| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Title: Epic!
Reviewed By: Twilis On: February 20, 2009 23:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sir/madam are a brilliant writer. You could do this for a living. You kept both of them in character with a mastery I have no seen in many years as a writer. You are a master at creating sexual tension like none I've ever seen. I'm very happy that you didn't do the typical 'sex in the first chapter and nothing interesting happens' like I've seen a lot of writers do. Your vocabulary is very refreshing I must so. This is one of the best stories I've read in quite a long time. Kudos to you and its a shame you don't write these kinds of stories anymore ^_^. Sphinx
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Reviewed By: Janey On: February 09, 2009 17:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, amazing, amazing. So beautiful, the words describe feelings in scenes that strike me indescribably. Intensely sexual, but some parts leaves the heart warm and trembling. I enjoyed this fanfic so much. Thank you for writing this beautiful piece
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: Princess Buruma [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 09:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved your story. I spent entire days reading it and it was totally worth it. I enjoyed every chapter, every scene. I almost cried when they ate that girl alive, it really made me nervous; and I laughed at the Freeza/Zarbon/Cooler love thing. Vegeta and Bulma were exceptional, and the word Bitchess now even has a warm meaning to me XD I always avoided reading Alternate Universe fics, but I read yours because I knew it was very popular and I wanted to know what it was all about. And now I'm going to read more of them because I realized I can really enjoy them as well. All there's left to say is congratulations and thank you! ^^ Lab Monkey is a piece of art and I'm really glad I read it.
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Title: i'm in awe
Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 08:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're so cruel! you make me lack of sleep for almost 2weeks just because this fics! you make me me feel tired and sleepy in the morning and yet i still cannot sleep properly in the night! (Translation : oh..my...such an amazing story. it's really addictive i cannot stop read it and i must sacrifice my sleep time to read it every night until i lack of sleep).wow, it's like you built a story and character really from the basic. i'm regreting my self for not found this site and story years ago. it's absolutely the best fanfic ever!! So romantic, so touching, so cute, so Hot etc. and you're the most writer that i found so far, with a really amazing writing skill.you have such a good vocabulary, you make a clever sentence, creative story, good on description and most of all,with your style of writing, i feel like i know the characters in person. but...i feel a bit dissaponted about the ending. it's not that it wasn't good, but it feel like you tired of it so you put it on end in rush. it's feel like an open ending. like, what about Goku? is he die?why Krilin and friends didn't help Bulma when she's being captured by military, i wonder. anyway, you're really success in the description about emotion of the character. it's not boring. i always a fan of Bulma x Vegeta pairing, but i never thought i would love them so much like this. When i read a DBZ story in which Bulma X Vegeta meet a sad ending, i always read your story to heal my heart. You're my favorite author. i will read all of your anime fanfiction, i promise, mostly with an X rating ;P May i request? i liked to know the continuation about them, preferably after they have Trunks and Bra. I thought you never wrote their life after they got babies. why not make one? With your Sexy Vegeta and a good emotional description, i like to know his reaction and attitude toward their kids..of course in your point of view. Please.....
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 05:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I understand your decision to have both Vgeeta and Bulma relinquish the master slave, dominant subordinate relationship they had before, I think this last chapter had them establish themselves as equals, worthy competitors and partners. It seemed a liberation of sorts. I really enjoyed this story and I can't believe it's finished. I'm going to miss your interpreations of Bulma and Vegeta, I have been fascinated and enthralled with all of your stories.
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Title: miss you
Reviewed By: lafemmevegeta00 On: March 18, 2008 22:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for finishing this fic. It was great and the ending wasn't rushed for closure. I'll miss your writings but I definitly understand. Take care of yourself and continue loving Vegeta with me.
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Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 21:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time I read one of your fics I'm reminded of how much I love these characters. Your character development is unbelievably amazing. I think sometimes DBZ writers get so caught up in the stereotypes associated with this particular fandom that they forget to add the background psychology that makes the characters believable. Your stories and characters are so dark but it is the realism you bring to them that makes them so powerful and beautiful. You have been a great inspiration to me as a writer and seeing you finish this story has had a lot to do with remotivating me to work on my own. Thank you for yet another outstanding contribution to the B/V genre! Bravo!
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Reviewed By: Chigeon On: February 25, 2008 15:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No matter what other people say about your fics don't let it get you down. When I was in junior high I found one of your stories and been in love with them ever since. (I'm now 22 by the way.) I'm sure alot of people have been sticking with you for just as long if not longer. And to be able to do that is just amazing. B & V have been around for so long and every time I think I'm finally tired of the genre, I read one of your stories and fall in love with it all over again. I can honestly say that you are one of the great ones out there on everything. You captured us with all the emotional zest you put in your stories and the drama was perfect. Never to mushy or lame. (Anyone who thinks otherwise has probably never really been in love and doesn't know what it feels like to have the world fall from underneath them.) But enough of that. I wish you a good life, happiness and luck in all you do. After all, life is going to catch up to us sometime... P.S. I'll be keeping an eye out in case you ever itch to write a little something again. No matter the series by the way. (you know how exciting it was to find a writer who's stories I enjoyed and actually KNEW how to write?) Melissa, An extremely big fan of yours.
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Title: Thankyou
Reviewed By: carla0406 On: February 24, 2008 21:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one if the greatest stories I have read. I just want to say thank you for finishing it. Many great stories never see an ending I guess life gets in the way and we readers end up thinking...but it was going so well...I just wanted to know what happens at the end...Thank you for finishing your work and pleas try to keep writing, you rock!!!!
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Title: great work
Reviewed By: free-sprit - not logged in On: February 21, 2008 11:27 PST
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just makes me happy to read it. :) Great work. *thumbs up*
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Title: THANK YOU!
Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 10:11 PST
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Wow! Aweosme ending Tempest. That last chapter was really deep and Im really glad that you didnt end it with a lemon. The ending was perfect. Great job with this story and I just wanted to say that I enjoyed reading it as much as you em=njoyed writing it.
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: February 17, 2008 20:56 PST
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Thank you for finishing the story. I was very happy to see the update.
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 18:20 PST
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i feel you on your being tired and what not but you must also admit that for a story in which you put that much effort, it deserved a better ending, than dancing in the air. vegeta's character would've never done that no matter how much he loves bulma. i love him taking the bullets but i feel that you owe it to the story you've put 4 yrs in to had given it more and just taken your time. it's my take. as a writer it takes time but i dont feel that it would be fair to myself, the story or the fans to just come up with some ending which does not correlate with their personnas. lovely story overrall. one of the best but a horrible ending scene.
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Reviewed By: allllly On: February 12, 2008 15:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. seeing the end of this fic really got me thinking. i started reading this when i was in high school...youve been at this thing for a long time! lol. its odd thinking that this story is over. it was one of my favorites. thank you for writing it! lol.
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 09:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He needed to get out of this cage soon or he was going to start getting lustful ideas about the bathroom sink. HAHAHAHA, this had me laughing quite a bit. Loving your fic so far!!! I started from the beggining now that you're finished.
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