| "And We Were Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 240 ] |
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 22:55 EDT
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That was a great little scene. But Phantom said there was lemon? Did I miss something? Am I the only one who didn't get lemon on her screen because I am being punished by the powers that be? Or did AM lift the lemon at the last minute? The B/V exchange was perfect,and I'm glad they didn't do it in the hospital bed, but why did Phantom say LEMON????
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 16:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is a really wonderful story. i'm enjoying it too much. i just wish the chapters weren't so short but i suppose if they weren't you wouldn't be able to pump out chapters as quickly. ^_^ keep up the awesome work!
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Title: "And We Were Angels"
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 25, 2004 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sorry it's was just to short.i missed this story..and i can't wait to read how they finally get together(if they do) everytime i read this story it reminds me of that movie CITY OF ANGELS but we all know how that ends don't we...please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: ivy rose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 11:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, that's so great that they finally got a moment! Totally awesome fic by the way.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: September 25, 2004 08:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY! The LEMON got posted!!! I know I've read it before, but let me just say agin it is perfect. So, now Bulma is happy and satisfied. Somehow I don't think things will stay smooth and peaceful for her and her angel very long...
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Title: amandajune123
Reviewed By: June16458 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 04:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love story I jump forward a couple of chapters and know I'am little confusion? Is Carla a name that Vegeta calles Bulma or someone else. amandajune45@aol.com
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 20:33 EDT
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I love how poor Vegeta thinks he's dying! Such a typical man!!! Yay - they've found each other again! Now AM dear, this isn't going to take one of those horrible turns like "City of Angels" is it? That would be a bad thing. Very bad. You don't like to make Mel sad, remember? O_o
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: ~MeL~ On: September 09, 2004 10:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww hes recovering! yay! i hope he recovers fully! i really hope things work out.. poor vegeta! i love this fic so much!
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 13:44 EDT
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You must have a sadistic streak to keep us hanging! Update soon.
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Title: "And We Were Angels
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 05, 2004 16:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh and who do you think your kiddin...so what do you have in store foe these two now.please update soon....maria
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Reviewed By: joelie On: September 04, 2004 20:32 EDT
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yey! u updated! about the story, it all seems so peachy and happy... is it going to stay like this? or will there be some kind of plot twister? looking forward to ur next update. VEGETA RULZ!!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 14:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Vegeta! In such horendous pain! You're engoying this, aren't you, you evil wench! So, he's given up everything for this mortal woman. I sure hope she's worth it.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 06:57 EDT
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... I KNOW that I reviewed 'Rage' and yet the review doesn't show up on here... You removed it, didn't you?? *Cross face* Eh, can't remember what I said, but it was all positive. I liked this one too - even I got a little misty eyed at the reunion. I hope Dr Griefs doesn't overtax himself though - Belonna will be back on his case... :D Now - update quickly, with special emphasis on how those left in heaven - esp the father of the Angel of Deat - are coping with the loss of one of their fold... :D
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 01:51 EDT
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Not much action in this chapter, but it's good to know that Vegeta will be ok, same with Dr. Briefs.
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Reviewed By: BerzerkFury On: September 03, 2004 21:42 EDT
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Thank heavens Vegeta is alright... I was worried there for a minute. Can't wait to see what happens, so you had better update soon!
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