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Reviewed By: Liorella On: December 20, 2007 02:29 PST
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Wow. Wait a minute while I get my wits back, mmkay? Absolutely amazing. I read all that you have posted so far in two nights, completely ignoring the little voice in my head telling me I should be doing something productive... like sleeping. During every chapter, I would think, 'okay, I'll stop after this chapter'. But of course not, because that would mean that I would have to stop reading, and that is a big no-no. That one chapter "Devil's Feast" has to be one of the most amazingly written chapters out there. It was dark, it was gruesome, it made me feel sick, but the story would have fallen flat on it's proverbial face without it. It was a complete necessity. The sad part is, from now on, anytime I read anything I'll be comparing it to your writing and will no doubt find that it pales in comparison. My God. Just, wow. The entire story has me hooked, beginning to finish. Darling, you are utterly amazing. Keep up the fantastic work and know with out a doubt that I will be waiting patiently for this story to continue. Hell, for a piece like this, I would keep on checking for a LONG time.
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Reviewed By: earlsblueeyedangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 13:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I can't wait for the rest of it!!! If I could give you a higher rating than ten I would.
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Reviewed By: little Rini On: December 05, 2007 12:15 PST
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Please write soon. (>'.')> Please
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Title: OMG!!!!!
Reviewed By: thoughtless [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 04:14 PST
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i am creaming my little white panties!!!! this is sooooo good. i been waiting forever and a day for an update...so worth it. just get another chapter up before x mas and i will be have a full on climax :D xxx
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Title: Damn!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 04:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats all that needs to be said
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Reviewed By: pisq On: October 31, 2007 13:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter I re-read the whole story and it was good that I did, otherwise my Dory-like memory wouldn't have remembered the whole military deal lol! Great continuation! Keep it up
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Reviewed By: aaralyn On: October 26, 2007 18:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The suspense is ridiculous. update soon please! Amazing chapter btw
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Reviewed By: backdoor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 19:30 PDT
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can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 10:29 PDT
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OMG! Hes ohn his way to find his Bulma! Yeah! I wonder what will happen when he sees Bulma for the first time since the've been seperated and how Bulma will react once she sees Vegeta. I cant wait for the sow down to come. Awesome chapter and cant wait for the next one to come out! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 10:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yes! Yes! Yes! Vegeta is going to kick ass! Another great chapter, thank you!
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: October 22, 2007 17:03 PDT
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this chapter was great! i loved it! please update soon! i can't wait to see what happens next with vegeta and bulma reuniting!!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: October 21, 2007 21:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! The queen bitch of all DBZ Fanfiction is back! Loved the update. Veggie can be very naughty can't he? I'm so glad your still writing. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: ravenreux. nli On: October 21, 2007 20:07 PDT
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Ah, I simply love every word that you write. Every chapter is positively enthralling and the exploration into each character's psyche is vividly eloquent. The flashback was a great way of contrasting the two, and the fact that Vegeta can still be darkly terrifying without the mass murder was amazing. Thanks so much for sharin'! Reux
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Reviewed By: little rini On: October 21, 2007 07:22 PDT
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I really like your stories, but your updates are so rare. :( PLEASE write more?
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 15:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fucking greatest fanfic. love it
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