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Title: kawaii fun
Reviewed By: BritneyKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 15:57 PDT
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Hey i really liked this.Very cute photos.whats up with the no punctuation?(sp?)please update soon
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 04:21 PDT
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Wow. Great chapter. So Hojo was stepping out on Kagome. I personally thought he was gay. Maybe he is a sadist? What was with the way he hurt Kagome? Bastard... If she swore him off not to touch it is time to dump him... How else did she expect to get married and have kids? Anyways great chapter. I pray that Souta will live while dating Rin. Though it would be weird if they hooked and Kagome and Inuyasha got married. I mean his bother-in-law is dating his niece. Ouch Jerry Springer time. lol Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 17:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very glad you posted, and it is nice to know that you are going to resume updating in regular intervals. (Once a week sounds nice, so you won't be spoiling us :-). As for the number of chapters in this story...I can understand how writing fifty chapters on the same fanfiction would get to be insanely tedious, but this is a great story, and I hate to see the overall plot suffer because of leaps in time. Just do what you feel is best, this is all your creative vision, afterall, and I'm sure we, the readers/reviewers, won't feel slighted if you nudge Inuyasha and Kagome to the altar a little quicker. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 22, 2004 17:41 PDT
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First of all allow me to say congratulations on completing your thesis and graduating. I can tell you now...it all goes downhill from here... But seriously I do miss college but work isn't that bad when you get used to it. Excellent chapter, really enjoyed it. Don't worry about the updates, not fair to expect you to be able to with so much going on. I only look forwards to reading them when you get chance to write. In fact I'm half tempted to head over to FF.Net and continue reading this there but I started reading it on this one so here it will stay. Plus I have you on favorite authors here so this is where I get the alerts from... Sorry, rambling again. I do that alot don't I? Till next time good luck & best wishes, hope the inevitable job hunt goes well. Hououza
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Reviewed By: Malific [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 05:24 PDT
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Great to see you back, and nice to know you'll be updating regularly again. But more importantly!! Don't try to cut a story short just because you want it to be under X amount of chapters. If you have chapeters to write, write them, no reader minds a story that doesn't end, so long as it stays interesting.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 01:56 PDT
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Awesome chapter. I don't mind the lack in updates. They usually don't seem to bother me as long as they don't sit there... collecting dust XD
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Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 14:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since this is my first review, my comments may seem a little random, but bear with me. I started reading at chapter one, and before I knew it, the thought of stopping to review from chapters one through eleven was out the window, I just had to know what happened. Thus, you get one mass review for everything, haha. Anyway, I had a sinking suspicion I would like this story, just from reading the extended synopsis. I love the whole movie preview style you give to your summaries, using that fail-proof formula of booming narrator voice and catchy dialogue to hook the audience, er, reader. I'm a fan of "onion" stories, the kind that have storylines running in different layers, (kind of a corny thought, but it works), and you've made me a happy reader indeed, with so many different objectives floating around. Keep up the good work, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: crAzibuNNi On: May 11, 2004 18:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! *falls of chair leg twitches* tht was soo amazing!! i wonder what inu will do now that he is all demon? please update soon before i rip all my hair out for waiting to long *gid smile* ^___^ Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: thoughts On: May 10, 2004 12:22 PDT
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What a wonderful light hearted story. I'm really enjoying reading it. I like Inuyasha's frustrations, Kagome's innocence and Souta's cheek. :)
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Title: Fanfiction.net
Reviewed By: Radhik14024 On: May 08, 2004 06:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!!! All of us at fanfiction.net are waiting desperatley for your update!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster On: May 07, 2004 17:14 PDT
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This is really good! I wasn't going to read it, but one day I said to myself, "hey, why not". This is way better then I was expecting. Please update soon. I've been checking compulsively everyday since you last updated. It's at such a good point! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Rin_sama1989 On: May 05, 2004 14:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hay.If I come out sounding a little depressed,well I have a good reason. You see I don't normaly review because I dont realy think my opinion was ever realy important to the auther.I would say something nice and thay would email me and throgh insults in my face,but I still read their works cuase like I tell them thay are realy good. By far your's is the best I've read.I feal as though I'm i the very room as the characters which is not always the best place to be.You Have given them such a diferent aditude without loosing sight of the characters original personality. You can actualy just strip them of their original names,and a few other minor details and turn this into your own little novel.I enjoied reading this and am looking forward to reading more of your works.Anyway I'm going to get back to my reading. hopeing you continue, Rin
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Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds~Lia~ On: May 03, 2004 14:09 PDT
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This is absoultly amazing!!! Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Nooooooo
Reviewed By: beanner On: May 03, 2004 12:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... you cannotleave it like this.... *sigh*... plz update soon you are killin me. I love this story it is one of the best i have read in a while. keep up the good work hun. ja ne... ^-^
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 21:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very exciting and what does A.D.D. mean?
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