| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: backdoor [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 20:11 PDT
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PLEASE POST A NEW CHAP!!! i'm goin into withdrawl.... :(
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 22:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope your still writing and haven't given up on this fic. I really love this story. Can't wait to see more from you.
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Reviewed By: Jill1 On: April 25, 2007 13:08 PDT
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MORE PLEASE!! :)
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Reviewed By: leelo779 On: April 21, 2007 14:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i used to follow this fic YEARS ago but then i stopped reading ffs about dragonball z. then...i dunno...you could say i 'came back' and i reread the whole thing. i dont even know what to say, really. but...update soon please! i love this story!
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Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE! On: April 19, 2007 13:01 PDT
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE! On: April 09, 2007 12:09 PDT
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WOW! This is very good. You portrayed Vegetas emotions as raw and elemental not sappy or weak and I thought that it brought out the real Vegeta. I really cant wait to see what happens next between those two. Will Vegeta ever forgive Bulma or will he carry out his promise? PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON!
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Reviewed By: gohans_onna2 On: April 07, 2007 19:18 PDT
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I hope that everything eventually turns out ok...I was excited when I saw you had updated your story because I haven't checked my email in like a month...haha maybe I should do it again and maybe you'll have updated again!
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Reviewed By: Izandria Johnson [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 06:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read a lot of your fics and this is great. I love your writing style and how expressive you are, not to mention that you also have a great story idea. I'm going to love reading the next chapter. I'm so glad you're still continuing this.
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Title: blahh..
Reviewed By: tranny On: March 26, 2007 01:21 PDT
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oh my gosh. i should either congratulate you for leaving me once again feeling regret that i finished this chapter too quickly and now i have to wait for another month and probably a half until you update again >:[ ORR i should just throw an angry fit at my keyboard and jam out a whole bunch of #@%!&$! (hee i'd never do that at you! =P ) into this comment because you've definitely left the chapter ending at one of the most heartwarming parts of this story! i was wishing and hoping over and over again that this chapter wouldn't end and then i scroll down and see the stupid mediaminer frame and my heart just sank..ahh! this story is great.. i absolutely love it.. and i absolutely adore you and your abilities to write so well .. the last two paragraphs of the story was very touching.. i listened to the song as i was reading through the last part and i could have sworn i bulma sitting in that same room with poor vegeta. great chapter :] all i can say is that it was very very touching! it's also very sad. i have no doubts that your writing can make me shed tears. good job :D update soon !!
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Reviewed By: anonalley On: March 25, 2007 13:34 PDT
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Well yeah. She isnt the woman she used to be. But love makes us blind as bats. I hope she'll find her peace and tell Vegeta to get lost. Because you see eventually we all get our sight back, it only takes a little time and some harsh treatment. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 04:51 PDT
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do I even need to say how great this chappie was?? I do?? okay...it was GREAT!:P so..well done and please continue...I'm just dying to know if Vegeta will forgive Bulma..someday..sometime..I hope!! and I agree with pisq...we look forward to the make up lemon..there is gonna be one..right?? oh well..you'll sort it out just right..I'm sure...well..I wish you much inspiration with this fic but also luck in your life! kissies EV
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Reviewed By: The_Enforcer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 21:49 PDT
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Greetings, Hey! What took so long! Lol. I can't wait to see more, I love your story. I'm glad that they both finally got pissed. I hope Bulma and Vegeta can fix things. And when is Bulma going to finally get knocked up? hmmmmm? heheheh ugh it's so sad that there having such a hard time but the make-up sex should be great *coughs* sorry ehhh. Okay anyways You'd better get more out soon *waves kendo stick at you* or else. I love your story please please get more out soooon. -The Enforcer
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: March 24, 2007 20:14 PDT
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'ello, so I enjoyed it, quite spectacular, especially since this chapter really shows the differences in their characters... It's good... can't wait to see what happens next...
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Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: cera [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 17:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The writing style is absolutely wonderful in this fic. You rarely see Vegeta portrayed so accurately. As always,I will wait (patiently) for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 13:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im dying to know whats going to happen next!! update
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