| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: Evil CLiffy On: October 09, 2006 17:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! That chapter was off the hook yo!
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Title: UPDATE UPDATE!
Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! On: October 07, 2006 09:35 PDT
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON! You left us at a cliffhanger! Ahhh! Anyways I hope you update ASAP. I really want to see what happens next. Till later!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: October 04, 2006 18:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now it all culmonates. You've put a window in Bulma and Vegeta's souls and I see clearly what the whole set up was for. Excellent work. Bulma finally sees what Vegeta has gone through having faced it. And the way in which he 'snapped her out' of her funk was 100 percent Vegeta. Always terrific to read. Masterpiece.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: October 04, 2006 10:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Crap!!!!!! That was so totally hot!!! Deep, raw, angry..wow!! You're the best! Keep on going! I ought to try that with my boyfriend!
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Title: chap 29
Reviewed By: venus legacy( not logged) On: October 03, 2006 12:44 PDT
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Your showing me the different tones of love, Vegeta's dark way of loving, how closely it veers on the edge of hate. Yet it is always intense, always extreme. I wonder if Vegeta will really kill Bulma in the end, before I said to my self he won't for the amount of times he saved her. But now I am not so sure, the nature and circumstances of their relationship seems to rule out a happy ending. It started dark and deadly will it end this way too? Wow, this story is good, I always look forward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: Nice Chapter On: October 03, 2006 08:43 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really out did yourself this time. Very nice
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Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 06:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, no fair. Bulma has more backbone than this. Even if she loves the guy she should be very offended of his treatment. I hope Vegeta will lose her (temporarily of course) so he'll be forced to acknowledge his feelings the stubborn bastard. Beautiful chapter as always. You're the Queen of DBZ.
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Reviewed By: UPDATE PLEASE On: October 02, 2006 21:51 PDT
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OMG! That was a great chapter! I hope that Bulma and Vegeta get past their differences. And I cant wait to see what Vegeta has in mind for punishment. HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: snowbird7939 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 16:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
staright up twn that was awesome, I loved it, this is my favorite fanfiction of all time and I was completely ecstatic when I saw that you updated, I cant believe you left off there, I am going to be crazy waiting for the next part to see what happens. Seriously though are youlike a professional writer? This stuff is really really good and if not you should seriously consider turning this work in as a spin off, they have a bunch of spin offs for DBZ book-wise. But whatever please post more soon, and I mean real soon.!!!!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: October 02, 2006 13:49 PDT
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that was good...
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Reviewed By: Geta's Angel On: October 02, 2006 09:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. I can't wait to see what's next for the couple. Keep up the good work girl.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: October 02, 2006 09:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooo!! Why'd you stop there!!! *pouts* Oh well, I hope you give us details in the next chapter what happened. Glad to see that your writing again. I'm not into DBZ fanfiction like I use to be (I kinda moved on to Inuyasha now), but your fics...and a few others; I come back for. I still enjoy your stories very much. Please keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next one to come out :)
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 09:11 PDT
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Nice, very dark, but realistic.
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 06:48 PDT
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what can I say....MORE MORE MORE....gods I'm loving this fanfic!! Needing this fanfic...ever heard of drugs?? Gods...this fanfic is a TRUE drug and man! Am I addicted!! Ur fantastic...please please go on and I'll never stop loving you!!! Lovies!! EV
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 05:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, now thats a punishment i wouldn't mind, excellent chapter, please update soon...
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