :( I love this story! i love you for writing it!!! very nice ;D must finish it and make sequel.. or else.. everybody is going to die in suspense..
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Title: Now THAT was evil!
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 11:56 EST
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I can't believe you cut it off there! How evil! Now you simply must update as soon as possible because you would leave poor Bulma in the clutches of a demon over the holidays, would you? *bats eyeslashes* Oh yeah. It's *Bulma*. She's not getting out of this till after MLK day, is she? Good chapter!
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72-Carla On: December 03, 2004 21:48 EST
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