| "And We Were Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 240 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl - to flame, or not to flame? On: April 20, 2004 07:58 EDT
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Go Bulma, go Bulma... OK I'll stop dancing now... *Blush* I'm so proud of her!! :D What an excellent way to get one over on the slime bag... :D But, now that Vegeta's time is up, what will out heroes do now??? :( Please hurry, and let us know... :D
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 20:10 EDT
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Awww, Vegeta's jealous of Yamcha... :D I'm so glad that Dr Briefs' surgery was a success! One less worry on our poor heroine's mind - now on to defeating Hikari!! :D
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: April 09, 2004 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this fic. You are foing a fantastic jon working out the relationships between the characters and dealing with all of the emotions involved. You know, I ALMOST feel sorry for Bulma. Of course, since she gets Vegeta, my compasion for her is very limited.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Blade Redwind (blade_redwind@cox.net) On: April 08, 2004 03:45 EDT
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I love it! You've done such a great job of writting both their characters. Its also my opinion you haven't drove too fast in writting this. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: mona On: April 07, 2004 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yeah!!!! please tell me theres a happy ending beween v+b...please update. I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!
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Reviewed By: venus legacy On: April 06, 2004 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story but there must be a mistake because it says status completed and this story can't be completed at chapter 15. I mean we haven't even seen the true extent of raditz plans for vegeta or whether vegeta decides to fall from gods grace or give up immortality and become mortal for bulma..... or if he just does the task with out breaking any rules and goes back to heaven to do his daily duties(yeah right) But seriously this can't be the end there has to be more. It would be great if you could give more detail and description about the life of an angel what heaven is like and the love between vegeta and his holy father. For when vegeta said to bulma if i fail you i fail my father i was very intrigued as to how deep the love between vegeta and god was like. Had it always been there was it something evident the instant he was created, something he had a choice over or not. I wonder about these things because if vegeta does decide to leave heaven it would allow me to experience the wealth of he sacrifice if i knew the value of what he was giving up. For i have preconcieved notions told to me from childhood about the gloriousness and beauty of heaven but then there are different versions and interpretation experiences. i would like to see heaven from the eyes of vegeta, goku, bardock and even raaditz Also it would be interesting to see what raditz is thinking why did he turn his back on god? i mean you have told us bardocks opinion but i would like to know more about how raaditz feels does he love god does he feel that he has failed god what are his views on the moral worth of human beings? I loved your description of vegta when he first showed himself to bulma i wished i was there seeing it with my own eyes. Your story has made me think about the significance of god and relevance in todays society. it was sad when you spoke of the atheist and when goku said not everyone believes in us because i know just how true that statement is. I hope its an error with mediaminer and that this story isn't completed for i am starving for more feed me.
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Title: Sry...but O_O
Reviewed By: X0oBuffyo0X On: April 01, 2004 21:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Please update! It's sooooo good! *Grabs chocolate ice cream* ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kitiara Astaroth On: April 01, 2004 02:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, so good so far! I love it, please, keep updating!!
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: March 31, 2004 13:41 EST
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How wonderful! Two chappies posted while I'm gone and they are both great! I can't wait to see how the whole Hikari mess will fall out. I'm sure Vegeta will think of something to save Bulma for himself. . .I mean "save Bulma from herself"! Yeah, that's the ticket.
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Reviewed By: mona On: March 30, 2004 15:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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just lovely lovely lovely...good chapter and thank you for updating. i love your story
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 16:46 EST
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Ooooooh - they kissed huh?? I bet it was mostly due to Ratty Radditz's influence - him and his showing Vegeta what it felt like - the devil... Dang it's probably going to be even harder for them to keep themselves to themselves now!! Poor Vegeta, falling for a forbidden mortal. No way am I going to say poor Bulma - she got to have Radditz!! *Cries jealously* Hurry up and update... :D
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Title: Psst... it's phantomscribe72
Reviewed By: DAMNIT I AM SIGNED IN YOU *&^%(#$#@E$ On: March 26, 2004 21:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I love the interaction between Goku and Vegeta! My favorite scenes are between those two! Can't wait 'til the next update!
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Reviewed By: Bardock, Bardock, Bardock, Bardockgurl!! On: March 26, 2004 05:22 EST
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Ohhh - I love the interaction between Goku and Vegeta in this fic! I liked the crafty way Vegeta found out about Dr Briefs' life expectancy. Hurry up and update!!
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Reviewed By: saiyan_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 00:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t! What is Vegeta up to??? Ohh...I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: MaL On: March 23, 2004 09:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappie I love it I hope Bulma and Vegeta "get together" soon because its taking to long RRRR!!! lol update soon!
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