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Reviewed By: nekofluffylover(not logged in) On: July 08, 2004 11:21 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent chapter, excellent story, and happy birthday!!!
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Reviewed By: NetealiaFoxwood1 On: July 08, 2004 09:17 PDT
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wow, good job and happy birthday mine was on the third hehehehe, anyway update soon and i hope you have a great day that spands out to 365. ~foxy~
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 08, 2004 09:07 PDT
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nice update, and congrats. =)
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Reviewed By: meq On: July 08, 2004 08:46 PDT
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wow, happy birthday! i just had mine the 5th. ^_^ july rox!
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Reviewed By: Hinoiri Fighter (not signed in) On: July 08, 2004 08:36 PDT
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Many happy wishes to you on your birthday! Congrats on getting the job too! Umm I gotta ask, is it possible for either of the mates to take away the youkai mark? And Kagome is not a youkai so how could she put a mark on Inuyasha? Just some thought there. Anyway great chapter as usual!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 08, 2004 08:12 PDT
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Happy birthday! and congratulations on getting a job! Excellent chapter, loved how you played out the moments between Inuyasha and Kagome and the one between Sesshomaru and Kagura. Seems that Rin is far more devious that given credit for. Hope all goes well, look forwards to the next chapter when you get time. Hope work doesn't get too stressful. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: July 08, 2004 07:10 PDT
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happy birthday to u happy birthday to u happy birthday dear luna chick...happy birthday to u!!! lol excellent chapter! thanks for takin the time to update on ur bday. congrats on getting a job too! i can handle one update a week =D this story is soo good! T I
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas Mate On: July 08, 2004 05:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the absolutely best stories I've read. has incredible plot and very beliveable. (sigh) I look for new chaps every day. keep updating. Oh and b/t/w Happy Birthday!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 01:17 PDT
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Okay. Now I feel stupid. Ignore that review. Anyway, awesome chapter. I just realized, in this chapter, not only is it Kagome/Inuyasha, it's Kagura/Sesshoumaru. x_x Happy birthday! :) Good luck with your job.
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Reviewed By: Kagome59 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 00:00 PDT
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GREAT STORY! HAPPY BIRTHDAY AND CONGRATULATIONS ON THE JOB. Hopefully your updates wont be so reduced and im so happy im the first 1 to read this chapter. Because im always up so late, hell i was up when you updated at in the morning.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 01:56 PDT
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Oh, wow. Ignore my last review. I didn't realize that more than likely there is a new chapter coming out in the near future. Hope you update soon. ^^
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 01:54 PDT
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Nooo! It's over ;_; Atleast, I think it is. Anyway, very good job on your whole story. It's been a blast reading it from the start; quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. I hope you start up a new story soon, as I am interested in reading it. Thank you for 'enlightening' me with your wonderful writing. :)
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Reviewed By: Kikyo_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 20:28 PDT
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Your story rox. Will Kagome ever find out her Grandfather's secret?
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Reviewed By: Elisa On: July 06, 2004 15:42 PDT
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Woah, that chapter was hot!! I loved how you portrayed the wedding night, the emotions were really intense. I'm feeling really bad for Sess right now. Kagura is absolutely refusing to try to work things out. Why won't she just forgive Sess? Seems to me that she betrayed him for worse then he ever betrayed her- which wasn't even his fault. She should give him a break. And I loved the Sango/Miroku scenes at the wedding. They just went public with their relationship to their families & their mothers are alreeady planning the wedding! Now I'm going to really expect their mom's to kidnap them or do something crazy because of the stunt they tried to pull.
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Title: update
Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really really good! You have to update soon! I want to see what happens between Kagome and Inuyasha when Kagome finds out that Inuyasha knew about Keiji's secret!
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