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Title: omfg
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 23:16 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps hands* omfg that was such a good job!!!!!! ^_^ do u plan on comtinueing it and having them have babys???? i hope u do this is such a good fic !!!!!! ^_^ keep up the good work! oh and update!!! if u continue i hope u do!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 04, 2004 22:12 PDT
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good story.
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Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 21:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's insanely difficult to write a good lemon, but you have exceeded the standards in this single chapter! Thanks for keeping this long-anticipated scene romantic yet real, steamy yet not raunchy. In short: you rock. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 20:35 PDT
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that was GREAT!!!!!!!!! i give that chappy a 10!!!!! seeshy and kagura need to stop acting stupid and get together!!!!!!!!!!!! but i loved the chappy!!!!!!!!!!! plz update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hiarashi-chan On: July 04, 2004 20:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story on ff.net, because I really don't like mm.org all that much, but I had to read the lemon... It was awesome!! Very well done, especially your first one... Update soon!
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Title: You're the Best!!
Reviewed By: Kaoru-chaness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 19:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA!!! Finally!!! I can't believe they finally did it!!!! I was like waiting for that since this story began!!! Thanks for being patient with Kagome... you made this chapter worth the wait :)You made everything worth the wait. You're a great writer, you inspire me. I don't know why but i felt that i owed that to you. You make my reading experience the best. Thanks, to my favourite artist, thats what you are, the best... and I hope what i say makes you feel worth something more than the other writers. Because you are... atleast to me...You're the best and i look up to you. It may sound sappy but it's the truth.. thanks :)... Cant wait till you update!! Yours truly: signed- Kaoru-chaness (or when im not signed in...Your loyal and faithful Zoingy)
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Reviewed By: Moo-Moo-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD You deserve 20s in Style of Writing, Originality, and Enjoyment Factor. ^_^ It's just so unbelievable that you write so well... This is one of my top favorites. Trust me when I say you are not, in any way, bad at writing, lemons, limes, or any sexual activity ^_- Beautiful
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Reviewed By: Moo-moo-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD You deserve 20s in Style of Writing, Originality, and Enjoyment Factor. ^_^ It's just so unbelievable that you write so well... This is one of my top favorites. Trust me when I say you are not, in any way, bad at writing, lemons, limes, or any sexual activity ^_- Beautiful
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Reviewed By: Moo-moo-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD You deserve 20s in Style of Writing, Originality, and Enjoyment Factor. ^_^ It's just so unbelievable that you write so well... This is one of my top favorites. Trust me when I say you are not, in any way, bad at writing, lemons, limes, or any sexual activity ^_- Beautiful
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Reviewed By: great job On: July 04, 2004 17:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is fantastic. I've known English majors that are far less talented.
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Reviewed By: Demoness_Smut [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 16:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally found you on mm.org...I must review you I HAVE TO! You deserve it. Seriously this story is overwhelming.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 04, 2004 15:39 PDT
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That was one of the most well writen lemons I have read in a long time. While it certainly covered their exploits in detail it never lost the sense of the plot it was driven by and avoided the trap of simply becoming a scene of mindless sex. Excellent chapter, I look forwards to reading more. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 11:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woohu! i loved it. awesome job writing the lemon, i cant wait to see what happens next. update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 10:15 PDT
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wonderful lemon and excellent chapter!!
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Reviewed By: NetealiaFoxwood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 23:26 PDT
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i love your story. i dare say it is one of the best i have ever read and i have read quite a few. i can't wait to read the remainder of your story so please update soon. ~foxy~
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