| "And We Were Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 240 ] |
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Reviewed By: iron kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 12:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, she finally has more than a visual encounter with him! I got that warm and fuzzy feeling after reading this installment. Thanks for the update, and I can't wait to read more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 10:48 EST
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Oh my! Poor Vegeta. Of course, he never really had a chance did he? I'm really enjoying this. Good job.
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Reviewed By: saiya_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 03:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic! It's very orginal. Originality is the best way to go. LOVE IT! update soon pwease? !_! ~SD~
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Reviewed By: FatherMcRoury [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 13:22 EST
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Well, I've read this far, and since I always review what I read, here goes. The story so far is pretty good. Although I have seen stories along the angel idea, yours is very different from all of them. It reminds me of 'wings of desire', although again, your depiction is still different. Your casting is excellent, and the dialogue is a very nice mix, adding to the overall mood of each character. On the con, the only suggestion I have is that up until this last chapter, we really haven't seen Vegeta honestly struggle with any inner turmoil, and now he suddenly realises that he wants her. It just seems a bit too quick. Overall, this is an enjoyable story, and worth reading. I will be looking out for your next update. -RM
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Reviewed By: mona On: February 28, 2004 13:41 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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please update great story... i absutely love except for the part vegeta being an angel. never imagine him as a angel... but as an angel of death or a fallin angel then yes.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-if I logged in it wouldn't matter On: February 28, 2004 08:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God, I SO love this story. Poor, conflicted Vegeta! Wonderfully written, AM. One of the best B/Vs around.
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Reviewed By: iron kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 22:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty great! You've done exceptionally well at portraying Vegeta as the sweet rock of salvation for Bulma and contrasting that to the fang-baring protectiveness he has over her... I guess I'm just a sap -- it feels as if more needed to be said of Vegeta's affection toward Bulma, though I suppose you're making this a well-balanced fanfic meal rather than a sugar-gushing morsel for your adoring fans ^_^. Well done, and please keep up the great work! iron kitty
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 13:51 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! this is a really neat idea and it works very well! I love the Goku/Vegeta relationship (especially saving the children!). I'm looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Blue Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 13:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chappy, I am very happy at how fasr you're updating. The chapel scene was great and the Bardock remark made me think of Barb...anyways great job and please don't make me wait too long to know the answer to the burning question...What's my baby's plan for Vegeta!!!???
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Title: AWWA4
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: February 23, 2004 13:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL-you can't blame Bulma for not believing that Vegeta is an angel b/c he's too goodlooking to be one. As for Radditz, he just keeps popping in at the wrong time to bust Veg's chops ^_^. I hope Dr. Briefs gets better soon. His death would probably send Bulma off the deep end :(. I love this fic!
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 - I AM LOGGED IN YOU STUPID SITE! On: February 21, 2004 13:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor, poor Bulma... I love Radditz in this... The fic is incredible!
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl - still won't recognise I'm signed in :( On: February 21, 2004 06:00 EST
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:(( :(( Poor Dr. Breifs!!! Don't let him die!!! :(( I love Bulma's parents, they're so adorable... you already killed off her sweet, ditzy mother, please let her father live!! :(( On a lighter note... I'm half in love with Radditz in this fic! I love the way he keeps popping up, trying to mess with Vegeta... the little devil - he could almost give his glorious father a run for his money... :x
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Title: AWWA3
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: February 18, 2004 15:59 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chap and very emotional too! The tractor trailer part had my stomach tied in knots. You're so damn good at descriptions that I could visualize the whole thing. I love the power of the prayers part and how G/V saved the day ^_^. It's sad to admit that there are those who don't believe in God, but it's their choice, their right. You have to feel for Bulma and how devastated she feels regarding her dad and his failing health. If she only knew...her troubles are just beginning :(. Excellent job AM!!
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl - damn, not signed in... I could have flamed you! :(( On: February 18, 2004 06:34 EST
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This is such an astounding fic. I know I've read that truck scene more than once, but I still hold my breath, desperately praying for them to make it. So tense... This has got to be one of the best ideas I have ever read for a B/V fic, so fresh and original. I hope you get all the praise you deserve for it... Update soon, please... :D
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 - Carla On: February 17, 2004 13:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We can always count on you to raise the bar in B/V fanfiction. Incredible plot, incredible characterizations. The relationship between Goku and Vegeta is intense and interesting. Excellent job!
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