| "And We Were Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 240 ] |
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Reviewed By: MELM On: May 03, 2004 10:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAWWWWW that was AWESOME! He's getting married.. well i guess i'm happy 4 him. Its great they are still such close friends! Vegeta is so cute.. he kissed her.. awww update soon! YOU ROCK!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Marci On: May 01, 2004 10:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! That was awesome! I wonder how Bulma is really going to take it when Vegeta really has to leave. But what does she think she has up her sleeve? Hmm...Well, only you know the answer to that :P
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Reviewed By: trunksgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 08:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ONce again a great chapter. I can't wait to see what bulma dose to keep him around!!! Please write more!
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Reviewed By: mona On: May 01, 2004 07:26 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god!!!! please...please update asap...wow...i want to know what happens next...this is getting good for bulma and vegeta i mean^_^
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 08:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... Good chapter... ... but you're going to make my poor Vegeta suffer, aren't you?
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Reviewed By: Jewel Trinath On: April 26, 2004 06:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's all your fault... :p hehe, i'm sitting here at almost 4 am reading this fanfic... but no.. you had to write too well so i just had to keep reading... so it's all your fault... o yea, post another chappie or twenty again soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 19:14 EDT
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Oh I always love it when a lecherous jerk gets his due! Bulma handled the 'situation' with Hikari splendidly and saved CC at the same time! So, now that the majority of stock is back in Briefs control, and Dr. Briefs is recovering at home, all that's left is Vegeta's decision, ne? All I'll say is if this fic follows "City of Angels" in any way, PLEASE don't let Bulma die right after Vegeta 'falls'!!!
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Reviewed By: Loss of Innocence On: April 23, 2004 16:12 EDT
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Hey, thanks for moving it over to Media Miner. Fan Fiction is really making me mad now-a-days. Well, anyways. That was a real plot twist having Vegeta find out he could turn mortal. That is really cool! I love the story, so update asap!
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Reviewed By: The Rogue Raven On: April 22, 2004 18:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I absolutely love your writing! It's really too bad that you had to take your work off FF.net, but I think I'll get over it if you still have me on your update list... ~*~Raven~*~
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Reviewed By: saiyan_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHA!!! That last part was so funny! I feel sorry for Vegeta, why should he leave her? That's going to be a tough decision for him....I hope he chooses the right choice....
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Reviewed By: iron kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 10:33 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thanks for updating. I am quite sorry to hear that ff.net took off your story... it will be their loss to lose such a talented writer. Anyway, I can just imagine how hard it is for Vegeta to leave Bulma after what they've been through together. This reminds me of that movie with Meg Ryan and Nicholas Cage in it. But... this has the elemental Vegeta roughness to it, it's not quite the same possession and obsession. Might I add that the last installment was rather short, I would've liked to read more, but then again, I'm sure you've heard all that before ^_^. Keep up the good work, and I hope you update again soon. iron kitty
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Reviewed By: saiyan_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 20:01 EDT
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OMG!!!! Vegeta won't be able to watch Bulma anymore??? WHY???? Oh man, this is NOT happening...I loved this chapter...Bulma was so devious...hehehe....please update soon...YOU HAVE TO!!!!! ^_________^
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 17:51 EDT
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Hooray! Bulma showed him who's the boss! What a genius! But what about poor Vegeta? Can he just go away? Me thinks not. . . !
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Title: OMG! It actually recognizes that I'm logged in!
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 16:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is my favorite chapter so far. I have to give credit to Bulma. She sure showed that lecherous bastard. Of course, I got no enjoyment whatsoever out of Vegeta punching Goku in the face and I didn't re-read that part ten times...
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Reviewed By: mona On: April 20, 2004 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
girl power!...girl power!...never blackmail a woman whos' IQ is a genuis...thank you for that i totally love it...please update asap...im dying to know what will happen to vegeta...
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