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Reviewed By: NekoFluffylover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 16:55 PDT
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and i hope you got the job!
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Reviewed By: NekoFluffylover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 16:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! that was really really good...dammit, now i have 2 start working on the lemon for my fic. but WOW!! ur lime was sooo good
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 13, 2004 16:42 PDT
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Excellent chapter! Good luck with the job interview and don't worry about the lemon. Lime works just as well (at getting their intemacy across, nothing else). Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: HAILY On: June 12, 2004 16:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story ,keep up the great job!
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: Eikos Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 21:01 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely wonderful. it's so cute how inuyasha fell in love with kagome, and it actually looks like she's starting to fall too. ^_^ but i wonder if they do end up sleeping togeather in the next chap if kagome will regret it when she wakes up (AHH!! >.< ) but anyway, i can hardly wait to see what comes next. great story.
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Title: UpDaTe!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: June 06, 2004 18:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, nice story! I usually don't read Inu/Kag stories, only Sessh/Kag. But yours is really interesting. Your fic is one of the few Inu/Kag I read. Very nice and interesting. Update soon! ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: June 04, 2004 01:17 PDT
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Awesome chapter. Hope you update soon?
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 19:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOO VERY VERY GOOD BUT I STILL HATE CLIFFHANGERS
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Reviewed By: NetealiaFoxwood [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 22:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic... its great... please update soon...
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: smittin kittin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 14:37 PDT
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How much do I love this story! Does Kag know nothing of dog demons? When she told Inu she was his did she not understand how possesive he would get? I love the chemetry between both couples! Can't wait to see if S/K can get over the past & work the kinks out of their relationship! I hope Ses. doesn't do any perminant damage to Kags brother! As always looking forward to the next chap. Thanks for posting such a fab fic! Hugs & Kisses!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 31, 2004 16:20 PDT
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Excellent chapter! Interesting how that simple action seems to have drawn Sesshomaru and Kagura together...almost. I hope Kagome and Inuyasha don't go too far...although one could say that kagome has it all in hand...oh and no, I'm not explaining that one ^_^ Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme (too lazy to log in) On: May 30, 2004 15:06 PDT
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Awesome chapter. Hope you update again soon ^^
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Reviewed By: Roane On: May 28, 2004 05:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! The main story line is original, but the subplots are my favorite. They keep the action going along even if the main couple hits a road block. Hope for more!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 19:41 PDT
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Hi! I like your story but what happened to your writing style in this last chapter? There was no punctuation and it was hard to follow. Please go back to the way you were writing before. Thanks and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 27, 2004 17:13 PDT
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Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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