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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 23:46 PDT
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u r truly a gifted riter & i look 4ward 2 future chapters. thanx in advance! ~*~Cat~*~
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 02, 2004 17:48 PDT
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Beautiful chapter. Love the way this continues to play out. Now the question that remains is will Inuyasha and Kagome stay together and will Sesshomaru and Kagura ever manage to sort themeselves out. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: omfg
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 12:41 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so good and the way u make all the chap.s long was good too!!! :-D keep up the good work oh and by the way where r they going on honymoon?? good job update soon i want to kno! ^_^
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 14:03 PDT
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yeay theyre married!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 13:44 PDT
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aw inu is sooo cute proposing to her like that. sess n kagura r just idiots lol too damn stubborn. souta n rin together...now thats cute. ur awesome and this is such an original creative fic!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 02:27 PDT
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Caught up with the past three chapters. They were fantastic! It saddens me to know that you're ending it soon, since I have started reading it since there were only a couple chapters up. I hope you enjoy ending this story :)
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 22:55 PDT
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that chappy was GREAT!!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!! plz update really really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SakuraBaby [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 22:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you for creating this story. Oh thank you oh great one! Please update soon
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Title: chap 6
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 18:29 PDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY!!
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 17:18 PDT
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just started reading...seems great!
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint (nli) On: June 30, 2004 14:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome! they are married now!! and in love!! great stuff keep it up!!
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Title: The Ad
Reviewed By: C to the Izzle On: June 29, 2004 19:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I began to read your story on fanfiction.net, and as I continued to read, I began to love the story more and more. I haven't read a lot of InuYasha fan fiction, but for some reason, I feel that this will probably be some of the best I will read. I'm very glad to see how well your story is developed, and I'm glad to see that you took time to develope the characters instead of rushing into it, assuming that everyone knew the characters. Overall... this fiction is really great. Wonderful!
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: June 28, 2004 22:38 PDT
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that was GREAT!!!!!!!! soo sweet!!!!!! i hope sesshy and kagura get back together!!!!!! and inuyasha and kagome stay together when her grandpa tells her the truth!!!!!! plz update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 18:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way things are developing between Sesshomaru and Kagura...the unanswered questions (ex: Sesshomaru's clause from his father's will) and the foreshadowing of doom and gloom to come have me excited for the next chapter! Thanks for the frequent updates!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 28, 2004 17:01 PDT
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Like I said before sorry for the delay. This was another excellent chapter, I am shocked that some people missed it but I think there has been a lot of Inuyasha falling for Kagome, just it was never over stated and always reflected quietly in his changes of behaviour. Glad to know so many people appreciate your work, it is truely excellent. I look forwards to seeing what the next chapter holds and finding out what exactly is the condition that Sesshomaru is bound by. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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