| "And We Were Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 240 ] |
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Reviewed By: joelie On: August 13, 2004 17:02 EDT
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poor veggie-chan, landing in the water all alone. but hey, i guess it's better landing in water than the ground (that would hurt too much). good chapter. update soon. VEGETA RULZ!!
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Title: Chapter 25
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 13:00 EDT
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That was horribly sad, not only did Goku lose a friend (regardless what Vegeta says), but Vegeta had to go through some serious pain. Bulma better be worth it. I'm sure the salty ocean wasn't the best balm, either. I like how you ended this chapter. It's encouraging that these are the first people Vegeta will encounter as a mortal. Great job!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 22:12 EDT
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Yay!!!!!! I'm so glad Vegeta decided to become mortal to be with Bulma!!!! I think it's about time the two of them get together. I hope he survives, but seeing how that this isn't a tragedy, I'm sure he will.
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Title: WOW, ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!
Reviewed By: ~MeL~ On: August 12, 2004 02:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! HES TURNING MORTAL!! OMG OMG OMG! I'M SO EXCITED AND WORRIED AT THE SAME TIME! I CANT WAIT FOR YOU TO UPDATE! YAY!! THIS ROCKS!!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Blue-haired Vixen On: August 11, 2004 01:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, you updated! I really love this fic and where it's going! Whatever it is Vegeta has to go through, I hope it isn't too serious! Please have more romance in the next chappie! (I know you had plenty in this chappie but I'm just never satisfied I guess)
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Reviewed By: BerzerkFury8731 On: August 10, 2004 19:52 EDT
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Oh man, another cliff-hanger! I can't wait to see what happens to Vegeta! And Bulma when she finds out what is going on! Leep it up, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: joelie On: August 10, 2004 19:15 EDT
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oh dear god! what's going to happen?!?!?!?!?!?! u have to update NOW! pls, i'm begging u! VEGETA RULZ!!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 17:30 EDT
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first response: oh goody an update! second response: oh wow, he's really going to do it! third response: oh &*%$! A cliffhanger! awaiting the next scene patiently, debbiechan
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Title: And We Were Angels"
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 10, 2004 12:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update update ssssooooonnn...maria
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Title: all that is needed is 1 word
Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 21:45 EDT
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CONTINUE
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 21:24 EDT
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aww, Yammy got married! *dabs eyes* I'm a sucker for wedding scenes. And now Vegeta--hello! It's plain what he needs to do, and I like that fact that he's a powerful superbeing at the feet of a mere mortal woman yet again. Nice dramatic moment at the end of this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 06:43 EDT
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Ohhhhh, sweet little Yammy-kins is married, and the tension between Bulma and Vegeta escalates... Heh, even though he's fighting it, we know what will happen... :D Looking forward to the next installmant!!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 23:29 EDT
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I know I've been gone for a while, but I'm back. I kinda feel bad that Vegeta is torn between staying with Bulma and going back to heaven. I personally think he should listen to Bardock about the turning mortal thing and choose to do that. At least that way he can remain with Bulma. Pretty much exactly like Nicolas Cage in City of Angels, but without Bulma, or in movie case, Meg Ryan dying.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 12:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor, Vegeta. He's already caught and he doesn't even know it yet. This was a great chapter, it really gave us a lot of insight into how the characters feel about one another. Can't wait for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 12:01 EDT
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Nice chapter, but when is Vegeta going to actually do something about his situation? It's time for him to get serious and have a chat with Goku!
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