| "And We Were Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 240 ] |
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Reviewed By: debbiechan not logged in On: September 03, 2004 16:59 EDT
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Pain. It's about time he felt it. I loved "Now I wish I was dying." LOL.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 16:31 EDT
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Finally! I can't wait to see the reunion. I know Bulma's upset but I really hated to see her launching employees over a photo choice. Maybe she'll reconsider her impulsive actions once she has Vegeta safe and sound?
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 01:38 EDT
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Ooh, I just love it when Bulma's vicious!!! I also happen to love how her attitude completely changed when the officer called her. Even though she was so mad at Vegeta because she thought he left her, and now she has her answer as to his whereabouts. I just wanted to let you know that you are doing an amazing job on this story!!!
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Reviewed By: trunks 1 gurl On: August 26, 2004 02:22 EDT
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Ahhhhhh, how can you stop it there knowing your tourtureing all of your fans! Awesome so far good way of keeping the story going. Cant wait for more. trunksgirl
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: August 21, 2004 09:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Bulma is off to find Vegeta, but I have to wonder if his feelings are still as strong after having to endure such phusical and mental torment. MY POOR BABY!
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Title: Dude! Even though you're a chick! >
Reviewed By: Kay's Craft On: August 21, 2004 08:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god this story just gets better and better. Love the twists and the heaven thing! Does this mena that Goku is going to turn human too? Coz that would be so cool ^^. Mean but cool. Oooo Bulma was getting all rude like VEgeta would lie to her, though I can understand her feelings, especailly over the time gap. Sorry that I didn't get tot veivew the last time, but I haven't looked in my E-mail Inbox in like forever! Really looking forward to the next chapter hun :) Make it a gooden, though you won't have to try very hard ^^. Kay's Craft.
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Reviewed By: Salice On: August 19, 2004 07:33 EDT
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Never did well with rating things. Just came here to beg. Please please oh mighty fanfiction writer don't let Vegeta die. I love this fanfiction. You've really got an original story going here and you've pinpointed the personalities of the characters very well. (Maybe Goku is a tad more intelligent than he used to be but he needs it)
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 18:34 EDT
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ooh, here it comes. Very exciting. You're setting up the ending very well! Vegeta in a coma and Bulma speeding to the hospital! This is grand!
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Title: And We Were Angels"
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 18, 2004 07:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes yes yes yes....bring them together already....maria
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 03:29 EDT
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Great chapter. I really enjoyed the scene with Goku and Vegeta, de-shrouding him and casting him out. Very well done!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 01:19 EDT
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I'm so glad it worked!!! I can't wait to see what happens when Vegeta gets back to Bulma. Good thing he was found, or he could've died a little too early for our tastes.
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Title: SO SO PAINFUL!
Reviewed By: ~MeL~ On: August 15, 2004 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH my poor poor Vegeta!! I really hope he gets through this alright! would've been easier if they just turned bulma into an angel.. but i know they cant do that lol aww he got his wings cut off :( how painful! I cant wait to see what he has to go through next.. will it all work out? hopefully not like city of angels.. that was an awful ending to a movie! i cried so much!
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Title: oohhhh ooowwww
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: August 14, 2004 19:50 EDT
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ouch dont my wings off i want to stay an angel
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - not logged in On: August 14, 2004 12:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My poor, poor Vegeta! I bet you enjoyed writing that, didn't you? It was a great chapter, very vivid. I could almost feel his pain. I wonder if Bulma is really worth all that...
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Reviewed By: BerzerkFury On: August 13, 2004 23:14 EDT
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Kick ass! He did it! I thought Goku was gonna choke up and I was gonna cry. I can't wait to see what happens when Bulma finds out what he did... update asap!
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