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Title: And We Were Angels
Reviewed By: mlf On: December 03, 2004 09:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh AMCM74 i want to cry.they didn't have enough time to be together or for her to tell him that he's going to be a daddy..WHY (i'm cring now)..please don't let him hurt her....maria
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 23:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that Vegeta would do something so stupid as to make a deal with Radditz. I also can't believe that he's going to kill Bulma. I hope Goku or someone interferes and stops him. I would love to see the guilt that Vegeta has when he finds out the problem was that Bulma is/was pregnant. I don't think Bulma would forgive him anytime soon.
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Reviewed By: spazzmic On: November 30, 2004 10:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good stuff, good stuff ^___^ please continue.
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Title: Holy crap!!!
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: November 10, 2004 22:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! OMG! OMG! POOOOOR Vegeta! Don't do it! She isn't worth it! *cough, cough* Wonderful chapter, do hurry with the next one so I can see if Vegeta is dumb enough to sacrafice himself for her AGAIN.
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: November 08, 2004 13:25 EST
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Well, I'm voting for Bulma to snap out of this funk and save Vegeta from making a bad choice. She's gotta grow up sometime!
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Reviewed By: theshakeyone On: November 08, 2004 10:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! When I first read the summary, I wasn't sure if anyone could pull off putting these characters in a different setting without making them OOC, but you pulled this off fantastically! keep the chapters coming! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 06:17 EST
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Ok, I want Vegeta to turn into a demon. This should be fun. But Bulma is just acting plain weird. I don't get why she's so cold--if she was worried about upsetting Vegeta with news of the baby, then why wasn't she worried about upsetting him with the sleeping in different rooms thing? Must be hormones. I've been there. I actually feel for Vegeta. I hope he turns into a demon and gives her back pregnancy hormones times ten! LOL.
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Bulma should've just come out and told Vegeta. She's only making it worse by hiding it. I hope Vegeta doesn't do something stupid like agree to Radditz. I'm hoping Bulma barges into the room in the nick of time (so to speak), to tell Vegeta about the pregnancy. I think he'd actually be thrilled.
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Title: And We Were Angels"
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 04, 2004 22:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh now it's getting so good.how we all go throught this everyday with our own lives...man and vegeta just got his..but i hope he knows better then that....and bulma i'm sorry but what an ASS come on..he was am ANGEL for crying out loud here......i think he would happy to be a DAD...oh i can't wait for more...thanks for this chapter it was a great one....maria
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 16:25 EDT
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I'm not sure why she's so bent out of shape, but she IS Bulma and her high-strung nature tends to make mountains out to molehills. Vegeta won't like it if she keeps it a secret though. More trouble on the way, no doubt, for these two.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: October 25, 2004 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy cow! I sure didn't see that one coming! Did you tell me she was going to get pregnant??? I can't remember! Geez, poor thing. What will she do? What will Vegeta do? Will we ever get to see Radditz torment poor Vegeta again? When will goku get what he deserves for torturing my poor Vegeta? Hurry up and answer my questions!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Bulma's pregnant!! I knew it was going to happen, but didn't think it'd be so soon. I thought she'd be happy about it. I hope she decides to keep it, and that Vegeta would want the baby too.
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Title: And We Were Angels"
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 23, 2004 19:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great chapter but i feel that bulma should tell vegeta about the pregnancy..you can't start keeping secrets so soon in a relationship i feel that he can handle it...and it will bring them closer to each other.but thats my opinion...maria
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 13:28 EDT
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You've graced us with another lovely lemon and another plot twist! Break out the cigars! I can't imagine Vegeta will take to the news badly, since he's been putting up with chick flicks and other little annoyances of life on Earth. I want to know what's up with Bardock's mate! This fic is far from over, isn't it? Good thing--it's very very entertaining.
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Reviewed By: alenkahz On: October 18, 2004 23:41 EDT
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sorry it took me so long to read this chapter and to review. i love this fic the more i read the more i get into it. please update soon.
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