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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 02, 2004 16:07 PDT Comment/Review: Ok, I better say this first...excellent chapter! Now as for the comments...I really really hope he doesn't do what I think he is gong to do...that would be...bad. Looking forwards to finding out! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: black wolf girl Reviewed By: BritneyKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 09:40 PDT Comment/Review: omg inuyasha!!!!please update! how could you leave us hanging?!?!? *cries*
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Reviewed By: Bob_the_youkai On: May 02, 2004 00:16 PDT Comment/Review: *Screaming* i must know what happens!!!!! *Screams in horror as she realizes that this fic is almost over* no!!!!!!!!! you story is bomb! i can't wait for you to update!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 22:37 PDT Comment/Review: Oooh, wow--this is getting interesting. Good chapter, I hope you update soon... I can't wait to see what will happen between Kagome and Inuyasha. Perfect time for her to get into heat XD
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 02:05 PDT Comment/Review: Oh this is wonderful, great, and just plain awesome. Please, please, please write more!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 28, 2004 15:14 PDT Comment/Review: Excellent chapter! Glad to see Inu has finally worked out what he wants, unfortunate he might lose it before he gets to enjoy it... Congrats to the other two, looks like they are well one their way! Looking forwards to the next chapter, Hououza
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 00:30 PDT Comment/Review: Good chapter... I hope Kagome will be saved from her grandfather's wrath. Heh, anyway... that's all I have to say, update soon. ;)
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Title: black wolf lover Reviewed By: BritneyKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 16:46 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey I love this but very ooc but i love ooc because they make the stories so much better.Well i hope you dont get writers block from this and if you ever need any advice im all ears. Please update soon but make sure you get enough rest first
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Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 12:08 PDT Comment/Review: i. too stumbled on this fic by accident and can't wait for the nextchapter. PLEEEEEEEEEZE update soon!?!
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Reviewed By: peacecraft906 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 18:42 PDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I stumbled on this fic by accident and now i am hooked!!! I love it and I hope the next chapter is out soon!! I also like the AN's. well best of luck to you and I look forward to new chapters...soon!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 24, 2004 16:34 PDT Comment/Review: Excellent chapter! Didn't know you were on FanFiction.net also, may have to start reading this there... With regards to the 'adult' scenes, I'm 24...is that old enough? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 09:59 PDT Comment/Review: Heh, good chapter. Shippou missing his Saturday morning anime, heh. Don't have anything else to really say, but good luck and I hope you continue writing as fast as you are doing.
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Title: is it just me? Reviewed By: Just-Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 15:06 PDT Comment/Review: hey...is it just me or the whole mediaminer system...? I could only see 32 reviews...:S that's scary! UH OH- MY COMP MUST BE DEAD! great story! i like it a lot- but please turn Inu into a much civilized person not some kind of sex holic.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 22, 2004 17:28 PDT Comment/Review: Well it was beautiful as ever. Personally I enjoy your writing style, I know my opinion doesn't could for much but I have read a few hundred fan fictions in the past few years so I would hope to knwo something about them. Your preise for this is a...I'm not sure if noble would be the right word. I am glad to see a story focused on romance rather than animal passion as I have read more than a few lemons and have seen raw and unbridled sex at its worst. I look forwards to seeing more of this work as it has been a joy to read so far and has been one of those few that shows insight and a deeper understanding of the motive that drive the characters. Appologies for the length of this, I tend to ramble from time to time. I hope you will accept my sincerest wishes of luck with this and I look forwards to having the chance to follow this through to the end. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: wj On: April 22, 2004 15:19 PDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: The word is "mine", not "mines". 'Sorry, that just irritates me. Otherwise, you have a good story. Please continue!
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