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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: December 04, 2006 18:35 PST
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Awesome, can't wait for more.
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Title: Well...
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 17:22 PST
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Well amazing they finally made it back, now plies the question my romantic side always wants to know.....will he forgive her? Will they have their own twisted happily ever after? I can't wait to find out
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Reviewed By: kinoko *not signed in* On: December 04, 2006 17:15 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was so excited to see that you updated! I like this chapter, a very nice tie in to the 'current' universe in regards to DBZ. I wonder if that 'glow' is more than just love Bulma is displaying-- hint hint. I suppose Trunks is soon on the way! I love this story!!! -kinoko
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE SOON! On: December 04, 2006 14:53 PST
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Oh wow! That was a great chapter. I really thank you for updating. I thought you gave up this story. Anyways I hope that Vegeta starts socializing with Bulma again. You know having a conversation. Incredible chapter and cant wait for the next one! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 14:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yippee you updated, just love this story, keep up the good work
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Title: so good!
Reviewed By: backdoor [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 19:44 PST
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i love your story! i love the romance (kind of, i guess, lol) and i love the andst, everything is blended really well together. you have me really pulling for them. you writing is also very good. refreshing when you read so many bad fanfics. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 15:03 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Dear god! This story evokes so many emotions from the reader that it is almost as if one can actually FEEL what the character's are experiencing. Amazing. You have much talent and you can bet that I will definately be around for the next installment of this story. Your writing is simply awe inspireing, very good work! I'm absolutely in love with this story :) -kinoko
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 11:03 PST
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I hope you didn't think I had abandoned this fic. Life has been difficult lately, and reading has gone to the bottom of my list, but I finally found some time to catch up. 'ness, that's beautiful stuff. I admit to being somewhat disappointed by the cliche of having Bulma (or any heroine) have to feign hatred to save her love, but as usual, you always manage to make the "cliche" your own, adding your own wonderful words and plot twists. You'd think I'd have learned by now that you are better than any cliche. You are really so talented, and it pisses me off when people talke about the "old days of the great writers" because as far as I'm concerned, there's still great B/V fiction being written and you're doing it. And now for the quick spork: Update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 00:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot as ever
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Reviewed By: snowbird7939 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 21:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Agaibn as you said it was short but interesting, you know we are so looking forward to more. I commend you for being so determined to write more on this story, it's excellent, and I always get so excited when I see that you have posted more up. Please write more soon, looking forward to more of this wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: October 14, 2006 06:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhh! That was so mean! But Bulma should've known better than to mess with a man's pride...Especially when said man is Vegeta. I will forgive you for the lack of smut, because I know how shitty our lives can be when we're working. But I warn you...next time...I will come to collect!
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Title: UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
Reviewed By: UPDATE SOON! On: October 13, 2006 13:23 PDT
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That was a very good chapter. I hope that Vegeata will forgive Bulma someday. For some reason I have the feeling that Bulma is going to leave Vegeta when he doesnt realize it OR she is going to be badly injured to the point of death that Vegeta will leave her or for give her. But then again who knows? Great chapter and I hope that you update SOON!
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: zonkiethegreat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 06:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been working on my B/V Fanfic for as long as you have been writing this fic! I have been reading it since the very beginning, loved the beginning, but must admit once they were on Frieza's ship and all i got a little bored! I was like oh no...now a whole battle with vegeta and frieza that will last 10 chapters...but then you twisted it all up and made it AWESOME. Finally someone made Bulma more then a damsel in distress. And checked into her psyche! I LOVE IT! You have quite the imagination! Where do you come up come up with this stuff!??
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: October 12, 2006 21:20 PDT
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nice chapter... the development of their relationship at this point is amazing
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: October 10, 2006 20:00 PDT
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Can't wait for more.
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