| "And We Were Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 240 ] |
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: MELM On: May 17, 2004 07:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! GOKU COULD LOSE HIS IMMORTALITY! NOW THERES A TWIST I WASN'T EXPECTING! I CAN'T WAIT FOR AN UPDATE! I'M HAPPY YOU GET TO SPEND TIME WITH YOUR HUSBAND! DON'T WORRY ABOUT NOT UPDATING! ITS OK TO HAVE A LIFE AWAY FROM FANFICTION LOL :) TAKE CARE
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: May 16, 2004 08:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the bar scene. SO, Goku is determined to keep Vegeta from evil huh? I think he might have bitten off more than he can chew...
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Reviewed By: joelie On: May 15, 2004 01:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O oh wow, i have been stunned w goku's pledge. i never thought about it. pls update soon. VEGETA RULZ!!
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Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 00:48 EDT
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So Goku made a deal with God - oh my - that was a surprise! How terribly sad for Bardock that his son didn't even recognize his own father. (Does the boy never look in a mirror?) I wonder what 'crisis' Vegeta will pretend Bulma needs him to stick around for after the wedding? Poor Dr. Briefs. It's hell staying healthy, ne? Great job once again!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 19:31 EDT
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NOOOOOO! will goku go to hell or something? will be become mortal? i dont think he would hate that to much but still not the best sinario possible for him... poor goku! i seriously love this fic! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Loss of Innocence On: May 14, 2004 18:48 EDT
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I am really glad that your husband is back! One of my best friends brother is currently stationed over there, out driving one of the tanks on the front lines. We are terrified for him. Anyways, I am loving every bit of this story, and the fact Goku is giving his life for Vegeta... wow. That is a great plot twist. I have said it before, I will say it again. Amazing.
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 13:26 EDT
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Good chapter--too short (natch!)--but good chapter. Everyone is settling a bit after the drama, but there's still one BIG hurdle to happiness. How is Goku going to pull this one out? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: CrypticMaia On: May 14, 2004 11:06 EDT
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Gah! Rating, not writing. Damn Nyquil. Sorry.
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: CrypticMaia On: May 14, 2004 11:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
looks up at her own writing Wow, I'm really glad I decided to follow your fic from ff.net to here. It's getting even better. I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, and congrats on having hubby back, I just got my boyfriend back as well.
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Reviewed By: otepoti2 On: May 14, 2004 09:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
horray great chapter
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 06:49 EDT
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O.o Good God woman!! Way to leave us hanging!! Get to work immediately and get the new chapter out!! A wonderful, wonderful chapter. - I was so disappointed when it ended... :( I LOVED the sneaky Dr Briefs' attempts to get his nicotine fix!! :D PLUS... Evelynn and Steven sound very familiar... :D AND you got my baby in there... *Heart eyes* my wonderful, wise, compassionate, sexy bayyybeeeee *Sigh* If this is what you come up with, maybe we should send that man of yours off more often... Or maybe that's a little selfish of me... :| Anyway - utterly GREAT chapter, wonderfully written - hurry up with the next one... :D
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Reviewed By: SilverMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 02:05 EDT
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Oh, that was great. So Vegeta is being 'bad', doing his own thing? I wonder where that'll lead us...And Yamcha is getting married. It's kinda hard to think of him as a married man, since usually he's too flirtarious. Anyway, write more!
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 03:33 EDT
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... Where was Bardock?? *Angry face* I said that I wanted Bardock in every single chapter!! I said that I wanted him to find happiness (Everlasting donchaknow) with the comely Emglish imp!! *Bursts into tears* Eh well, I suppose it was still a good read even without the glowering presence of The Gorgeous One... :( I'm very glad for Yamcha, but even more glad than usual that I'm not Bulma... Nasty day ahead for here there... Fancy seeing the handsome, dark warrior wed to another when all she has as a consolation prize is a celibate troll... Oh dear, I have to try and stop laughing at the poor woman's plight now... Hurry up with the next chapter... :D
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fantastic chapter! First of all, YAY FOR YAMCHA!!!! He finally gets a wife!!! Um... does Tea know about that freaky floating cat? Anyway, I love Vegeta saying he resented being called little! Made me laugh my hind end off! And finally, nanny-nanny-boo-boo to Goku! Leave the ardent little angel alone and let him have some fun! >.
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Reviewed By: iron kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 17:41 EDT
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Oh man... I'm too curious as to what Bulma has up her sleeve... could it be ultimate seduction? There's only so much a good boy could take ^_^. I've enjoyed this latest installment, and I can't wait for the next post. I hope to hear again from you soon!
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