| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 15:09 PST
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I'M CURED! Praise the Almighty, I am healed! I thought I was over my Vegeta fixation this weekend. I was also feeling blah over a retarded UTI and then I read this! *does cartwheel* *LOVES Vegeta again* *loves Tempest too*
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Title: GetaGirl 247
Reviewed By: GetaGirl 247 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 14:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl, this chapter was off the chain. I am sooo glad that he didn't go through with the murder. I like how he "made love" to her; not just mindless f*cking. Also, the song Em More, is on fire. Ever since I have downloaded it, I just can't stop listening. Waiting for another chapter....:)
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Reviewed By: devinyx On: March 28, 2005 09:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely beautiful and the last chapter was just great. One of the best "sex" scenes i've read.
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Reviewed By: TT On: March 28, 2005 09:39 PST
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I am so so so happy! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 01:50 PST
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*Twitches* IloveBardockIloveBardockIloveBardockIloveBardockIloveBardock. Sometimes you make that hard to remember. (Well, actually, that's a downright lie - no one could make me forget my Bardock worship - but you come pretty darned close) That was... was... so... very.. 'Hot' seems such a lame word - but it's your fault. You're the one who took my words away with this chapter. Hmmm - gonna have to make Bardock read this, and act it out for me. That way, I will either get my words back, or I'll be reduced to even more of a quivering wreck than I am now. Either result is fine by me - it's the getting there that counts :D Thumbs up on yet another excellent chapter and another wonderful Tempest lemon. Thank youuuuuuu.
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 23:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww that was hot u go gurl
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: March 27, 2005 20:08 PST
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aww how cute, ehem if you can call a lemon cute.
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Reviewed By: animelovera [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 19:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 19:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was completely worth the wait. It was amazing; the way that you captured both sides of the encounter was fantastic. I can't wait to read your next chapter. The rest of your story is just as amazing as that lemon.
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Title: the song...
Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: March 12, 2005 17:36 PST
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i was kinda wondering... do u think u could tell us where to find the song??? please??? i wanna hear it!!! thanx!!! ~_^
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 14:33 PST
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Hmmm - is Vegeta actually going to go through with the assasination? I honestly have no idea. Half of me thinks that Bulma's words may have got through to him, the other half is keeping a clear eye on the Saiya-jin disregard for death. (Bless 'em!) Hmmm, I suppose I'm going to have to wait until you're ready to update until I find out... :D VERY good chapter - and VERY good to see you back and posting :D
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Title: Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 14:41 PST
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very powerful and touching..the spirit of this chapter is very rear and i touches us because we see how much they see in one another and how much we root for them and their happiness...
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Reviewed By: TT On: March 08, 2005 08:25 PST
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good! but this cant be the last chapter right? why does the intro says it is completed? i need a happy ending! btw i think "a stranger's kiss", a one shot of yours, has a good starting and potential to develope into a touching full story.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 16:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Temp, I just wanted to tell you that the formatting for this chapter is really messed up. I went and read it on your website, so it's all good (lol). But anyhow, you have to format it a special way before you post it. If you have Microsoft Word (it's what I use, and I figured out how to fix the formatting problem), then you have to hit enter/return in between every paragraph and also have a space like you have in between words. That way mm.org registers that there are paragraphs and spaces in between them. I don't know why it's doing this, but I have to edit everything I put on here now because of it. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 15:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, yeah. This chaper is all messed up. The paragraphs aren't seperated and there's no spacing between sentences. It was fantastic, just a little hard to read.
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